MaNan Two Shot:Heat Lightening..! Final ChapA,B/PG42/21st-11

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Mawara_Ejaz

@Mawara_Ejaz

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 9 years ago

#121

Originally posted by: _Samthanian_
I am not going to talk to uh dida...

Alaaay mela baby pari ap dida nay kya kiya that u r so gusa?😭

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Swarna

@PARTH11391

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#122

WOW.!! It is Awesome.!
This is so beautiful and different.!!
I loveddd it so much.!
But nandu a pros.??!! I feel bad.!
And ACP MANIK... Damn.thats so cool.!
Pls update the next part..!
LOL.!
Swarna

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Inaya

@Cute_Inaya

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#123

Hey dear...

Update was awesome... superb...

Awww acp manik... love at first side...

Poor nandini suffered alot...

When manik read her diary ... that scene was amazing...

U did a fab job dear... i really really like ur update...

commendable work dear... too good...

Plz continue soon. Waiting for next part...

Keep it up... keep smiling...

stay blessed...

lots of love...

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Yathignna Arhitha

@Yathignna

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#124

It's very emotional and I'm in tears when I complete it
I imagined Manik in police dress and he is awesome
Story is very interesting cont soon
Excited for next part

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tree63

@tree63

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#125

First of all thank u so much for sending me the PM otherwise I would never have come across this TS. It's so beautiful...i wonder how I missed on it.
A new concept and must say a nice one
Very heart touching update
I loved Manik as ACP and more than that as a calm person.
All the emotions that u have portrayed is beautiful
I could feel their pain and u made me cry girl 😭

And I literally beg u please please please update it tonight itself. Can't wait to know what will happen next
Please update soon

And once again thank u for this beautiful work of urs
God bless you and may u always present such amazing works

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Garima

@Luving_Gari

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#126

Originally posted by: Mawara_Ejaz

Alaaay mela baby pari ap dida nay kya kiya that u r so gusa?😭

Uh wrote a TS and idnt told me about it... Mujhe first hona thaa commemt karne mai... 😭

PS- Is it a adult TS???

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Fatima

@Fatima_mir

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#127

I haven't read yettt

But I know the story... Mere book mein thy is title ki 😉🤣

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muskan

@muskancute

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#128

Wooww...Appi...that was Amazing...Speechless...u made me cry...That was sooo Awsome OS...The concept was Mindblowing...Love it...Woow ACP...Manik...cool...Manik And Commisioner Talk...Awsome...Then Nandini And Manik scene Amazing...Hmmm..!! To Manik ne Nandini ko pehle dekha hua hai...Nice...Then Nandu's Story...Soo emotional...Heart touching...Super se uper...Then There Fight...OMG..!! They both are in love...lr dono ko ehsas hi nhi hai us baat ka...Nandini Manik ko jane ke liye kehti hai or Manik chala jata hai...But I think Manik wapas ayega...Can't wait for next update...plzzz Appi...Ajj hi kardo...plzzz...

THANKS FOR PM...

PLZZZ CONT SOON...APII PLZZZ...EXICTED TO READ MORE