The forceful kiss manan ff on hold note on pg 60

Aditi jain

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Posted: 9 years ago

#191

Ohh my god

I just cnt stop laughing

😆

Their fights r amazing

Bt today the epic part was the description of a man's pain

When hit in the balls 😆

That was seriously epic dude

I just cnt stop laughing

Family jewels 🤣

Like seriously

Hats off to u yar 👏

Thoroughly enjoyed it

Plz update next part soon

N thnx for d pm

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HTA111

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Posted: 9 years ago

#192

Cool update

Nandu should have kicked him every time he tried to spoiled or mess up her things

How manik will take his revenge

Continue soon and thanks for pm

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Rita_gurung43

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Posted: 9 years ago

#193

Nice update I'm waiting for this for long time and finally you post it tq so mch 😊

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Drashtiii

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Posted: 9 years ago

#194

Awesome. .
"one result in baby while other in lack of babies" this line literally cracked me up hahaha. .
Hey but u were going to tel d meaning of gondola where it is. .

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Namrata

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Posted: 9 years ago

#195

Its awesome..

Very interesting..

Smart nandu..

Manik missed his kiss but got a kick.. Haha..

Thanks for the pm..

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lovePANI

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Posted: 9 years ago

#196

Hilarious update..

seriously yaa they r mad for each other..
won't leave a damn thing
to make each other trouble haha

Thank lord nandu kai mind sai
that chicken ghost bhaar chala giya..

They r amazing character yaa...
always cheerful..

Poor nandu manik is so bad
her hardwork n he took the credit..
For assignment CBI n FBI
Don't worry baby i'll call for u ..
ACP Pradhuyman..hahaha.
cabir too is so bad..

Damn with that teacher haha

she agree he is so
hot like hell haha..

Shameless manik...

i hope wat nandu felt for manik
while he was so close to her
i know she is not clear with that feeling ..
but i hope manik too felt that..

It was almost there for their forceful kiss but sssaah..not happened..

Haha nandu kicked him on his ball
poor manik..
😆

Aapne b kya mast halat bataai manik ki...
Aaiii..Aids bimar...

woo he is not going to leave..

thanx for pm

keep smiling n take care

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aishubangia

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Posted: 9 years ago

#197

Wow... as usual awsum... cnt stop laughing... n i mean it... dono ke pov r awsum... both don't leave a stone unturned 2 take revenge 4m each other... manik always start... nandu to bechare revenge he lete h.. hehe.. update soon

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