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Annieeeeiee

@Annieeeeiee

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Posted: 10 years ago

#341

This faaast? Oh em gee. You are on fire girl! Hihihuhu xD

I really loved the way you potrayed things b/w nandu and her dad. Manik is a sweet heart man. I love that guy to bits. Thanks for the pm. xoxo

Keep writiiing!

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Aamikrish

@Aamikrish

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#342

Superb update.

Loved d way nandini understand her father even though he never apologized. She is hurt, but can also feel her father's guilt.

Loved neo manik talks.I must say Manik z a gem of a person.

Cares for everyone.

Loved the update.

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Sid

@BrightNSparkle

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#343

Wow nice update... Liked this father daughter silent both... Flashback was cute...

Oh this Rose very funny... Watermelons😃

Waiting for the Nyo and Nandu meet... What's in her head don't know let's wait and see...

Thanks for the PM...

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Tapasya88

@Tapasya88

Beginner

Posted: 10 years ago

#344

Finally some light hearted moments. I am in love with this Manik 😳 They share such an amazing bond, you have portrayed it really well. So, atlast nandu and her father sort it out. But I am excited to know what does Manik's mom want to say. Waiting for the turning points. Haha. Cheers !

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sssinha

@sssinha

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Posted: 10 years ago

#345

nice update...u have so well balanced the story between the family and the friendship..

u have all the touch in ur story..whether it be emotional,comedy,tragedy,frndship..mother-son bond,father-daughter bond...

keep writing
STAY BLESS :)

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mairaallauddin

@mairaallauddin

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#346

Awesome update

Superb update

Loved it

Loved the update

Waiting for the next part

Update the next part soon

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SNEHA

@snow_manan

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#347

Waaooowww...two updates in a day...awesome 👏
Wo bhi lamba wala
Updates were fabulous
Sort of pregnant nyio 😆 😆 😆...
for a sec I also thought she is pregnant...hehehe
And watermelon rose...hahahaHahaha... That was hilarious
Awwwiieee manik is so caring 😳 😳
The bond they share awww...
the way they feel for each other can imagine clearly
And the best part in your writing is that
till now I have not imagined them as a couple
U have penned down so beautiful that I see them as BFF.
Hatsoff to you girl... you have done a fantastic job
with the relationship between them
Great going...kudos to your work
Thanks for the pm
Update soon 😊

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Alo Manan

@Alohomora

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Posted: 10 years ago

#348

Originally posted by: snow_manan
Waaooowww...two updates in a day...awesome 👏
Wo bhi lamba wala
Updates were fabulous
Sort of pregnant nyio 😆 😆 😆...
for a sec I also thought she is pregnant...hehehe
And watermelon rose...hahahaHahaha... That was hilarious
Awwwiieee manik is so caring 😳 😳
The bond they share awww...
the way they feel for each other can imagine clearly
And the best part in your writing is that
till now I have not imagined them as a couple
U have penned down so beautiful that I see them as BFF.
Hatsoff to you girl... you have done a fantastic job
with the relationship between them
Great going...kudos to your work
Thanks for the pm
Update soon 😊