MaNan Two Shot:Heat Lightening..! Final ChapA,B/PG42/21st-11 - Page 45

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Another beautiful story.

May be i am last but i want to share something.

Recently i have been to my sister's place and just exactly like mehaan my niece also likes to open the door for her father. She ll cry loud if someone else opens. And the half of her talks nobody can understand.

So u really made me happy with the identical update. thanks a lot mawara.

And is a dear request , may be i am asking for more but i really want a update on dheere dheere. It's a fan request.😕

Hey m really really really very sorry for being this late ... M extremely sorry I was out of town so I couldn't comment before ...

OMG
How come I missed this yaar??
This story of urs is beyond amazing as well as ur other storiea
Concepts also are sooolk beautiful
U have penned it so beautifully
And I guess I dnt have to tell u how much u r a great writer
Keep writing more OS
I just love them...especially when its urs
😃

ur a awsm writter
ur stories r so awsm that any one can fall in Love with your stories and the people who also doN't knw manan will also fall in love with manan
same happend with me also...its been one month since im reading ur all stories..One day my excitement knew no boundaries so first thing came in my mind was my dii actually she don't like all the ff thing so to prove her wrong i called her in midnight n got alot of scolding but then i told her about ur writting after listening to me she laughed like maniac that i called her for this thing n my anger has reached to the peak n told her give a chance n it will be worth to reading she told that yaa n i gave her my account to read ur stories n we had a bet that if she will be head over heels in love with ur stories she will give me 2 bigbars of dairymilk n guess what after 2 weeks she came in between my classes n asked the teacher for 10 min n i got my chocolates n she said that girl u r just 13 n ur choice is just amazing
13 yrs ke bacche jit gaye for u

awsm update
reaally loved the jouney

Wowww!!

Hey dear
Congratulations for ur new cuttipie
Dis story is sooo cute...
Awwwhhh I was totally flat on d cuteness of mehaan...
And d past of nandu was so harsh bt as said na all is well when ends well...
And manik is so loveable in dis...
I m so in love with ur work...
U r such a sweetheart... U write awsm stories... :)
Keep smiling
Stay blessed :)

WOW!!!
Loved it <3
Really different MaNan story...

Awesome story dear...
It was so heart touching
The way you portrayed their feelings was just amazing.. Good work 😊