MaNan Two Shot:Heat Lightening..! Final ChapA,B/PG42/21st-11

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@dreamy_doll15

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#101

wow.. that was awesome. . just mindblowing. .. acp manik.. ohh ... bechari nandu kitnaa kuch tolerate kiyaa h usne.. that's soo awesome. .. n that harshad bloody creepo... kabhi shi nhi ho skta.. but I just love ur each n every story. that has a very great potential. .. it has magnificent. .. continue soon. .. vaise to I just love thiss to the core... itsss really awesome. waiting for next eagerly impatiently .. ho ske to update soon.. Thanks for this. Stay blessed... Love Geet. .

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shoana

@shoana

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#102

Awesome update mawara👏
ACP manik ko ishq hogaya😆
nandini's story is really heart wrenching...
she got married to a person who sold her😔😒
feeling sad for her
but why manik is not talking to her properly😕
means he would have told her about himself😕
but seriously i'm in love with this story...😳
they both share different kind of bond...😊
plzz do continue soon
can't wait to know what happens next😕

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lovemylyf

@lovemylyf

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Posted: 9 years ago

#103

wow..totally amazing..
update the next part please..
u r ryt they fight like fools..
he can tell her about himself to her na.. what's the big deal in it..
nandini's story is really touched my heart..

Edited by lovemylyf - 9 years ago