EXISTENCE- CHAPTER 10 UPDATED

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sharanya_26

@sharanya_26

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Posted: 9 years ago

hey guys! i'm new to the forum and this is the first time i'm writing something. so no offence and i hope you like it.

PROLOGUE

Two people unaware of each other's existence sitting aloof and alone trying to escape the world's cruel turmoil with which they were surrounded with, in their balconies breathing in and feeling the breeze of the night and wondering whether they are gulping in the silence or the silence is gulping them in it.

In the city of dreams, MUMBAI... two people who have made up their minds to live without having expectations from anybody... but at the end of the day they are human and have feelings... having expectations is the first quality of being in need of love.

Unaware of each other but in search of someone who may not be as them, who may not understand but respect their difference and each's perspective towards life, who may not be in support of them at every step, not fearlessly tell them on their face that they are wrong but be ready to protect and face the consequences together... hamesha!

Will they meet? will their characters and perspectives change? as change is the only constant thing in life...

" i will be there at every step you take"- Maddy

How's it? please like and reply! 😊😉 its my first time! and i hope to make a good first impression.

- sharanya :)

CHAPTER 1:- ( THE TURN)- below

CHAPTER 2:- page 2

CHAPTER 3:- page 3

CHAPTER 4:- page 3

CHAPTER 5:- page 4

CHAPTER 6:-page 4

CHAPTER 7:- page 6

CHAPTER 8:- page 7

CHAPTER 9:-page 8

CHAPTER 10:- page 9

Edited by sharanya_26 - 9 years ago

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sharanya_26

@sharanya_26

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Posted: 9 years ago

HERE YOU GO WITH THE FIRST CHAPTER

CHAPTER 1:- ( THE TURN)

three girls standing near the window... one of them had tears brimming in her eyes may be for a minute... but they stopped. It then finally occurred.. the moment of realization had dawned upon her that she had gone though a lot in a very short span of time! after that moment her tears dried up, her fragile heart was blown away with shock, pain, as their words stinged her like a bee!

flashback:-

one month ago

nandini along with her parents and rishabh were in the hall of their lovely apartment watching a movie and all of sudden everything went blank. no one knew what happened. nandini was unconcious..

few hours or minutes later she was having a fadde view of what was around her.. she asked," maa.. why are we here? why hospital?" she was taken on a wheelchair toward the ward.. she protested. "i can walk.. i can walk. i'm no patient.."

she could slowly fell a needle piercing in her hand and then.. BLANK

a day had passed.. she didnt know why she was there in the ward and she had a million questions in her head which was about to burst! she asked her maa," what happened?tell me"

Mrs. murthy replied," nothing beta.. sleep, you need rest" and then the nurse came with another saline after which nandini dozed off...

two weeks had passed and then nandini was getting discharged when the doctor told her that was suffering from epilepsy.

NANDINI'S POV:-

epilepsy? what is that? a disease?

doctor:- child, you have to be very cautious about yourself from now. i will tell you a few things you shouldnt be doing and then you'll get better.

i sighed thinking it to be casual..

me: yeah doc, tell me

doctor:- NO TAKING STRESS

NO DRIVING

NO SWIMMING

NO ALCOHOL

MEDITATION

NO RISE IN TEMPER AND

HAVE TABLETS TWICE EVERYDAY

ME:- 😲(to myself) OHH! wait what? did you just say no driving? are you crazy?

he shook me by my shoulder and i came out of my trance.. i said yeah cool.. and asked for how many days? and i didnt know that the next reply would change my life forever...

-Sharanya :)

i hope you liked it and hit the like and reply button...! 😉

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vhakkal

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Posted: 9 years ago

Nice and different Plot..👏

waiting for Manik's and other's intro...

Do update Soon 😊

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sharon.babu

@sharon.babu

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Posted: 9 years ago

awesome update...

loved it so much...

very interesting concept...

can't wait to see what happens next...

keep up the good work and continue soon...

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FairyGamer

@FairyGamer

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+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

wonderful update

interesting story

pm me when update nxt time

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Ananya

@horizontwilight

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Posted: 9 years ago

Gosh!!! This was so needed!!!

I am in love with this concept!!!!! This will go awesome!!

I am in! Update soon please!!!!!

Loved it!!

Awesome!

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sharanya_26

@sharanya_26

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Posted: 9 years ago

chapter 2:-

HEY GUYS! BACK WITH ANOTHER UPDATE! GUYS DROP IN YOUR SUGGESTIONS, VIEWS AND HIT THE LIKE BUTTON! :D

The flashback will continue for next two or three updates which will give you a clear cut idea as to what kind of a person nandini murthy in the present is and why as well.

Flashback continues:-

"For how long?" -I asked the doc. "Everyday", he said.

I pinched myself to check if I was dreaming.. but alas! It was all real. I couldn't utter anything else as all the thoughts stuck up in my brain and the words tangled in my throat.

I could hear the doctor continuing his talk... his glance shifting to and from me to my parents..

Doc:- she will feel sleepy. In the start she will need upto 14-15 hours and will feel dizzy as the dosage is high but she will get used to it. She needs to get an EEG done every 6 months to keep a record of her treatment.

I had only one question in my head and no answer for it... WHY ME??? WHY ONLY ME??

I put up a fake smile, thanked the doc and left with my mom toward the reception and asked the miss for the EEG room. I went there and my eyes widened with shock or actually maybe disgust!

My hair.. my beautiful favorite hair which I loved the most!! I was praying to aiyappa that my hair doesn't get spoiled! I went there and sat on the bed.. he asked me to lie down and took wax and pressed the wires connected to the machine to my scalp! My first thought.. "EWWW did he just put wax to my hair!!! A*****E! F*****R!"

After twenty minutes or so he plucked out the wires and it hurt! "OWW",I shrieked. We took the reports to the doctor and he saw them and said "the reports are not normal. We need to increase the dosage to a gram EVERYDAY." He added with a smile. I felt like punching him right there! Yeah right, I did have a short temper which I was said to control but never was in my control. I was happy that there is some part of emotion in me which was out of bounds for the surroundings and the people.

The fake smile on my face was never gone, neither did my pain. But I was gone, far from that place to a place where I tried to find solace within myself- under the shower. Pouring hot water, I tried rubbing off the wax of my scalp or maybe the fact out of my head.

It was then that it dawned upon me, the definition of forever is what will remind me EVERYDAY that I am not a normal school going girl anymore. I am a patient.

In my dictionary, that day was successful to change the meaning of forever.. HAMESHA! In my life from a beautiful one to a dreadful one... But little did I know that there awaited another needle which was eager to prick my heart the next day! And what's wrong in hoping that the next day would be better than the previous...

-Sharanya :)

I'm glad that its my first writing and your replies actually motivate me to write more! Anyways, How was it? Reply, comment, compliment, put down your suggestions. Hope you like it.

Edited by sharanya_26 - 9 years ago