A love story turns dark chapter 18(d) up note also plz read - Page 11

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: ruchi116

Nice update acchi punishment mili in sabko I think manik KO clarify karna chahiye ki wo usse pyar Marta hai n they all should go somewhere jaha nandu KO love care mile n so normal ho jaye



dekho age hota hai kya I have brilliant idea wese thanks for cmnt
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Posted: 9 years ago
Very emotional.
Finally Manik save her. I m so happy.

Waiting for next part
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Posted: 9 years ago
guyz I will give 3,4 updates only of manan so its the request of my Tweety to liberate it so here iam

chapter18(a)


nandu said manik is it ...over she was broken the person hearing it said in anger please will u come again nandani hearing this nandu who was already messed up got cleared he wants it to be over manik u r tryng to say na its ooo...verr with this tears dripped out of her eyes manik who was in anger controlled " nandu tm pagal ho kya mainey ye thori kehna tha main hmare bond ko strong krne ki bt krrae tha aur tm tm yahan over how come u even think like this tm mere bare main ye souchti ho like seriously" saying this holding his tears and stood up and left he came out went go terrace and fall on his knees and he cried he was sobbing his nandu think about him that way he was so lost in crying he didn't noticed he had put his head on someone's shoulder and that person was none other than nandani she was searching manik miniacly and she found him on his knees and saw him crying and chanting she thinks about me this way she thinks about me this way I love her I love her shit with this he was sniffing and than she saw him he is gonna fall she came forward and present her shoulder while sniffing and letting him to sob but she couldn't control she cupped his face and she went close to take his pain manik came forward he wanted to chew her lips to show her anger but ...he stopped so close like breath was touching each others face breath's were mingling but he moves back ward seeing this nandu's insecurities were increasing she said "see I told you you ... you won't be able to be same u..." before she would complete her lips were captured by his he started to kiss her he was sucking her lips firstly she didn't responded cause she felt dejection she thought it is happening cause she complained but manik rubbed her back to assure he is only hers and she belongs to him and after good five minutes hard work she responded and. chewed his lips hard like the blood gonna ooze out of his lips and he in same position took her back to the bad room



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and came over her and started to love her he was kissing her jaw bone he was giving her open mouth kisses then he came little down at her neck he gave a sweet tweet love bite on her neck to make her shiver and was sucking it to sooth the pain and he was doing the same all over the neck and nandu was just helplessly moaning and chanting his name like a prayer ma..nnn..iiikkk. and then he came at her and he started to lick her jaw bone and was turning her on and was licking it and he further moved down and there he was giving open mouth kisses on her collar bone till the cleavage and then he helped her to sit and with a fraction her top was. on floor and inner as well now her upper body was in front of him but he was just staring at her eyes which were tightly shut and face was all red and he again started to kiss down her cleavage he was kissing her upper body and also marked her upper body like he marked her neck and collar bone he bitbit sooth it lick it pinch it and turned her badly on and than he moved more down and started to lick her belly button but at the fraction reality stuck him and at the moment he stood up and cursed himself to end up doing this pure soul nandu sat and said what happen manik and he passed him shirt to her asked her to wear it without seeing her she felt dejected but his words make her fall over again for him cause he said...nandu I want to enjoy this at our wedding night when it will not be called wrong when it will be right I want to do it but with all rights and even u r not ready for it
nandu manik who said u dont have rights manik I'm ready for it
manik if u think it will give assurance to you I'm there for u than marry me day after tomorrow



taran

guyz how was this hehe I have became naughty I know but for u people

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Edited by aishamemon1994 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Amazin'
it was hot
loved it
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome
Hope her insecurity will soon vanish
Ty for bright story
Luvd it
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update by reading last part it shows that u r planning to get them married wow kitna maja aayega agar unki shadi ho jayegi.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update. Realy nice. Waaaooo Nandu wants to marry him as soon as possible. Both are suffering. Both are sad.
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: ruchi116

Awesome update by reading last part it shows that u r planning to get them married wow kitna maja aayega agar unki shadi ho jayegi.



wah girl impressed by you
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Sofiafarooq

Awesome update. Realy nice. Waaaooo Nandu wants to marry him as soon as possible. Both are suffering. Both are sad.



till night update will be there to cheer u up guyz
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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome it was to hot
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