MaNan Two Shot:Heat Lightening..! Final ChapA,B/PG42/21st-11

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Angel

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Posted: 9 years ago

#111

Awsm cncpt...u r d bst...its mind blwng uost...cng wait fr nxt prt..plzzz jldi dena

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Dhingli44

@Dhingli44

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Posted: 9 years ago

#112

Even I love this story dii 😃
Missed u but with this one...u are back.
Nandini ka frustration is justified...I guess.
Manik sachi bohot caring hai...u have shown him as someone who has lot of patience.
Mujhmein toh na hai...patience 😆
Fab update.
Thanks for the PM
Haan Haan...aaj raat ho sake toh please 😊

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ArSha_ManNan

@ArSha_ManNan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#113

I am supposed to study for tmrw's exam bt i am reading ur story...
It is amazing...
So manik had seen nandu when she was abt to be married to harshad yikes...
He sold her omg...
Manik rescued her... Voh ishq karta hai hayee...
Dono ki frustration ek dusre par ...
Aage kya hoga... Update soon
Thnkz 4 the pm

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@ps_angel

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Posted: 9 years ago

#114

o yrrr

i gt no wrds to describe

soo soo intense n full of emotions😳

manik is a sweetheart😃

nandini apni jgh sai h

use kuch smj ni aa ra

plss plsss

aaj hi update krdo

zadaa intzaaar mt krao

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eoincash

@eoincash

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Posted: 9 years ago

#115

different concept

loved it

Poor nandhu

Manik slapped her

Sorry for both of them

totally excellent

Thanks for pm

Stay blessed

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Adeeba

@Aadee04

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Posted: 9 years ago

#116

Why is Manik always such a sweetheart ?
Why every Manik of every story is so selfless !
Damn
This Manik character is etched in our hearts forever.

And this has been a great story .
Thank you
-God bless

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1anukriti

@1anukriti

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Posted: 9 years ago

#117

really fantastic story...i am totally in love with the concept...if possible do update tonght..really very amazing writing...superb work

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Sutapa Sarbabhom

@sutapasarbabhom

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Posted: 9 years ago

#118

Asom stry

Manik is acp

Its treat to read

Nandini is in pain

Why he is not disclose his identity

Pl updt soon

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vani

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Posted: 9 years ago

#119

Your a fabulous writer, like from where do get such ideas .. Awesome story ... Nandu has suffered so much .. Waiting for the next part .. I am sure it's going to be rocking ..Manik as ACP is very interesting .. Harshad always remains a jerk .. Continue soon .. Super brilliant update ..