A love story turns dark chapter 18(d) up note also plz read - Page 7

awesome update...

loved it so much...

hope manik reaches there on time...to save his nandu...

a bit sad that their plan back fired...

maybe they have another plan...just in case this one failed...

can't wait to see what happens next...

keep up the good work and continue soon...

note:-

guyz enough of it daily same thing happens if u are not interested speak up I will discontinue at least daily to hurt nae hoongi na this for last no cmnts and I will discontinue I thought to make it intense full by distances and show u a good but enough of it I'm gonna discontinue this as I had send pm to u all but forgetting my hard work none of u is commenting OK go ahead I am discontinuing it




sad mini mouse

note :- u didn't shown up right OK no matter it hurts I will do this ss for myself if u read than hit like and ur wish coment or not I won't force u


chapter:-11

manik freaked up and scared all along with him he was inside unhappy restless he was not at all interested in plan he was tensed cause his nandani have not arrived which was aching him but when he freaked all got tensed and asked

cabir:- kya hua yaar ese chillaya bache ki jaan lega kya
manik:- cabir I'm tensed yr nandani abhi tak nae aie wapis time dekho its 4 hours she has not arrived
now it was the thing to be tensed

mukti:- guyz I am not having good vibes
manik:- mukti atleast u all don't get down how I come handle myself guyz lets start to find her all called but not reachable and a message arrived which snatched the earth down their feets all were fallen down except one who was standing still and holding mobile in same way

on the other hand
nandu:- dekho tm sabh mjhe Jane do wrna manik kissi ko nae chorega iam telling uh
aryaman:- sweetie wo to tab ayega na jab ussey samjh ayega u r kidnapped
nandu:- kya Matlab hai tmhara
aryaman:- nandu nandu nandu u r so naive u r so innocent u think we r asses right u were playing behind us and fooling us around and we will let u
nandu:- kya Matlab hai tmhara with horrified face bit putting a brave face
aryaman:-baby we know u were planning behind us but now u not what u r here forever aww
nandu:- aryaman stop it and one thing let m clear u tm mjhw yahan zyada der nae rakh paoge manik will come and save me plus beat u black n blue
aryaman:-tch tch tch... sweetie u don't know what we have done further which will stop then to find u

madhyam enters

maddy:- bro tu akele mere bina enjoy kese karne ki souch sakta hai u know na we both love her
aryaman:- chill kr Jo krenge sath karenge

nandu was on verge of crying and holding her tears what the hell have u done to stop them

aryaman:- arey han bro tell me kaam kr dya na

maddy:-han yr mere cutie ko hasil krne ke liye main uski jaan tk le sakta hun kya naam ...wo
.. han... manik

nandu:- shut up uska naam bhi apni gandi zubaan pe mt lao u morons leave me

aryaman:- aww sweetie don't call the person morons who will make u enjoy and love u

nandu:- mjhe tmen dwkh kr tmpe taras aaa raa hai ek br manik ko pta lagne do he was ill show u not to touch his shining star but messing with her will be ur last sin

here comes the bitch

soha:- u bitch shut up OK get it in u freaking hand manik is never yours got it and h will not come I will not let him I will make him to love me ok u sleepy head and brothers chill our work is done now she is yours

nandu:- akhir kya kiya tm logon ne btao kya kiya Hi for God sake btao ky kiya

on the next side

seeing the message all were hell broken message for fab 4 was

"guyz I won't continue ur plan coz u all know my first love is Aryan and he want to be back into my life I love him I can't leg him go. so guyz I'm leaving forever don't contact me"

and for manik it was

" manik u r my bestfrnd u will always but u can't be. a bf coz I love Aryan and I request the moment we spent were best but I ant be with u

"WE R OVER MOVE ON"
regards ur ex gf"

screen freezes nandu tied on chair and manik standing still holding his mobile



mini mouse

nice story

Dude its cry NYC tqar
Bt don't cnbrt into dark ff
I don't lyk dark ff
Plzplz plzzz
I lyk ur story romantic cute pehle wala

Originally posted by: forumlove

Dude its cry NYC tqar
Bt don't cnbrt into dark ff
I don't lyk dark ff
Plzplz plzzz
I lyk ur story romantic cute pehle wala

majbur ese ii na cmnts na value it hurts na I do lots to think but got hurt hopefully this turn out good cause I will show the pool of emotions cause I'm the emotional person as well romantic I'm big emotional



mini mouse

Originally posted by: eoincash

nice story

wat hapn next

waiting

thanks for response

mini mouse

guyz I M not able to stand wait so chapter 12

chapter-12

nandu 's face was enough horrified tired cause of continuous crying cause she was scared about now where it will end what if manik blieves

guyz I M not able to stand wait so chapter 12

chapter-12

nandu 's face was enough horrified tired cause of continuous crying cause she was scared about now where it will end what if manik believes that message what if he can't try to find me what if he no no She shouted

"No"

I can't let this happen but how can I change how can I come out of this hell she started to cry more bitterly like tears won't stop felling. tears made their permanent route on her cheeks she was shouting and shouting shouting
but no one was their to listen noone was their to be her saviour she was wishing to go back to past she was left baffled her shouts were going in deaf ears cause where she was locked it was an room made of glass sound prove it was covered with black nesd by outside so no one see inside ahe was crying noone was their to hear her screams no one was their to make her smile to wipe her tears


on the other hand a person standing like statue just without a word left that was none other then manik malhotra who was hurt beyond repair but inside he was battling with mind she will not leave him behind like this he left he walked aimlessly on the unknown routes but reached a place where his nandu belong he entered in her room and fall in his knees and cried hard as he can and shouted

manik:- nanduuu
haw can u leave me how can u do this to me how can u say easily move on no no She can't say like this she can't let it happen she can't hurt me like this no no my nandu will return I'm sure she is joking cause she have to make it up na he called again this time by mistake khurana idiots left the phone and call connected and started to ring it was glassed area so no sound was going out mob was ringing nandu noticed she was tied with chair she make herself fall she called badly and got hurt badly but phone was on at end but she reached and tried best to pick but it ended but how come manik leave so easily be called again this time at 5th ring nandu reached and touched green signal but her destiny aryaman entered

aryaman:- sweetie how come u fall baby let me again make u sit oh God u r hurt

nandu:- don't u dare touch me moron for once ek br mere manik ko pta chale where I am how I am stuck bus he can't blv the message than u will face worst ever

aryaman:- baby cool ur nerves I have different ways to cool ur nerves

nandu:- stay away from me I said don't touch me aryaman I am begging plz leave me plz

aryaman:- baby I told u na ur ours so how come I'm gonna leave u baby lets do something and he went closer to her

nandu:- she shouted stay the hell away ahe tried to push him

than aryaman's eyes fell on phone which was attended and he turned towards nandu and said now I will show u whom u belong u did wrong step now see

on the other hand Manik who heard nandu talking to some one and hearing her words he understood her nandu is fallen in trouble he was happy but same moment hearing person last line he was horrified his nandu is on danger before he track phone get cut and off and the next step

aryaman:- takes nandu from their and placed her at some other place this time it was not gonna be easy for u sweety now bear it he rashely tied her with bed and started to come close he touched her and nandu was shouting he stopped and said baby I will make u mine but after sometime he left and here nandu was like puking his touch had made her disgust on herself and again praying ayyiiapppa and crying manik come and save me or ur nandu will die kept alive manik

here madly manik was running barefooted on road and reached wheree he left fab 4 and noticed all were in horrible state cause they thought message is true but seeing manik in such state all came to him and started to accuse nandu and he shouts

manik:- guyz just shut up not a word about her

all got surprised by his such behaviour but without paying any heed he narrated whole conversation he heard

all were hell shocked and all were trying beat to find nandu but could not cause soha already handled the situation in this way two months were gone

and nandu became a crying statue who pray and wait for manik and kept in one place at the same room and tied all day they come but just tease her never made their hers cause they want to make it with love by nandu but it wasn't possible and manik 's condition was getting worse he was finding her madly with fab 4

2 months leap

one day manik got a call and hearing hus eyes sparked


to be continue


mini mouse

Yaar I finished all parts in one go. Bliv me it's amazing. Now I'm waiting how manik will find her. She is waiting for her manik to save her.