The forceful kiss manan ff on hold note on pg 60 - Page 18

Hey
Just superbly awsmstic update
I mean u r such a cuttipie
How awsm u wrote
U r such a lovely person yr
U not only make us laugh our heart out bt u can actually make us fall frm chair or bed while laughing ...
I mean to say u r dat good
Kaha se sochte ho aap ye one liners and names ... U gave to manik and nandu...
And situations ohhh god they r just awsm
I can imagine how much effort u put to write all..
Sooo thank you so much for doing so much for us... :)
Keep smiling
Stay blessed :) ;)

Originally posted by: aadhya_cute

😆hilarious

It's like poetry on ghosts hahah

U r one single piece aashna...one in million

Aww manan eye lock...but very less manan

Bechari nandu manbir made her cry very much

I didn't like it...atleast manik should feel bad for making her cry so much

But nandu last wish omg this girl is impossible hahah

Where u get such weird ideas ha-ha u must be googled them😆

Waiting for devil

you didn't commented on devils adhe me chodke bhag gyi kya muje or ye puri ff hi aise hogi total crazy chill nandu ko bhi change you know na i don't like naive nandu i always love bold or strong nandu so same for this one also but a different total roller coaster ride i must say but a enjoying one so chill and enjoy the story or is br tune devils pr comment nh kia na toh i am going to block you

Originally posted by: cmamona

Hey
Just superbly awsmstic update
I mean u r such a cuttipie
How awsm u wrote
U r such a lovely person yr
U not only make us laugh our heart out bt u can actually make us fall frm chair or bed while laughing ...
I mean to say u r dat good
Kaha se sochte ho aap ye one liners and names ... U gave to manik and nandu...
And situations ohhh god they r just awsm
I can imagine how much effort u put to write all..
Sooo thank you so much for doing so much for us... :)
Keep smiling
Stay blessed :) ;)

lol i must say my gutter mind comedy is behind all this ff will be the most entertaining one full of comedy fights romance friendship drama action but no tears at all devils me ro lo isme hasne ka quota pura so again a roller coaster ride seat belt bandh lo

Originally posted by: shoana

sorry for commenting late
actually i commented the day when i got pm
but don't know why it didn't got posted😔
coming to the update...
it was really hilarious🤣🤣
seriously...how could you get such ideas
theories of ghost and manbir😆
nandini is too naive
poor girl again got tricked by manbir 😆
shadow bhoot...
bhukkad cabir...😆the way he attacked cupcakes😆
nandini thinking of treating bullies🤣
loved manan's small moment😊
your sense of humor is just amazing..😊
loved the update
thanks for the pm
please continue soon

i myself don't know from where i got this weird ideas crazy i am i know uff wese let it be and yes there will be the special bond of our manbir bcz i love them so much and yes nandu ko bhi change karte hai chill i don't like naive nandini she will be in bold and strong character so don't worry enjoy story this story will be the entertaining one

Lol
Theories were amazing really
Loved it
Thnk u for pm

ambuja sement main milawat hogayi...hehehehe...hilarious part...and my best part when innocent nandu was scarced of ghost of chicken...hahaha just luved ur update...u hav the best sense of humor of the forum...still laughing..hahahahahahaha

HAHAHA HAHAHA SUPER HILARIOUS STORY SUPER FUNNY YR ...
mera to pet dukh rha h has has k ...last ghost part was superb... mind blowing, amazing ... fantastic, fabulous super funny n hilarious ...

Bichari nandini Kitna Dar gyi thi... n seriously ur way of writing is Awsm I mean itna funny bhi koi likhta h ...
U know while I was reading ur story n was laughing like a mad girl ... my mom said me only one line LAGTA H MENTAL HOSPITAL CHOD K AANA PADEGA ...
yr seriously update was super funny ...
loved it totally...
update soon...
I m new reader ...
n plz pm me from next Tim...

seriously this was the best ff

Hi Aashana...how are you

Wowww
Wowww
Such an amazing and different story yr


Its sooo damn funny yr



Thanks for such a wonderful post


really enjoyed it

Nandu, manbir hehehe

OMG. Sooo funny ye

I hope its a romantic and full of comedy story.

And not dark one
one


Btw i think manik ne nandu ki non veg burger nahi diya hoga
He can't be so mean

Must be a prnk


Its Jus a guess
Plz tell am i right dear


U potray ur pov sooo fabulously yr


Waiting for next part dear.


Pm me next part


pretty pretty please




with loads of wishes


vidhi ⭐️