EXISTENCE- CHAPTER 10 UPDATED - Page 4

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Posted: 9 years ago
#31
Amazing update...
Cont soon...
Plz pm me if u can...

LOVE,
AAROHI...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#32
Amazing!!Their first day's awesome!!I guess it's Nandini who is gonna be the first girl!Anyways, loved the update!!You nailed it as always!!Continue soon!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#33
sorry im late
superb chapters
read 2 in a go
wonderful job
ty for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
#34
hey guys! am back with another update! presenting to you chapter 7! 😃😉

CHAPTER 7:-

Cabir:- there you go manik! You're target! Who chudidhar wali.. pata hai na kya karna hai..

Nandini is walking towards them when abruptly manik runs toward her and shouts JAAANEEMAN!!!

Everybody in the canteen looks at them and our very own cabiraaa switches on his cameraaa! :D

Manik:- jaaan! Kahan chali gayi thi tum mujhe chod ke? Tumne ek bar bhi nahi socha ki mera kya condition ho ga tumhare bina?

Nandini widens her eyes and freaks out!

Manik:- kuch toh bolo... JAANEMAN! (he tries to control his laughter)

He observes nandini who is trying to figure out what was happening and while thinking she pouts!

Manik:- (thoughts) oh god she is so pretty and her lips when she pouts! Oh my god! What rubbish manik! Concentrate!

The fab5 expects her to run away!

Cabir:- abbey yeh bhaag kyun nahi rahi hai?

Mukti:- yeh blank expression kyun banayi?

She looks at him for a few seconds! She widens her wyes and then...

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MAJNUUU!

Manik:- WHAT!!?

Nandini:- what nahi! WHAT THE HELL!!

they look at her in confusion

cabir:- yeh prank thoda ajeeb nahi ho gaya hai?

Abhi controls his laughter and mutters, " lo gaye kaam se!"

Cabir;- kuch kaha tune?

Abhi:- kuch suna tumne?

Cabir:- haan

Abhi:- toh kaha hi hoga

Cabir:- kya?

Nandini:- (shouts on top of her voice) what the hell is this majnu! How could you do this to me to US? Ek bar bhi socha nahi ki mera kya haal hoga? Hamara kya hoga? Tum itne selfish kaise ho? Kaise? Bas chod ke chale gaye!

Aliya:- yeh kya ho raha hai guys? Prank toh hamara tha na?

Dhruv:- yeh buddy ko kaise jaanti hai? And what is she saying?

Mukti:- lets go! Zyaada ho gaya!

They gather behind manik

Mukti:- what the hell is this manik? Who is she? What is she saying?

Manik stands up and says I HAVE NO IDEA!

Nandini:- NO IDEA!?? Like seriously?? Tumhe koi idea nahi hai ki man kaun hu?

Aur yeh toh tumhare best friends hai na! you didn't tell them about us? Kyun majnu? Kyun?

Manik had no idea what was going on and confusion was clearly written on his and who else could read his face better than cabiraa!

Cabir:- what are you hiding manik? Tell us

Dhruv:- haan buddy! Kya baat hai?

Nandini:- yeh nahi bolega! I'll tell you guys!

Everybody stare at her! She takes manik's hand and outs it on her stomach and says - TELL EVERYBODY THAT IT IS YOUR BUN IN MY OVEN!

Shock spread across everybody's face and they shouted WHAT!!??

Manik:- what nonsense is this? Just shut up! Kya bakwaas kar rahi ho? Guys she is lying!

Everybody looks at him in a piercing gaze

Manik:- guys main sach bol raha hu! Yeh kuch bhi bole jaa rahi hai!

Nandini looks at manik's face innocently and bursts out loud laughing and abhi joins her! They stand in front of fab 5 and start laughing all over again!

Fab5 looks at them in confusion! And here nandini doesn't stop laughing!

Cabir:- yeh chal kya raha hai? And oh madam tum ho kaun? Yeh kya badtameezi hai?

They stop laughing! And abhi says:- sorry guys! Btw meet my sister NANDINI MURTHY!

They shout:- WHAT!?

She puts her hand forward and says hi guys main nandini! Lagta hai Bhai ne already intro de diya!

Cabir was the first one to shake hands and say hi! I'm cabir and he introduces the others! And lastly looks at manik and says he is MANIK MALHOTRA!

Nandini:- oh toh tum ho trustee ke bete! Hi!

Cabir:- lagta hai bohot info gather kar ke aayi ho!

Manik denies her handshake and rushes out of the canteen!

-Sharanya J

GUESS WHAT'S NEXT? I'll give a precap-

MANIK KA GUSSA!

Hehehe!( evil smile)

Hit like, comment and share your views and suggestions! And last but not the least love you guys and ofcourse MANIK MALHOTRA! <3

Edited by sharanya_26 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#35
Awesome update dear...
Loved the prank...
The turning of tables...hehe...

Continue soon

LOVE
SANJANA
Edited by Cutesanjana1008 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#36
Awesome update dear...
Loved the prank...
The turning of tables...hehe...

Continue soon

LOVE
SANJANA
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Posted: 9 years ago
#37
Awesome update
Nandani rocks and Manik shock
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Posted: 9 years ago
#38

awesome update...

loved it so much...

the pink was just too much...

still can't sop laughing...

that your bun is in my oven...hilarious...

waiting to see what manik does next in his gussa mode...

can't wait to see what happens next...

keep up the good work and continue soon...

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Posted: 9 years ago
#39
Amazin'
fabulous
awesome
mindblowing update
loved it very much
continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#40
Awesome...damn hilarious.
Nandu turned the table so easily.
My fav line was...
TELL EVERYBODY THAT IT IS YOUR BUN IN MY OVEN!
So damn cheesy man!!

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