EXISTENCE- CHAPTER 10 UPDATED - Page 5

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Posted: 9 years ago
#41
fabulous chapter
hahaha
manik nsandu pe prank karne wala tha
par nandu ne opposite hi kar diye
by god
really hilarious
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Posted: 9 years ago
#42
"Your bun in my oven!!!" Ha ha ha ha!! I just can't stop laughing!!Seriously!! This prank couldn't get any better! This was stupendously hilarious!!!You're amazing girl!!! That slang is something so fit for the prank and Manik's behaviour was a must to see!!!Seriously,you are damn awesome dear!!!!!! You nailed it like always!!Loved the update!!Continue soon!Thanks for the PM!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#43
Tell everyone that your bun is in my oven?!🤣
I love this Nandu!
Angry Manik will be a treat to watch!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#44
HELLO people! am back with another update! sorry thoda late ho gaya! i'm having my semesters so i guess the next update will be on 16th cuz us din mera last exam hai! i hope you guys love the story! hit like and comment, share your views, opinions, and suggestions! and also belated HAPPY DIWALI to everybody!

CHAPTER 8:-

Manik walks out of the canteen and goes to the music room and starts tuning his guitar!

Meanwhile in the canteen:-

Nandini:- I think usko gussa aa gaya! Zyaada tho nahi ho gaya nah bhai?

Abhi:- I think so too! I think you should go say sorry to him!

Cabir:- nahi nahi! Not at all!

Nandini:- what? But why?

Dhruv:- manik jab gusse mein ho toh its better not to talk to him! He is very impulsive!

Mukti:- its dangerous to meet him now! His anger knows no extremes

Aliya:- yeah I think we should wait until he cools down! Thodi der baad sab chalet hai

Cabir:- yeah right!

Nandini:- no! main jaa rahi hu! Kahan hoga woh?

Abhi:- nandu calm down na! yeh bol rahe hai na! yeh baat kar lenge

Nandini:- bhai enough! Cabir kahan hai wooh?

Dhruv :- music room

Nandini leaves..

Cabir:- yeh bilkul ziddi aur stubborn hai!

Abhi:- bohot! Iski yeh zid tab tak rahegi jab tak manik maan nahi jaata

mukti:- aur manik ko manana easy nahi hai

abhi:- BTW, guys aaj raat ko ghar pe party hai! All of you have to come! Mere ghar pe! I'll send you the address

cabir:- wow! Matlab first day canteen mein treat aur raat k party! Kya pplan hai boss?

Abhi looks at mukti, they share a quick eyelock

Mukti turns away and blushes which goes unnoticed by abhi

Abhi:- well, plan toh mere behan ka hai! She wanted to throw a party in her style!

Cabir:- well, we'll definitely come! Right guys?

The fab 3 says yeah!

Abhi:- but manik?

Cabir;- who aayega! I assure you!

Abhi;- okay guys! I'll go I have some work! We'll meet in the night. Bye!

Dhruv:- chalo! Even we have to practice! Let's go guys

Nandini goes to the music room in search of manik and sees him playing the guitar in anger

MANIK'S POV:- (thoughts) how dare she? Like seriously? Uski himmmat kaise hui? She played a prank on me? MANIK MALHOTRA? And everybody was laughing even my friends! She doesn't have any idea who she is messing with? Now i'll tell her what price she has to pay for her prank! She has to pay for this! IT'S MY TURN NOW! And then he sees that there was a hand places on his guitar!

I looked up and saw her standing in front of me!

Manik:- what are you doing? Get out! just get lost before i___

Nandini:- SORRY!( she held her ears with her hands and pouted) REALLY VERY SORRY. I DIDN'T KNOW TUM ITNE HURT HO JAOGE! LAST TIME PAKKA! AFTER THIS PAKKA MAIN KABHI NAHI KARUNGI! NANDINI PROMISE!

Manik:- (thoughts) oh god! She is so cute! Aur uske lips when she pouts! I just feel like__

She breaks his trance

Nandini:- manik! Aise kya dekh rahe ho? Tumhe pata hai main jab NANDINI PROMISE bolti hu tho iska matlab I swear main kabhi repeat nahi karungi and I never break my promise!

Manik:- (thought) oh god she is so nave.. so innocent...but

Manik:- (shouts) oh hello! Didn't I just tell you to get out! Stop wasting my time and leave!

Nandini:- but maine sorry bola na and promise bhi kiya

Manik gets pissed and shouts ENOUGH! He pins her to the wall and holds he hands tightly!

The fab 4 enters the music room and manik doesn't notice them..

Manik:- why don't you just understand? I told you to get out! Aur haan! Don't you even dare to forget who you messed with! It's MANIK MALHOTRA! And you have to pay a price for what you've done!

Nandini:- manik leave me! It's hurting! She starts sobbing!

Manik:- so miss nandini murthy! Game is on! It's my turn! Pranks khelne mein maza aata hai na tumhe! Just wait and watch!

He leaves her and turns to find the fab 4 staring at them in shock. Nandini gets out of the room and the door closes with a loud THUD!

-Sharanya

Edited by sharanya_26 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#45

awesome update...

loved it so much...

hope manik doesn't hurt nandu too much...as it will be hard for him to get back to her...

can't wait to see what happens next...

keep up the good work and continue soon...

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Posted: 9 years ago
#46
PROMO-
hey people am back with an insight into the story! i have on more exam left and then i'll give a lamba update with MANAN! nandini promise! until tehn enjoy! smile! like and comment!


everybody says CHEERS! and lift their glasses up in the air to CLINK when____

Cabir:- Cheers to us!

Aliya- Cheers to FAB-5!

Manik- Cheers to FRIENDSHIP!
and then they see a person
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withdrawing the glass...
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Taking a step back and dropping the glass on the floor.
Everybody stare in confusion..

- Sharanya



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Posted: 9 years ago
#47
read ur story its amazing plzz continue soon nd pm also
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Posted: 9 years ago
#48
hey guys ! i am back! my exams are finally done and since i havent uploaded since long... i'm her with a looong update! i hope you like it! please hit the like and comment whatever you want! i hope you like the decors too!

CHAPTER 9:-

In the music room-

Cabir:- what the hell was happening right now manik??

Manik stood still and answered like he was spitting fire, "NOTHING, just give and take."

Mukti:- usne jo kiya it was just for fun yaar. Itna hyper mat ho__

Manik:- im hyper? Huh? Me? Im hyper?

Yeah right mukti.. u talking to me about being hyper.. don't you think it is what you are?

Mukti:- manik yaar tu yeh kya bol raha hai? It was a prank__

Manik:- exactly! It was a prank played by some commoner on me! MANIK MALHOTRA. How dare she? And tum log uske saath mera mazaa uda rahe ho! Wonderful!

And he walks out to the auditorium( remember the mandhruv scene after the first punch)

Dhruv:- guys tum log party ke liye ready ho jao and haa please main buddy ko handle karta hu! You guys go ahead

Aliya:- but manik? Wooh aayega? What about him?

Dhruv:- don't worry Aliya. He'll come. Main baat karunga use

Aliya, cabir and mukti leave and dhruv goes to the audi to meet manik

In the audi__

Manik:- buddy mujhe akela chod de! Just go!

Dhruv:- ( in a dramatic tone) MAAANIIIK! If you want me to go then I'll go but ek condition hai...

Manik:- condition? What condition?

Dhruv:- tu apna promise nahi break karega..

Manik:- promise?what promise?

Dhruv:- bhuul gaya.. tu hamara promish bhuul gaya? Remember ffab% all for one, one for all... ek dusre ka saath nahi chodte!

Manik looks down and a smile spreads across his face! Dhruv sees it but our very own monster tries to fake his anger

Dhruv:- tu smile kar sakta hai! Koi tax nahi bharna padega! And laughs

Manik looks at him and starts laughing too!

Dhruv:- agar aisa raha na.. toh problem ho jaayegi

Manik:- kaisa raha toh? Kya problem?

Dhruv:- agar tere har question ka answer or har hasi ki wajah main banu toh problem ho jaayegi

Manik gets confused..

Manik:- yeh tu kya bol raha hai?

Dhruv:- agar har waqt main aise hi tere saath chipak ke bhaitu toh teri female fans ka kya hoga??? They'll declare us gays!

Manik starts laughing...

Manik:- achaa! Chill buddy agar humare liye koi ladki nahi mili toh we'll be together!

Dhruv:- (he moves thoda away) chiii! Gande khayal hai tumhare!

Manik goes closer and tries to hug him! They run around in the audi and then sit together on the stage after getting tired!

Maniik:- oh god! Kitne dino baad itne hase hai! seriously man! You're the best!

Dhruv:- waise aaj abhi ke ghar pe party hai! Chalo let's go!

Manik:- uske ghar! No ways! We are not going! That's final! No discussion

Dhruv:- buddy! Cair, Aliya, mukti have already left from college aur main tujhe saath lene aaya tha! Ab gussa chod! Bohot ho gaya!

Manik:- no ways buddy! She dared to play a prank on me and she has top ay for it! Main nahi aane wala hu!

Dhruv:- buddy! How many time have we played pranks on others and iss baar bhi hamne shuru kiya thaa! She is daring and just accept that! Aur tu uske saath bohot rude ho gaya tha! Agar pehle hi har kisipe hamne prank khela hai, who bhi revenge lete toh!?? And imagine how bad would have they felt when you played your tricks on them! Even they are human! Unke bhi toh feelings hai! Just cuz kisine revolt back nahi kiya aaj tak that doesn't mean koi nahi karega! Ar nandini ko ek chance de, may be woh bhi teri tarah stubborn ho! COCONUT jaise?

Manik:- coconut? Seriously?

Dhruv;- haan! Bahar se hard! Aur ander se soft!...

Manik:- may be I was too rude to her but thoda hi revenge loonga!

Dhruv:- zyaada hurt mat karna...

Manik;- I'll try

Dhruv:- tu nahi sudhrega.. chalein?

They reach nandini's house.. and they get out of the car and they are surprised

They freak out WOWW!! Looking at the Bentley, bmw, audi,Volkswagen cars as if they were in a car showroom. They look at them In wonder... when abhi comes to them

Abhi:- hi guys!

Dhruv and manik say hi in unison

Manik:- so many cars? Wow man! Impressive!

Abhi:- thank you!

He was about to say thanks when he saw manik going towards the Bentley and shouted NOOO!

Manik:- what happened?

Abhi:- don't you dare think of touching that car! Nandu mujhe maar dei! Please! Don't touch it!

Dhruv:- what? Aisa kyun?

Abi:- jaan basti hai usme iski! She doesn't let me also drive it! She's very possessive!

Manik smirks hearing this!

Abhi:- lets go!

They move in and see the rest fab 3 staring at the house in aww!!

Abhi:- this is specially for the FAB 5__

http://www.decobizz.com/modern-living-room-home-decor-1884.html

This is the other living room

The fab 5 http://www.oldnassoul.com/living-room-decor-ideas-you-can-find-in-different-decoration/were amazed looking at the dcor!

Manik:- WOW! You definitely have an amazing choice!

Abhi:- not me! Nandini ki choice hai! She loves the grand look!

Cabir hits manik with the elbow and says pehle hi din manik Malhotra ko impress kar diya! Arey waah!

Manik says shut up!

All of them settle down and abhi orders champagne and beer for all of them!

Cabir:- nandini kaha hai? Abhi where is she?

Abhi:- she must be getting ready! Aati ho gi

Cabir:- okay!

Nandini walks down the stairs and manik's jaw drops looking at her!

Manik (thoughts) she looks drop dead gorgeous!

Cabir coughs mildly bringing him out of the trance!

Cabir:- iraade mein kuch badlaav hai?

Manik:- shut up! What nonsense!

Nandini's attire:-

http://www.aliexpress.com/store/product/2014-spring-summer-women-s-fashion-organza-slim-three-quarter-sleeve-lace-bottom-expansion-one-piece/1262162_1863956604.html

Nandini:- hi guys!

Everybody says hi! And manik keeps looking at her ad trying to control his emotions!

Abhi:- okay so everybody is here! So its for some champagne!

Manik takes the bottle and pops it open and pours it into glasses!

Everybody takes their glasses and hold them together!

Mukti:- for a new welcome!

Aliya:- for fab 5!

Manik:- for FRIENDSHIP!

And suddenly abhi looks at nandini who had no expression on her face!

They hear a glass breaking!

They stare at nandini in utter shock!

Nandini took a step back and drops her glass down! She looks at it breaking and smirks and walks out grabbing the champagne bottle from manik's hand!

-Sharanya

Edited by sharanya_26 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#49
Hi dear,I read ur story in one go its simply awesome,it doesn't look like u r writing for first time.
Its simply awesome''
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Posted: 9 years ago
#50
Yeh kya hogaya...nandu would be si hurt..
Loved the update...
Mandhruv were awesome

Continue soon


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SANJANA

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