A love story turns dark chapter 18(d) up note also plz read

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sharon.babu

@sharon.babu

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Posted: 9 years ago

#81

awesome update...

loved it so much...

so sad to see manan broken like this...

hating the kuranas right now...

hop manik and cabir find nandu...

can't wait to see what happens next...

keep up the good work and continue soon...

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nanoNikki

@nanoNikki

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Posted: 9 years ago

#82

Hey nic concept... Continue soon... Awesome concept... Keep updating Be happy... Keep smiling... Take care... God bless u... 😊

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nanoNikki

@nanoNikki

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Posted: 9 years ago

#83

Very emotional ...looking forward... For manan meet... How... Manik will find nandu... N how cabir is sure that... Nandu is alive...

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aishamemon1994

@aishamemon1994

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Posted: 9 years ago

#84

note guyz for ppl who had responded quite thank yew for response thanks guyz

chapter 15

precap:-annoucement of cabir

cabir:-its a trap our nandu is alive het up stop these bloody tears u lost dumb dont be sure cause what we saw is not true i have seen it open ur eyea come out of ur world u dumbstruck

manik:-tu yeh kya bol ra hai cabir hosh main aa kya hogya esa q bol ra hai tu ... keh ra hai nandu zinda hai...meri nandu zinda hai... tu ...tu saxh bol ra hai na

cabir:- han q k ye jo bhi dikhaya gya its a bloody trap

manik:-still stammering and tearz dripping along how. ...can u be so...so sure

cabir:-jab hm logon ne wo letter parha tha tu letter main ghum hogya pr us saale jhute mama ko mainey dekha he was a jerk he was smirking

cabir :-
shit this jerk is playing but why why he come he doing this than i saw a person hiding behi d a tree which shook me to the core cause was smiling i prefered cause his cheecks were streched and a camera was i his hands he was capturing all this manik our nandu is badly in trouble we have ro save her before anything could happen we have to do something

in b/w whole telling session maniks tears were dried at their route and his brows were cringed eyes werespitring fire like he is gonna set ghis world on a fire just finding his nandu and that moment our pure soul was crying inside he was crying blameing himself this happens all because of him he was unable to take the time behind if he could he had changed it before its gets more worst but he consold himself and determined i will rip the head of aperson who made my nandu to suffer he was lost in in hus thoughts cabir started to shook and what he saw all his buddies who was hiding and came out heard what he said all leftwith this determination zthe person who is behind this will pay hard and
cabir's pov
jo bi in dono ko alag krra hai maa qasam usko esi saza dunga ke uski maa nani pura phichla khandan yaad dila dunga itna majbur krdunga usse ke jahan se aya hai wahen jane ki dua mange ga ek br pta chal jae hai kon bus pta chale sallon ko unke hi uthae ge iss qadam pe rone ki majbur na kiya mera naam bhi cabir nae aur mere behn aur jigri yaar ko mila na diya to mera naam bhi cabir hai he was saying like he was vowing to make them one

on the other hand

a girl wass regretting to go alone without informing girl was regretting to go ahead and trust the person and was sayingiam sorry manik i failed i failed i ruined ...she cried hard and hard wven sky who was watching this shed his tears shiw up the world a pure soul is sobbing whuch is hardly capable to handle ownself by sheddingtears along manik asve me plz manik before they go to the final extent plz save me manik domt trust them im not dead manik she shouted manik!!!!!!!!!!!!! hearing thus the peraon who was happy boiled with anger ye nae manegi aj isko Sachi btaan parega being with us is good better than crying for that prrson
he entered
person:-sweetie stp this it is doing nothing just hurting and dont make me to show what extent i can go
nandu:- just shut the heck up you want me na u wont be capable of getting me get lost maddy ur at the end just remember and hearing this witha fraction her hair were been pulled she got two tight slaps and heard
maddy:-dont u dare inatigate me cutie i not aryaman got that i can do it right now got it dont instigate me for sure samjh agya agar nae to bitha le ke ab tu hogi to hamari behtar hai jaldi bithale aur bnja wrna kuxh din mai mrzi yan zabardasti you will be ours geg it in your pea sizze brain and he leftbut he was unknown whta God had planned

God who wax watching everything had now come to on good to these pure souls to be one soul and two bodies and it was the mere warning but ut was the test till now of being apart what they can do for each other

here manik planned a big trap their nandu prayed only for their safety especially manik which amazedGod and he head thier prayers

catch up guyz queation arise whatntype of plan will manik be able to find or God will again come to rake another test of themthink think people and any suggestions than muat share if it wull be capable according to my next part i will also work on it ok bye guyz

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ruchi116

@ruchi116

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Posted: 9 years ago

#85

Nice update n do something k manik with gang reach there where nandu is tied n arya Maddy n soha KO sab mille acha sabak sikhaye they should be behind bars.
Update soon

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aishamemon1994

@aishamemon1994

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Posted: 9 years ago

#86

Originally posted by: ruchi116
Nice update n do something k manik with gang reach there where nandu is tied n arya Maddy n soha KO sab mille acha sabak sikhaye they should be behind bars.
Update soon

quiet good I will work on it take some from ur thought and work on it OK ...
always remain happy...
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piyasmanan

@piyasmanan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#87

plz don't make more cruel...may manik plan works...make they three losers suffer...no death

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Shanhavi

@shanhavi_manan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#88

Awesome update

I hope Manik nandini ko jaldi find kar le

And that bas***ds gets the punishment for separating manan

Anyways let's see what's Manik plan is

Continue soon

Shanhavi

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aishamemon1994

@aishamemon1994

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Posted: 9 years ago

#89

Originally posted by: shanhavi_manan
Awesome update
I hope Manik nandini ko jaldi find kar le
And that bas***ds gets the punishment for separating manan
Anyways let's see what's Manik plan is
Continue soon
Shanhavi

thanks OK I will not punish them but cabir will sure OK wait