A love story turns dark chapter 18(d) up note also plz read

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Posted: 9 years ago
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<font size="4">character sketch</font>



manik malhotra:- a guy a heartthrob every girl can go on her knees for him he love his frnds his family is his life and he have a younger sister whom he love the most alya malhotra members of fab 5


alya malhotra :- she is diva of college love his brother touch much and always had a crush on his brothers buddy but never spoken a sweet bubly girl of fab 5 band


nandani murty :- a girl who had to live a life openly, believe in ppl she had almost forgot sadness she is very chirpy beautiful at the same time hot sizzling and she had a bff abhimanyu thakr who is a fiance of her sweet+hot+sizzling+bubly sister mukti murty
part of fab5 mukti


navya naveli/dhawan :-a modern girl full on hot sizzling lady love of cabir dhawan and would be wife too and she loves him madly and frndly sisy of manik



cabir dhawan :- our own cabiraaa prankster but badly in love with his lady love and the best buddy of manik who knows him in and out part of fab 5


dhruv verdan :- a guy full of life a twin evil of our very own cabiraaa but hr kamimey ka koi na koi secret lazim hai to he had a crush on his buddy's sister our very own diva both love each other but till now doth hadn't expressed part of fab 5




aryaman and madhyam khurana khurana brother the guyz fallen for nandni tried best to get her but unsucceed so after a lot manaofy pataofy session became frnds of nandani or we say bodyguards



thanks I will love if u all will support am the new one who love to write if u will ask me I will update prologue with in half an hour if u ppl will support and plz ignore mistakes cause its from mobile

love mini mouse


index

character sketch:-pg1
chapter1&2:-page 1
chap3:-pg 2
chap4(a)(b):-pg 3
chap5(a)&(b) pg 5
chap6 pg 6
chap7 pg7
chap8 pg8
chap9 pg9
chap10(@)-pg9
chapter10(b) -pg10
chapter11 pg 10
chapter12-page11
chapter13-pg11
chapter14-pg12
chapter-15 pg 13
chapter-16- pg 14
chapter 17-pg 15
chapter 18(a) pg16. mature content
chapter 18 (b) pg 17
chapter18(C) pg 18 engagement
chapter18(d) pg18
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Interesting story plz continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice cs waiting for update
Update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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<font size="5">chapter:-1</font>


A girl sleeping hugging herself with little scary face of like she is gonna loose someone and @the same time sun is trying to peep in to wake her up but to sun's dismay girl woke up with a jerk along with a name whom she always use too of hearing from her own mouth after waking up with a jerk that wasss

<font size="3">Manikkk m.m</font>

P.O.V

wth kya tha yeah kl raat ko sote waqt I was quiet happy coz main aj space join krne waali hun bcoz mukti wahan hai aur main hamesha ki trah land up in waking up with a name chanting this m.m the dream always makes me happy sad as well bcoz I'm unable to see the face ayoo ayyiiapa what to do like seriously aiyyyiapa
that masculine figure pulling me out of my dark messy life but suddenly that Aryan always come and tap his shoulder and he vanishes appa help me na to forget that aryaan she was on verge of crying door opened bang



P.O.V ends


muku:-nanooo yr this abhi always mimics me see na I will beat him black blur

and than 2nd shout

abhi:- nano save me na see mukti is not wearing my choice yr I have asked something and she don't care

nano P.O.V

melodrama shuru


nano:-guyz guyz chill na mukti when u know it is damn NYC y cant u wear stop acting and abhi now u stop showing this creepy pupy face

yr bank u know na


nano:- I know you guyz heard mah scream of dream u came to cheer me up chill guyz I'm ok I'm gonna find this m.m soon


<font size="3">scene changes</font>




on the other hand a guy with masculine figure messy hair sleeping like baby aur apne Hi dreams main khoya hua aur a smile crept on his face suddenly vanishes and he shouts n.m


than girl came to see him what happens and as always


alya:- bahiii cmon wake up wake up today we gonna have fun and he slept and...

another moment scared him hell out a jug with full icy water fallen on his face he shouted again this time our sweetheart came and scold the owner of misery

nyo:- alya how can u do that he is your bro na we sent you to cheer him and u done thus not fair

m.m:- maa chill na you know na how she is dumbhead and inwardly have a big laugh bcoz he know what is coming

and the next moment all started to laugh bcoz coz


alya:- bahi how can you call me this she started to hit him with a pillow
he shut his eyes to get beaten next moment two three more pillows were there he understood he saw four another deamons were helping alya our very own dhruv cabir and muktiii and a sisy navya and he also started and after sometime all hot tired and started laughing and


than all hot ready coz have to leave to not leave new bieeess to pull their legss and funn in canteen and on other hand nano with abhi also left for space

all entered same time the moment mukti saw she shouted a bit loud everyone got stun after watching scenario


muku:- nanooo

na


so that's for now guyz hope u like it if not I am okay with chappals and rotten eggs hehe but guyz do tell me I should continue or not plz ur response will cheer me up plz

love
mini mouse


Edited by aishamemon1994 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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note:-guyz if u want I will continue but no cmnts I will stop coz I need some encouragement



chapter 2


after screaming she jumped on nano all came after her to nandu bcoz they all knew her through mukti and also met them at their silly parties all were happy to see her but one was just lost in her that was our dear rockstar manik

manik' P.O.V

oh God what is she looking in her casual I can't take my eyes off girl stalk me follow me here iam stalking her oh gosh even I asked mukti to make her join space coz I wanna know her compeletly I was lost when I was got disturbed by very own known cabir's cough to broke my trance becoz every person knows I love her from my child hood but my dismay she don't even noticed but than sudden thing hit mah mind everyone is oggling on her which filled fuel in my anger coz she was not looking at me

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muku:- nano u didn't informed me and u came like someone 's trying to be cool han ..



nandu:-muku u know na I'm born cool

muku:-nano how came u land up so easily in college admission and all and than she bite her tongue which make nandu suspicious and manik to throw draggers at muku


and she tried to divert the topic but what she said anger filled in our very own hulk

muku:-nandu what about your two majnus means khurana brothers hehe

and when she turn she tried to run but cabir and dhruv saved her by diverting topic and caling down the volcano

cabir :-hey nandu what's up yaar you forgot me

nandu:-bhaiya two drama queens's are enough for me jaan

cabir got teary with a broad smile but he asked with hesitation


cabir :- can I ask you something nandu

nandu :-ya bhaiya

cabir on knees with eye to eye and asked :-would u give me the owner to be your

and he turned towards manik who was confused and screamed stop cabir


manik:-cabirrr.


cabir continued while others were suppressing their giggles so

cabir:-will you give me the owners to be your big brother


that's it nandu got so much happy without watching she just pounced to hug when she said :-yes I will be honored to be ur sister

which make all to go for miniacs rolling laughter and manik to give a big shock coz nandu was hugiing him he instantly said

M.M:-no never aaa I mean aaa you wo yeh...


all again went on laughing cause including abhi except nandu all know about manik's feeling

than muku help manik to just Chuck the topic and started chit chat with fab 4 abhi

muku fab3 abhi and nano were just chatting means all was just blaberring about her and nandu while every one went towards her met her hug her chated with her lovingly but one guy was just wearing smile sheepishly appreciating himself for asking muku to ask her to join and one beautifully thing happened


that's was our dear own cabir got her lil sister and dhruv got a sweetest frnd but than sudden thing happen which always makes manik hate the scenario


cause entry of the khurana brothers ...

to be continued

guyz plz cmnt and like plz

love mini mouse
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome update n manik love her pls give nandus POV of what she feels for manik waiting for their romance.
Update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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awesome update...

loved it so much...

manik is just too cute...getting realous of cabir asking nandu to be his sister...

waiting to see how manan will discover who mm and nm really are...

can't wait to see what happens next...

keep up the good work and continue soon...

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Posted: 9 years ago
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guyz two updates will be just in 2 hours if one or two more cmnts I got na to phir 3rd be plz cmnt na
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice it is... Sweet si cute story..
Looking forward to it...keep posting 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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I really liked the parts.
New concept
Continue please.

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