MaNan Two Shot:Heat Lightening..! Final ChapA,B/PG42/21st-11 - Page 44

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Posted: 9 years ago
superb story yaar... lvd it..
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Posted: 9 years ago
its such a beautiful story... i really loved dis story...
i really enjoyed by reading...
manik was not at home for 5 days even i thought he is upset so he not came back but he was on mission its amazing...
finally he said his name to her...
n poor nandini went through a lot... i wish i could see a hard punch on harshad's face...
manik n nandini r soo cute i mean manik said his sir will fire him if he dont like her n nandini believed😆
n mehaan name was lovely...
n manik n mehaan part was awesome... n he innocently said about surprise i love it d way he said...
it was beautifull ending...


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Posted: 9 years ago
It's a wonderful love story...nandini was restless for manik and she took care of him when he returned...that's so sweet of her...she suffered a lot...
The way manik proposed nandini...it was simple yet beautifull...
Manik is not only a good husband but also a good father...
Last,mehaan!OMG...! He is so cute...so innocent...i really love this TS
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Posted: 9 years ago
she knows now what she is missing in her life
manik ...so happy to see him back in her life
they married n had kid ...lovely ending ..u nailed it once again
ty for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
Loved it. Great job. Nice different concept. Loved MaNans sweet love story.
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Posted: 9 years ago
It was different and really nice. Good work!
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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome..
Just loved Manik in this ts..
Beautifully written..
Write more
Take care
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Posted: 9 years ago
What a beautiful story, I don't know how you get such ideas but I am glad you do...loved how sweet he was to her his understanding and love and ofcourse their baby Mehan, just great...another wonderful one from you.
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Posted: 9 years ago
amazing update...
u pinned it nicely.. both feelings n state of mind...
Manik is Acp ...wow...Commissioner was too cool...
Nandini found in kota...OMG...Manik brought her at his place n gave her treatment...
flashblack was too gud...first sight love...lovely...
nandini thought manik is also same like tht kotha ppl...
nandini marriage was curse fort her...
poor nandini she is gone so much in pain...how can husband do like tht...
nandini want to knw abt manik but he is not allowed to telll his identity...
Nandini shouting is big shocked for manik n misunderstanding him...
manik left him n gone out...OMG...

2nd part was lovely n sweet...
nandini scared of loosing him...she is restless not seeing him for 3 days...
atlast manik came back but he is injured n she is afraid...
she help him for dressing...their talks while dressing d bandge was sweet...
their care for each other ..lovely...
their romance is awsum...he asked her for marriage ...tht was best part...
commissioner part was too gud...
manik is too emotional after listeng abt nandini pregency news...
Mehan was nice name...Dad n son scene was too cute...
the story was the best...
take care...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Main ne socha jane se pehle last part parh k hi jate hain... Or main ne parha bhi likin comment del ho gaya isi liye i'm late...😭
This story was really heart touching...
Loved it yar...
Or jo separation k bad pyaar hota hai na os ki bat hi alag hoti hai seriously... simply loved it...
Or main expect kr rahi thi k end p manik propose kare ga ya maximum shadi ho jae gi... that will be best ending.. But tum to cha gai... You gave this story a perfect yar... Sirf shadi nai... Mehaan and baki sab... a complete happy family se happy ending di... Love you for this...

Firstly to after long Manik came back... Nandini ko bhi realise ho gaya... And she pleaded for Manik's comeback... awww
Chalo uniform se sare answers to mile... pata nai kia kia soch rahi thi😆
Nandini ki dant parh rahi hai... Manik kyun chor k gae the ose akaila??😡
Waise I really like this side of Manik... Romantic Wali...😳
"Meri trf dekho" hayee... that would be so cute na... I can imagine all this...
And he wants hug now?? Pehle kia soya howa tha.. Itna wait krwaya humain bhi... And Nandini crashed...😳
And see promises bhi shuru ho gae... Ab nai chor k jae ga apni Nandu ko...😉
It's Manik... Manik... 😳
Manik ne sab bata diya... Ab confusion door ho gai??
And cheek kiss... I always love it yaar... And the way he kissed her cheek... so lightly... And the situation...😳
5 days pehle jo lar rahe the... Aj totally lost in their romance... opening up what's in their hearts...
Or Nandini ne red tomamto to hona hi tha.. How is it possible k ose koi effect na ho... haina??
And now comes my favourite part... "apne hath se khilao gi.." dil bahr a gaya yar... itni sweetness and love...
Imagine kr k kuch kuch hota hai😆
And the way he pleaded and humari all time blushing Nandu...
Or sirf Nandu to nai khilae gi na.. Manik bhi to apne hath se khilae ga...😳
Oho... Manik to full romantic mood main hai... shirt bhi nai lane di ose..
Full chipak gaya😆
"When you are close to me then nothing is hurting" 😳😳😳
So akaile akaile ghoom rahe hain.. maze kr rahe hain.. promises bhi ho gae... ghr jaldi ane k😳
Nandini was having so much inside her na...
And Manik is such a gentleman " do you trust me?"
Or yahan to love session bhi😲
Song was nice..
And proposal a gaya... I was waiting for this in the whole update...
"Shadi karo gi mujh se"😳 lucky Nandini...
I know vo sab se happy ho gi at that time...😉
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Bas ab or main nai likh sakti... dobara type krna koi asan kam hai??😡
Onki married life bhi bohat achi thi or mehaan to cutie pie... I love him...
Sorry late ho gai.. But lamba krna tha isi liye...
Hope you don't mind

At last... hatts off
Take care
Stay blessed
Love
Dua..

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