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Posted: 9 years ago
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CHAPTER 5:-

Hey guys ! i'm back with another update! i hope you love this too!

FLASHBACK ENDS.

NANDINI'S POV:-

One year had passed, I made so many contacts (you may call friends) in the same school within such a less time. I had realized one thing for sure that is MAKE MORE NUMBER OF FRIENDS AND LAUGH OUT LOUD. SPREAD HAPPINESS. THERE ARE DIFFERENT KINDS OF HAPPINESS TOO.. EACH PERSON HAS HIS OR HER VERSION OF HAPPINESS. RESPECT THAT. HAPPINESS WILL COME SEARCHING FOR YOU. J

My presence with one person is never constant. i'll be there when they call me but I make all people around me happy and lively. I am indeed happy. Nobody knows about my health condition and in fact I myself forget it when I am with my friends.

I had one friend who I felt very connected to... ABHIMANYU. He is my good acquaintance. It was our farewell day and we enjoyed to the fullest.. me and abhi applied for music in the most prestigious college in Mumbai- S.P.A.C.E.

It was our dream to study there and finally going there and start a new life with new people.. I was very excited.. in this year I evolved from a reserved, introvert to chirpy, talkative, extrovert. Totally opposite of how I was.

We were in the fight to MUMBAI-THE CITY OF DREAMS. It was almost midnight when we reached there. Our chacha-chachi stayed in Mumbai. They belonged to the rich class of the society. Yes, we are rich but I didn't like to show off. We were brought up to be a down-to-earth person.

It was almost two in the night and I was not sleepy. So I went to the poolside of my house with my best companion-COFFEE. I was sipping and thinking how fast had my life had changed and one person was always there in it. ABHI! He took care of me like a sister and we knew each other in and out. My thoughts broke when abhi sat beside me.

Me:- hi abhi

A:- hi nandu! Apne lover ke saath date pe ho? Disturb tho nahi kiya na?

Me:- huh?

A:- COFFEE.! Itni lost ho? Coffee ko admire kar rahi ho?

Me:- haha! Very funny! I agree I love coffe but tum disturbance nahi ho. Baitho! Kya hua? Didn't sleep?

A:- nahi.. I am excited for college. VERYYY. New life.. new friends.. new LIFE

He noticed my face dull down on the mention of word friends.. he knows everything what happened an year ago.

Me:- hmmm

A:- waise ek baat bolu?

Me:- haan

A:- apne aap ko ek chance do.. not everybody is like them. Open up.

Me:- I know.. not everybody is like them.. I made so many contacts in front of them in one year.. I couldn't make so many friends in the last 7 years in the same school. I am happy of what happened and have let it go. But I don't have the strength to make friends like that anymore. The societal definition of friends irks me.. they just say it or call people friends for a tag. They do not even abide by the base rule of friendship. For me, friendship had lost the purity of it being a relationship. Friendship is just a tag. I still believe my definition of friendship but I don't have expectations from anybody. I have expectations of a who I can call a friend but main kisiko bolna nahi chahti.! I am human, of course I ll have expectations. But fulfillment I don't know. HURT HAS BEEN HEALED BUT THE SCAR IS ALWYAYS LEFT BEHIND. How I am now, I'm very happy. So abhi! Don't worry yaar. I'm fine. And trust me on that.

A:- I hope the best for you behnaa! You're the best friend I and in fact anyone could ever have! I know you don't believe in it but I do and nobody is as understanding as you! But I wait for the day when a guy comes into you're life and change your life and bring in hope! I hope he changes your perspective.

Me:- chalo.. bohot heavy talks ho gaye! You forgot or what? I have only one true love-COFFEE. It's my true love and my only love in this life. I grinned

A:- haha! Yeah right! Enjoy your date with coffee.. I'm going to sleep. Goodnight

Me:- goodnight abhi!

I was having coffee and staring at he bottom of the pool and abhi's words echoed In my head about the guy in my life.. a smile creeped on my face! there was one guy in my head! The guy I met on one year back who I owe my happiness to! He changed my life! I'm strong and here happy cuz of him! I don't know who he is, where he is but he is definitely the best thing happened to me after bhai! I didn't realize when I started blushing!

i prayed to aiyappa where ever he is should stay happy..Oh god aiyyappa.. I'm blushing! What's wrong with me? Kuch bhi... I should go to sleep. I have a big day tmr..


-Sharanya :)

i'm glad all those people who loved my story! i love you guys! hit like, comment below and give me suggestions for improvising it.! thank you!

Edited by sharanya_26 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#22
Hello! I be first😎
Rare thing this be!
I'm waiting for the next cos this journey is going on fabulously!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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awesome update...

loved it so much...

can't wait to see what happens next...

keep up the good work and continue soon...

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Posted: 9 years ago
#24
Nice update...loved it!!!!
cont soon!! 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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You write so amazingly girl!I wish you could get a huge amount of response!I hope you get!!Anyways, coming to the update, I am glad Abhi's in here! I am already loving his character! It seems so awesome!!Nandini's thought are just mind-blowing, although they are by you! So kudos to you!loved the update completely!!Continue soon! Will be waiting!TC! Thanks for the PM! Keep smiling!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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hey guys! i'm back with another update! and not to forget, HAPPY BIRTHDAY NITI TAYLOR!

CHAPTER 6:-

It was their first day at S.P.A.C.E. nandini and abhi were having breakfast.

A:- behnaa.. tum NANDINI MURTHY ho.. aur itni simplicity maintain karogi tho kaise chalega ha?

N:- bhai.. aap ho na show off karne ke liye! Mere taraf se aur show off karo.. girls ki line increase ho jayegi! :P

A:- (blushed) ab yeh toh college ke baad hi pata chalega..

N:- college ke baad? Who kaise?

A:- maine party rakhi hai raat ko! All the space students are invited. C'mon yaar hum Mumbai aaye aur friends na banaye tho khaakh Mumbai aaye!

( imagine it the way ali zafar says in mere brother ki dulhan- UP AAKE DHOL NAHI BHAJAYE THO KHAAKH UP AAYE)

N:- of course my drama queen! Party tho banti hai! I'll get the drinks arranged and you the dcor?

A:- sure boss! Chal dikhate hai space walon ko murthy ki party style! (wink)

N:- chalo ab aap college jao.. main mandir jaa kar aati hun.. aur haan don't you dare touch my Bentley..!

A:- hahah! Okay darling main BMW mein chala jaata hu!

In S.P.A.C.E:-

The FAB5 enters the college in their jeep and get down. They stare at a hot guy getting down the BMW parked beside their car. The fab 4 except mukti ogle at the car.. they shout at once OH MY GOD! WHAT A CAR!

Mukti:- the guy is so hot!

All the fab 4 stare at her at once and shout WHAT!?

Cabir:- it's the first time mukti koi ladke ko dekhke hot bol rahi hai who bhi naya bandha! Uske car ki wajah se hot hai yaa fir... you know!

Mukti blushes and said shut up cabir!

Aliya:- oh my god! mukti is blushing guys!

They start teasing her and then manik says lets go in!

They were on their way to the music room when___

Aliya:- oh my god! He's here! See mukti! He is here!

Mukti:- who? Who is here?

They turn and see abhi along with the principal coming towards them!

The principal introduces the FAB5 to abhi and sayd tofab5- meet abhimanyu murthy! He and his sister just joined space! They have earned their seat in space via scholarship! I want to you guys to welcome him and show him around!

Dhruv:- sure sir!

Abhi:- hi guys! Am Abhimanyu murthy!waise toh you can call me abhi! I'm new in Mumbai! Glad to meet you! Main guitar play karta hu aur yahan dad ke business handle karne aaya hu!

Cabir:- manik yeh toh tera bhai lagta hai! Xerox copy liya hai kya?

Manik:- shut up cabir! Faltu joke tha! Hi abhi! Main manik! MANIK MALHOTRA! Fab5 ka lead singer aur guitarist

Then he introduces CABIR DHAWAN ON DRUMS

MUKTI VARDHAN ON ELECTRIC GUITAR

ALIYA SAXENA ON THE CASIO

DHRUV VEDANT ON THE GUITAR

Abhi:- hi guys! Lets go chill in the canteen.. my treat

Cabir:- I love you already man! Welcome treat! Woah! Lagta hai bohot paise wala hai! Food is the best way to impress me you know!

Abhi:- well, paise toh hai but meri behen kehti hai ki food is the most important! Toh new friends ban gaye hai toh treat toh banti hai! She is also like you cabir! Khane pe fida hai!

Cabir:- well! I'm awaiting to meet her now! Mere jaise log toh kam milte hai! I'm awesome I know!

Manik:- ho gaya tera? Chalein?

They gel along well and sit in the canteen gossiping when cabir shouts! Yaar ek prank ho jaaye?

Abhi:- tum har din prank banete ho?

Dhruv:- haan! Everyday ek target hota hai! Its fun! You'll have an amazing first day I'm telling you! Best memory!

Everybody is excited and think of what to! They start dropping in ideas to discuss.

Aliya:- theek hai! Jo pehli ladki aayegi she's our target for the day! There she comes!

A girl who is simply dressed in a chudidhar, with theeka on her forehead, open hair, ear rings twinking like stars and bangles n her hands enters the canteen! Abhi winks a her and she winks back!

Guess who?? What will be the fab5's prank? Will it backfire? Will they succeed in making abhi's first day memorable? Or terrible?

-Sharanya :)

hit like and comment below! drop in your ideas, views and suggestions! love you all!

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Posted: 9 years ago
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hey sharanya...
awesome concept...
loved the way u have portrayed nandini's character...
manan meet was awesome...
their first day at college...mukti ho gayi fida abhi par...hehe...
i guess that girl is nandu only...
her friends were just good for nothing...
liked everything bout ur story...
continue soon...


LOVE
SANJANA
Edited by Cutesanjana1008 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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awesome update...

loved it so much...

glad that abhi is so chilled and made friends with FAB5...

I'm sure that the girl is nandu...they might play a prank on them instead...maybe backfire their plan...come back to bite their own backs...

sounds so interesting...

can't wait to see what happens next...

keep up the good work and continue soon...

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Posted: 9 years ago
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awesome update
abhi and fab 5 jelled up together very well .
waiting for next update update .
update soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#30
awesome update
abhi and fab 5 jelled up together very well good.
waiting for next update update .
update soon.

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