A love story turns dark chapter 18(d) up note also plz read - Page 10

It's NYC waitng for d cnvrsn of storyline
Awsm jst waitng for d plan!!!

Originally posted by: forumlove

It's NYC waitng for d cnvrsn of storyline
Awsm jst waitng for d plan!!!

see Jo kaha I'm doing na q

u write really well dear plz now make manan meet

so happy you respond in happiness updating earlier OK guyz it will be rapid pack of these khurana's to get kicked of at their buts ok

chapter:- 16

God's next plan to make them one

manik& fab4 with navbhi were present at manik's place where one room was unknown to anyone they all came their and started to think next manik told his plan to everyone and all Got confident cause they were sure this plan won't fail it was so seen and all hified and became happy cause their dark night is over and the sun is coming up in their lives and inside all was praying for manan that

"God plz this time don't make them feel keep them one"

and saying this all left to do their perspective work
cabir to follow aryaman
dhruv to set cameras at khurana's kept unknown
aliya to keep others look they r preparing for concert with nav bhi
and manik to keep soha away from their house all messaged on their jobs

here soha was flirting their cabir kept eye on aryaman while maddy was with him continuously cabir noticed and with a very slight push set his three cameras on both which was micro camera and left & these cameras was his first step to get victory 2nd manik got close to soha and he went close but suddenly jerked her and said get lost I don't need u saying this he left turned and smirked cause he set his camera on that bitch to keep an eye on her while aliya navbhi were successful at their job and mukti done a best thing of her life spread a bubble water to slip that bitch of at her own knees
all settled this time their prays were at ears of God nor in the deaf ears this time nandu's ayyiappa helped them all were succeed at their step they were not knowing from doing this what they gonna face here aryaman and maddy both were talking very whisperingly which went noticed by cabir he at that moment take his mobile out and what he got to know it was enough to shook him to the core cause they were conversating about manan laughing on manik and gotta tired to take it slow and planned to claim her today but how can our matcho brother can let this happen without any delay he messaged to fab 4 navbhi to reach before these khurana's reach at their spot And without fraction of time manik reached first without giving a damn to anyone he entered with a bang and he without any thinking he just lay down from the stairs which laid to anly a dark and a glass room he without giving a turn to himself he broke the glass with a hard punch but the thing which was in front of him devast him to the core he saw his nandu in the worst condition which he even never dreamed of tied hard stripped clothes bites on her neck he saw the notch of the slaps he saw the scars of the tetger on her hands he didn't noticed his hands were covered with his blood he tried to rush but he fallen on his knees and shout nandu a nandu who was drifted to sleep cause if constant crying from night to morning hearing her name in a familiar voice she takes his name like a prayer ...MANIK...hub

and she opened her eyes saw him in the same condition devasted heart happy in anger but blood caught her attention she shouted without carrying her own condition ...manik... your hand is bleeding some body open me he needs me ...hearing this manik kneeled to her and went on his knees towards her opened her hand and gave her a tight hug bone crashing hug and both started sob ...I missed you... both were saying again and again and fab 4 with navbhi watching this holding their tears finally their nandu was found but they didn't expected this condition cabir's and dhruv's eyes were spitting fire cause they determined to rip the head of both the jerks and abhi the calm person was also having tough time waiting to beat them black blue
while aliya and navya have taken sicssors with them to cut that bitch hairs while mukti seen her sister fall on her knees what she was and what they found abhi hold her and she vowed to make them seek their lessons but one eye caught Aryan as well tied and helped him as well to get rid that was cabir first he punched him but soon nandani clarified he is not at fault and their the evils entered ...

saza ka waqt suggestions do Mr dya jae yan hlka black blue krke aur soha ki band bja ke chordya hae



chalo chalo suggest kro jaldi jaldi ...


mini mouse

don't kill...but give more punishment than death torture till danger than death

Originally posted by: piyasmanan

don't kill...but give more punishment than death torture till danger than death

as y say order on eyes ok

Awesome update finally he found her par nandu KO is trauma se nikalne k liye bahut time lagega but manik n his love will heal her soha k to share Baal Kat k use takla baba Dena chahiye n muklya KO use punches n slap marna chahiye n about boys to unhe bhi marna chahiye but don't kill them kyunki ye kaam to police ka hai waiting for manan romance after so long

Not death
Bt a tough punishment cry tough ki death b kuch nah ho uske samne
Torture black n blue sab
Plz update soon

sorry for being late apologies

chapter:-17

entry of the devil

buttler buttler where the hell r you buttler

buttler:- yes sir
aryaman:-ye kya ghar ki halat hai wo kahin chali to nae gae shit
buttler:- no sir some people had broken to our house
maddy:- what the fu** and you r standing here and telling us wow move
buttler :-sorry sir sorry mama but I tried but the tall men entered to that staircase room
maddy:- shit bro move move move... caught up time to do some action
soha was standing and all this and next step the buttler was catching his cheek he got a tight slap and accusations
soha:- you idiot bustard tmhara kaam staircase ko hide rakhnw ka tha get lost right now and move
buttler :- sorry mam the guy entered like storm and rushed to the room followed 3guyz & 3 girls
maddy:- shit shit shit!!!!! this can't be happening
aryaman:- before any conclusions lets move and see who they are they rushed to the room but their badluck they all were set girls with the hockey sticks while except manik with their fisted hands and without a delay they pounced two were hovered on one this way 6 distributed one guy one girl but at term of soha navya and aliya with scissors and they ties three of them both guy were unable to fight back cause if aryaman Jo pkra peeche se abhi ne while maar dhruv to maddy ko pakra cabir ne pit raha tha mukti se but mukti turned him to bend down cause she close the shutter of his production houselike for at least two months and followed by maddy screaming and bending down and cabir muku's hifi rollation of laughter and dhruv and abhi made aryaman like blood was falling like water and there soha le ball kahin se kese krte hue kahin se kese jese chuhe ne kutra ho uska moon ka make up jispe garv ho uski tabadla the most ugliest girl and captured pix in every possible pose and continued the laughter session on three now all move aside cause they heard the shout of manik who was busy pondering his consolation on nandu to make her blv he is there and poor nandu was sobbing like a kid clinging to him more and. more not able to let him go she was scared that much but manik make her to leave him and shouted
manik:- with eyes spitting fire to make nandu's condition worst ever he shouted move now my turn to show them monster
and all moved aside cause they all know arguing with him is of no use all made their way and first he pounced on aryaman who was almost over beaten he hit him hard like realy hard a punch he left unconscious and maddy who was bending got a kick again to his closed shutter to get locked for two three years haha and back all were laughing on maddy who was begging to not hit but monster has no heart and again a punch on the face with a kick at the same place and not only down's shutter closed with same upper's shutter means eyes closed in simple unconscious an the last one the devil soha was already liking damn freaking joker was scared seeing manik in this monster way was gulping saliva but mukti came and said let us ddo something manik
and there gadha dhari bheem given a tight slap at soha's face who was hell scared. cause her crime partners were lying conscious fall on her knees aliya helped her to stand and again slap and mukti said
"you bitch daughter of scoundrel u bloody cheapo u what I say u even a mother of all bitches " saying this two four slaps she got and blood starts ozzing from corner of lips and she laid unconscious down but this whole scenery of soha maddy was captured in camera by our dear cabir and he also recorded whole confession from Aryan about them and when they open their eyes very hardly they found all of them smirking and police came arrested them except manan cause when these devils were unconscious manik take scared nandu in his hands to home who was hell scared and needed some good care and love was laid to manik's place and there he made her to go and freshen up and made her to eat something and covered her with blanket and he laid beside her cause when he was taking her at home she was chanting like a kid in b/w her sobs manik u won't leave me na u won't hate me na manik don't you hate me she was ranting manik now they won't come na and manik was consoling her she needs love to be healed and he was giving him love what she needed and she slept and she has became a kid of 17 years she was that scared what people again snatch manik from her what if manik leave her cause she was 2 months escaped what if manik feel disguise go touch her and she needed the assurance but manik was unknown what is she thinking and that thoughts make her to fall in slumber in his arms and she was clinging on him more and more and all entered but he signaled to stay out and be quiet I'm coming saying this he settled nandu on bed without waking her up
and left towards fab4 and nav bhi to ask the situation all clarified everything is under control and he was sitting and suddenly he said guyz iam worried will she be same hearing this nandu who was coming to be with him she heard it and become sad and she was missing her manik romantic manik she became sad and thought I was right he don't found me same he thinks I'm dirty and tears dripped from her eyes and manik entered seeing tears she erased them but manik noticed he make her to lay his head in his lap and asked what happened nandu she said nothing manik manik understood her turmoil he make her sit and said I want to tell you something serious she got scared cause she was thinking kahin manik wo to nae she was hearing him not seeing in his eyes he was saying nandu main tm se pyaar hamesha se krte aa ra hun nandu i was always at ur side but now nandu before he complete she said is its ...over


to be continued hehehe

tata
be happy

mini mouse

Nice update acchi punishment mili in sabko I think manik KO clarify karna chahiye ki wo usse pyar Marta hai n they all should go somewhere jaha nandu KO love care mile n so normal ho jaye