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Posted: 9 years ago
chapter 5B:

nandini suddenly got an important call and went to attend it tanking ayyappa for saving her from maniks questions for some time.

maniks mind was just blown away with what he had heard.what did she mean by she wouldn't have left?is this all because of soha?yes nandini behave very awkwardly when soha proposed me and that song on the graduation day..,..does all of this mean we had same feelings for each other all the time and wasted this much time instead of being together...oh god i want to kill that soha now...but...uhh...i have to do something now...i cant waste any more time.thinking this manik made some phone calls!


"oh god...ab mai kya karu...abhi k liye to is phone call ne bacha diya par vapas ja kar kya bolu?...aur to aur vo soha bhi...uhh...ayyappa help me please"nandini prayed looking heavenwards and gathered all her courage and went towards were they were standing earlier but she couldnot find him."manik...manik...kaha ho tum?"she shouted looking for him all around."kahi gussa ho kar chala to nai gaya?...oh no...aab!"she thought looking all around.then she saw a glass bottle lying on the sand at a distance which had a scroll in it and was tied with a ribbon.she picked it up and carefully took it out and read the letter



dear nandini

we both met in collage...like people have love at first sight we became enemies at first sight we fought with each other hated each other but then i found out that you understood me so well and moreover you trusted me and never judged me in what i did...you always supported me and then we became best friends we enjoyed a lot had a great time...fought with each other teased each other protected each other and became each others support system...everything was going fine when suddenly one day after graduation you left.. after you left and i lost all the connections with you i tried to find you so much but alas i could not find you i though that i lost you forever but then today i met you again and i was so happy and shocked at that time and then we met here and you told me that you left because of soha...i was so shocked she was just a fake girlfriend i wish you could have talked to me or i wish i would have even told you this before but alas what has happened has happened lets start fresh from today from now!you know nandini why i chose this place as this is our favorite hangout place where we have so many memories together and i thought to celebrate the most beautiful memory of our life here...

all of this was written in the letter and nandini had tears by now in her eyes suddenly she heard maniks voice she saw manik was standing in front of her and they were standing in between heart made up of all the candles with stars and fireflies glowing above them the scene was simply magical! maniks voice brought her back from her thoughts..



nandini i always thought that you were perfect for me you understood me in ways that no one else could sure i was all ok before you came into my life but you brought a spark into my life and made me the most happiest person in this world...
nandini was all shocked and happy hearing all this before she could analyse anything she saw that manik was on his knees


you remember nandini once i told you that i would never go on knees in front of any girl? guess what i was wrong nandini here i am on my knees in front of you...
nandini I LOVE YOU...yes i do from our very first meet i fell in love with you and with time this love has grown more and more even this distance and time of two years made my love more strong.
nandini will you marry me?saying this he took out a shell in which there was a ring!



nandini was shocked surprised happy and speechless she never in her wildest dreams thought that manik will propose her like that...
"nandini kuch to bolo my legs are paining aise bethe bethe"said maink with a cute pout.
nandini laughed at his antics and nodded her head in yes she was so happy that she was not able to say anything and manik knew what was going inside her mind and heart then manik made her wear the ring and she hugged him tightly he happily wrapped his protective arms around her and they both were hugging each other under the stars and the fireflies.


THE END
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so sorry for such a bad update but i did not have time and i did not want to keep this story on hold so i wrote some crap...but that's it i can't help it...and thank you so much for those who liked commented and even read the story...thank you so much :*
Edited by manan_rocks - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
It wasn't crap dear,
it was wonderful.
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Posted: 9 years ago
It's a happy ending dear...
Loved d story...
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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome dear
why do you say that its a crap its awesome
im little sad that u end this
but thanks for this amazing story
thanks for pm

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Posted: 9 years ago
Beautifull
Wonderfull update
Thnks for pm me
Enjoyed a lot
Lovd it
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow...that was nice
Finally the confession!
It was a great fs
Do wite more:)
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Posted: 9 years ago
wow
that was a great fs
nice confession
loved it
write more!
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Posted: 9 years ago
read all parts in one go dear.. Such an amazing story yaar. . I loved ur way of writing...i have sent U buddy request...plz accept it and send me pm for ur further stories...im eagerly waiting to read further from U...
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Posted: 9 years ago
You Know what... even I don't know ur name.. but ur story really was awesome. .. actually. . bs suddenly mil gyi.. to one go me sari pd li. I really like this.. story amazing. writing amazing. over all sb awesome tha... soo I luv it n abt ending. itsss not crap. its a beautiful happy ending. I love this. .bff..comes lover ho hi gye. more write like this... Love Geet
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Posted: 9 years ago
Very nice.
Read all parts in a go.
Liked it completely.
Do write more like this.

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