MaNan Two Shot:Heat Lightening..! Final ChapA,B/PG42/21st-11

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sanikagokhale

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Posted: 9 years ago

#91

Beautifully written!👏👏

Manik's character is so interesting!

I loved the way you have penned it!👏

Please continue soon..

Take care😃

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Shanhavi

@shanhavi_manan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#92

Loved the update di

Apki har story awesome hoti hai

Aur yeh bhi hai

Love Manik and nandini equation

That bloody harshad kabhi nah I sudher Sakta

I toh literally hate him

Anyways I am in love with ur stories

Plz update nxt part tonight

Plz plz plz...

And plz update dheere dheere also

Continue soon

Shanhavi

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Tanu_9090

@Tanu_9090

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Posted: 9 years ago

#93

Awesome ...Just no words u actually wrute beautiful yaar if i ever meet u boss standing ovasion to pkka hai... SALUTE !!!
just loved it from the bottom of my heart <3
u are marvaleous mawara... the connections and love atmoshere u create is just extraordinary beyond reality.. yeah actually i am a big jealous of ur characters cause i dont hv someone so loving in my life
anyways chuck my bakwass it was way beyond beautifull

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neetimehta

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Posted: 9 years ago

#94

Awesome

i also loving this story

mindblowing

y manik is stoping himself for confessing his love

bata deta yar nandu ko thodi akal aati aur ladti ni

please pm me when u update

amazing story

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suraiya77

@suraiya77

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Posted: 9 years ago

#95

Awesome
amazin'
fantastic
fabulous
mindblowing
excellent
outstanding chapter
loved it
plz post the next chapter today

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tanishab

@tanishab

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Posted: 9 years ago

#96

Awesome...i have no words to describe..it's amazing..plz update next tonight

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Asha_25

@Asha_25

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Posted: 9 years ago

#97

Wow.
it's Amazing.
beautifully Written.
nice concept.
Manik is ACP
ALIYA is NURSE
so Commissioner cabir tha kya.
plzzz plzzz next Update jaldi dena.
Thank you so much for beautiful story.