EXISTENCE- CHAPTER 10 UPDATED - Page 6

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice update ... ... Keep writing ... Can u write log updates... Be happy ... Keep smiling 😊 God bless u... Thanks for this ...beautiful... FF... Take care... ...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#52
Awesome update n amazing story dear waiting for next part
Update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#53
Your story I seriously loved it!! read your story In one go ..Nandini's 1day in College that prank part !! It was awsm... Keep writing ..and update soon :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
#54
So nandini doesnot believe in friendship.
Awesome.
I really like d storyline.
Continue soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#55
hey guys! thankyou for commenting and loving the story and i am really sorry for being soo late! im doing my internship and i am literally busy with books piled up in front of me! i'll try to update twice this week! and am sorry if this is not upto the mark!
aur next episode will be pakka manan!

CHAPTER 10:-

Everybody looks surprised looking at nandini

leaving like that. Cabir turns to abhi and

asks "what happened to her? Why did she

leave?"

Abhi sighs and hesitantly says, " wooh...

kuch nahi.. aa jayegi thodi der mein.. lets

continue the party guys!"


Dhruv:- are you sure?


Abhi doubtfully says yeah but is very

worried

Two hours pass by and now everybody is

tensed as nobody knew her whereabouts!

Abhi tried calling her but in vain as they

could hear her phone ringing right from the

first floor!

Abhi:- dammit! Kahan ho nandu???

Mukti seeing him upset says, " I think we

should go search for her"


Everybody agree but for our monster..

manik who was tensed.. nah nah.. freaked

out regarding her disappearance


*flashback*


He was about to say thanks when he saw

manik going towards the Bentley and

shouted NOOO!

Manik:- what happened?


Abhi:- don't you dare think of touching that

car! Nandu mujhe maar dei! Please! Don't

touch it!

Dhruv:- what? Aisa kyun?

Abi:- jaan basti hai usme iski! She doesn't

let me also drive it! She's very possessive!


Manik smirks hearing this!

Abhi:- lets go!

Manik stays back saying he had an

important call to attend and the others

moved into the house... he quietly executed

his plan and punctured the tire of nandu's

very own sweet Bentley..

Manik:- here's sweet revenge baby!

And then moves into the house

*flashback end*

Cabir:- manik! Kahan kho gaya hai tu??

Let's go search for her

Manik:- (thoughts) shit! shit! shit! Yeh kya

ho gaya! Uska phone bhi nahi hai! I hope

she is fine

Mukti:- guys lets split up! Dhoondna easy ho jayega

Dhruv:- yeah correct! Me and Aliya will go

to college.. aur abhi meanwhile soch who

kahan jaa sakti hai

Abhi:- beach or temple ya phir koi coffee

shop

Mukti:- coffee shop? Itni raat ko? Konsi

khuli hoti hai?

Cabir:- yeah she is right! Ek kaam karte hai

abhi aur mukti you guys go search near by

temple ya phir coffee shop! Zyaada dur

nahi gayi hogii I hope! Main beach jaata hu!

Manik mere saath chal!


All of them leave to search nandini!

Manik and cabir reach the parking and they

see the bottle empty thrown down! Both

stare at each other


Cabir:- tu wohi soch raha hai jo main soch

rah ahu?

manik:- I guess! Haan! Main aas pass ke

pubs mein jaata hu! You go to the beach!


Cabir:- same thoughts bro! let's go! Let's

keep updating time to time!

Half an hour later manik gets into the car

and thinks.. maine tho cabir ko jhoot bol

diya aur that dumb girl she doesn't even

have her phone taaki main usko track

karuu.. dammit!

He braces himself up and sped the car in a

straight road which leads him to an

unknown path where no one knows what lies

further for him and her! Where will destiny

lead them?

- Sharanya


i'll try to update one tomorrow pakka! so who do you think will be successful in finding nandu and where? keep guessing and smile! cuz mananday os tomorrow

Edited by sharanya_26 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#56
It's interesting yaar...keep updating!👏😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#57
hey...aap kaisa ho???
aap iss ff ka next part kab post karenga???
plz jaldi post kijiya...

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