The forceful kiss manan ff on hold note on pg 60

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simran_walia

@simran_walia

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#201

Wow that was awesome!!!!!

Poor manik ...

Amazing update

Waiting for the next chapter eagerly!

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Vidhiarora1

@Vidhiarora1

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#202

Wowww

Hellarous

Sooo damn funny yr

It was awesome dear

Keep it up

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sweet_kaur

@sweet_kaur

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#203

Fab update
Loved every inch of. It
Too funny
Manan are too Gud
I love this ff
Pls don't think of ending any
Update soon !
Thanks dr for the pm!!

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megha94kumari

@megha94kumari

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#204

its gd dear... just keep writing it.. u will get gd response soon

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Yathignna Arhitha

@Yathignna

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#205

I can't tell u how much i trying control my laughing🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣

Becoz my stomach is aching like hell of laughing

I mean like seriously she kicked

Really 10/10 to Nandu

And manik pov is just too much funny.😆

Haww poor baby😆

I hope he will not get problem in family

planning.🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣

Give him Ice Pack from my side too.🤣 🤣 🤣

Continue Soon

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Vandyandy

@Vandyandy

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#206

Hi Aashna

Thks for the PM

Hahahahaha 🤣

HILLARIOUS srsly. Hehehe

Hats of to u Aashna

What an update, like u write so well n bold too

But it was Minblowing

Crazy guy Manik is

How can he steal someone else's assignment, all the hard work.

He could have taken someone's help na.

GOSH !!! Gravity in space 🤣 Aids infected . Lol

The way Manik approaches to any girl, she is bound to fall for him

But Nandu is different.

She kicked him at his most sensitive part. 😈

Now I'm worried what will be Manik's step

Wht will he do to take BADLA FROM NANDU.

WILL BE WAITING

CONT SOON

DONT THINK OF STOPPING.

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archu_asok

@archu_asok

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#207

Awesome update. Funny and hilarious.the way u scripted thz update was commendable. Don't discontinue the story. It's fabulous. Continue soon.thanks for pm.

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pnlove

@pnlove

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#208

it was just amazing man

i haven't read such story in my whole life

i laughed really hard at many scenes

the gondola rooster face off was one heck of an writing of you

nobody can do this better than you

please please please i beg you don't discontinue this

it is really very very different and good

would love to see this humorous manan's journey

so it's a request don't stop writing it

update soon

Edited by pnlove - 9 years ago

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Geet *wink*

@dreamy_doll15

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#209

OMG.. What was that I can't stop my laughing. . m laughing all the time.. oh my god that was so epic.. how can u write this much.. matlb has has k pagal hi ho jau... manik huh.. nandu ka hardwork.. credit usne le liya.. huh.. n cabir.. heheheh.. such a cid officer na.. n manik hehe.. kiss hote hote pd gyi.. kya mara end me nandu direct destination. . kyaa epic moment was jab man's pain ka description diya. hahahahaha.. bss hasti rahi. me pagal ho gyi.. @I just love it.. Itsss soo awesome .. So amazing. .just love to the core. .. Soo .fantastic. ... Keep updating. .. U r such a beautiful writer... Update soon.. Waiting for next update eagerly .. Thanks for this update . Thanks for pm too. .. Stay blessed Love Geet