MaNan FS chapter 5 B UPDATED ||COMPLETED||

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chapter 1
a black mercedes stopped in front of a big hospital.a small boy got down from the car started running towards the gate of the hospital.then the door flung open once again and stepped out of the car a very handsome and dashing manik mallhotra.




he saw the kid running and shouted "careful sameer stop running you'll hurt yourself"."chachu i am fine come fast na..."replied sameer turning back towards his chachu.manik came towards him and picked him up in his arms and the went inside the hospital."we have an appointment for sameer mallhotra"said manik to the receptionist.but the receptionist was busy ogling at the lead singer of famous fab 5 and CEO of malltorta industries the one and only manik mallhotra."chachu ye bhi aap pe flat ho gayi"whispered sameer naughtily in maiks ear."sameer!"manik warned him to which he giggled."excuse me i asked you something"said maink with his infamous smirk.this brought the receptionist back from her lala land and she checked "room number 204 sir"and replied embarrassed."thank you young lady"said manik charmingly and the receptionist was again back to her lala land.
soon manik and sameer were standing infront of room number 204.manik knocked the door."come in"said a voice from inside.manik was mesmerized listening to the voice."can it be her...but how can it be possible?"chachu chalo na" said sameer lightly pulling maniks pant."ha"said manik pushing all his thoughts away and opened the door.
as they entered they saw a girl facing her back towards them."excuse me doctor"said sameer.and she turned towards them.she was wearing doctors coat over her dress and her hair was tied in a messy bun with some of the hair strands falling loosely on her face.manik was shocked to see her and so was she."nandini"manik whispered softly.both manik and nandini were looking at each other while little sameer was looking at manika and nandini simultaneously."chachu kya hua"said sammer to manik which broke manan's eyelock."we are here for sameer malhotras check up."said maink breaking the silence."yes please have a seat...so what is the problem?"nandini asked sitting on the opposite side of the table in her chair."nothing he had been sick for a while but now he is fine we are here for his regular checkup."said manik."so come sameer let me check"said nandini with a smile to sameer.all the while nandini was checking sameer manik was busy admiring her."she has become more beautiful now...her smile is still the same."thought manik looking at nandini and sameer was observing all this."sameer is perfectly fine and healthy"said nandini smiling and looking at manik.just as manik was about to say something the nurse entered and informed nandini about an urgent case."yes i am coming"said nandini standing form her chair and grabbing something from her desk."nandini we need to talk"said manik to her and they both had a small eyelock."yes manik we will but after sometime i have an urgent case right now"said nandini as she also wanted to talk to him for so long."no problem we will meet at our old place at sharp 6pm dont be late. "said manik."ok bye...bye sameer"said nandini.manik kept staring at the door from where she went."chachu vo gayi"said sameer naughtly to which manik only hmmed."chachu lagta ha app iss baar aap unpe flat ho gaye."said sameer naughtly with a smirk."hmm"said manik still looking at the the door"what!"he said supprised as he realised wht sameer had said."you.."before manik could say anything sameer ran out of the door."wait..."said maik and went behing sameer and caught him befor he could run any further."you have become very naughty"said manik picking him up in his arms."aap se hi to seekha hai chachu"said sameer and both started laughing and sat in the car and the car zoomed off.




*Index*

Chapter 1--above
chapter 2--pg 2
chapter 3--pg 5
Chapter 4A--pg 12
Chapter 4B--pg 16
Chapter 4C--pg 18
Chapter 5A--pg 20
Chapter 5B--pg 23.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey dear... Well I don't know your name.. All thanks to you...coz you didn't gave introduction of yours and your story also... I must say I'm totally impressed by your this attitude... Coz you're not expecting anything from your readers... Its so unlike others.. But plss do me a favor of knowing you and little about your story too...then only we can connect with it... Nice concept.. Bring it on... A warm welcome from my side... Continue soon... Take care stay blessed
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Nice start... Do continue soon 😊
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Originally posted by: Snehasn53

Hey dear... Well I don't know your name.. All thanks to you...coz you didn't gave introduction of yours and your story also... I must say I'm totally impressed by your this attitude... Coz you're not expecting anything from your readers... Its so unlike others.. But plss do me a favor of knowing you and little about your story too...then only we can connect with it... Nice concept.. Bring it on... A warm welcome from my side... Continue soon... Take care stay blessed


Thank you for your warm welcome...and yeah as per your whish i will give my as well as my story's intro...thank you for your suggetion(i hope i spelled it correct)

Coming to the attitude thing...trust me me to paida hi attitude k sath hui thi😉😆...just kidding...sometimes not expecting is a better option.
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Awesome update lovely manan knows each other waiting to know what happen to them.
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plz cont soon...pm me also
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awesome update...

loved it so much...

manik and sameer's bonding is really cute...

the little boy is just full of teasing...reminds me of cabir...

wondering what manan's past was...

can't wait to see what happens next...

keep up the good work and continue soon...

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Originally posted by: sharon.babu

awesome update...

loved it so much...

manik and sameer's bonding is really cute...

the little boy is just full of teasing...reminds me of cabir...

wondering what manan's past was...

can't wait to see what happens next...

keep up the good work and continue soon...


Thank you...you will know soon why sameer resembles cabir.

P.S: i miss cabir
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It's wonderful
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chapter 2

nandini had just finished 3 cases back to back and was now going to her cabin.sighing she sat on her chair.it had been a long day for her there were so much work and she met manik again.she never thought she will but deep down somewhere she knew that they will meet again.she leaned back against her chair and closed her eyes going back to her memory lane.

flashback:
Nandini's POV:

manik and i were best friends in college.we were inseparable we laughed together cried together ate drank did everything together.manik was always handsome and had a great aura that attracted people towards him.girls always use to throw them on him and he actually enjoyed all this.i,navya and abhimanyu were in the medical dept where as manik ,cabir,alya,mukti,dhruv were in the music dept.they had a band called as fab 5 all of them were damn talented and got very famous and they diserved it.I always had a passion for singing.And i loved manik yes i always did and i still do and one week before we all were going to graduate i gathered all my courage to tell him my feeling i thought to tell him how much i love him and deep inside me i thought he had the same feelings for me but sadly that was not true.i saw manik and soha together...soha had proposed manik and he accepted it.my heart broke in to million peices when i saw this.but then soha was perfect for manik she was a total style diva beautiful and boys used to dye for her.they both looked like a perfect couple.i decided i will never ever come between them.we all graduated and on the last day i sang a song for manik i could not hold back my feeling so i let it flow.
end of pov.

nandini went to the stage,everyone was clapping and cheering for her she took the guitar and started strumming.



You're on the phone with your girlfriend
She's upset, she's going off about something that you said
'Cause she doesn't get your humor like I do.
I'm in the room, it's a typical Tuesday night.
I'm listening to the kind of music she doesn't like.
And she'll never know your story like I do.

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she remembered soha used to fight with manik on some silly thing that he said
she never understood manik properly.
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But she wears short skirts
I wear t-shirts
She's cheer captain
And I'm on the bleachers
Dreaming about the day when you wake up and find
That what you're looking for has been here the whole time.

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nandini remembered how soha used to wear all short skirts and she never wore shuch type of dresses.
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If you could see
That I'm the one
Who understands you.
Been here all along.
So, why can't you see
You belong with me,
You belong with me.

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she sang those lines looking straight into maniks eyes who was stranding with all of her friends in the crowd.
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Walk in the streets with you in your worn out jeans
I can't help thinking this is how it ought to be.
Laughing on a park bench thinking to myself,
"Hey, isn't this easy?"
And you've got a smile
That could light up this whole town.
I haven't seen it in a while
Since she brought you down.
You say you're fine I know you better than that.
Hey, what you doing with a girl like that?

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she remembered how she made him smile all the time and only she could calm him down when he was angry.sometimes she thought that manik deserved better than soha.
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She wears high heels,
I wear sneakers.
She's cheer captain,
And I'm on the bleachers.
Dreaming about the day when you wake up and find
That what you're looking for has been here the whole time.

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nandini closed her eyes thinking about all the beautiful memories with manik.
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Can't you see
That I'm the one
Who understands you?
Been here all along.
So, why can't you see
You belong with me.
Have you ever thought just maybe
You belong with me?
You belong with me.

nandini finished the song and everyone cheered for her and congratulated her for a great performance.she could clearly see the confusion in maniks eyes she so wanted to go and tell him that she loved him but then her eyes fell on manik's and soha's intertwined hands and she looked away.



After the graduation and promising everyone to be in touch nandini went to USA she just could not see manik and soha together so she left.it had been 2 years since she left.she had been in contact with everyone including manik for one year and last month the hospital where she worked in USA transferred from USA to India.she was getting a higher pay and good facilities so she could not say no to them.and again in Mumbai she bumped into manik.

end of flashback.

she opened her eyes when she felt her cheeks wet...she had been crying...she wiped her tears and looked at her watch it said 4 pm.she went home and got ready as she had to go to meet manik at 6pm.
Edited by manan_rocks - 9 years ago

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