MANAN FF-YOU BRIGHTEN UP MY LIFE (Part 8 on page 31) - Page 11

Hey dear I read yur ff in one go...n I must sae I loved yur story...its awesome...amazing...

Amazing update
Fab4 now knows about
Nandani's past
Too good



continue soon

Hey !!! Its not at all boring.. Infact Im loving how d story is developing in d ryt flow.. Finaly a lot of thngs regarding Randheer as well as Nandini's past was revealed.. It was much needed.. Hope Fab5 & music wud slowly b able to heal Nandu.. Eagerly waiting to read wats up next.. & yea d banner too is realy gud ! Keep up d gud work ! Tysm 4 d pm & d update as well ! Stay Blessed !! #OkThanksBye ! :)

Very nice update yar...

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Thank you guyss for the wonderful response...Here uh go with the next part...

Part 6

#You_Brighten_Up_My_Life

Recap: fab5 came to know f truth abt nandini n all were hell shocked..
Fab5 also bcame too emotional aftr knowing abt nandini n der eyes filled with tears..

Cabir: Mukti yaar u can't b so weak..u r my strong gal u know na v r d "fab5"..n a small smile came on her face..

Dhruv: guys i think v should check on nandini..she need us more..n den dey all went bck 2 nandini room..

Nandini was still in same condition holding Randheer pic in her hand n looking @ d sky as if 2day also she is trying to find Randheer face in dat stars...

Fab5 @ d door watching @ her n feeling bad n pity on her condition..dey can't believe k is dis d same nandini whose postures dey seen down..n dey all cum closer 2 her..

Mukti: nandini my baby I think ab humein jana chahiye kafi waqt ho gaya hain..u need sum rest..

Nandini (lost in her thoughts): mukti main yaha rest karne hi toh aayi hoon..Its so peaceful here..I don't wanna go nywhr else..

Mukti: bt nandini yaha!!..she was cut off b4 could say nything..
Nandini: maine kaha na u guys jus leave..I'll stay here only ci won't go nywhr..n Manik was getting too restless n impatient frm her behaviour..

Manik (in mind): ohh god dis gal she is so stubborn..ek toh my best friend mukti is so worried abt her n she doesn't care abt it..d only thing she care Abt is dat "Randheer" who now don't evn exist..n now he get too frustrated..

Manik: nandini listen v can't leave u here alone so now get up..no more argument on dis..or else I have other ways also 2 take u out frm here..

Nandini (angrily): i dont care suna tumne i really dont care..do watever u like main kahi nahi ja rahi..dont u guys get it!!..main yahi rahungi apne Randheer ke saath uski yaadon ke saath..

Nandini was really testing manik patience n now he can't take it ny more..

Manik: oh hello miss Nandini Moorthy tum konsi era se aayi ho? R u insane? Kaun Randheer kaisa Randheer!! Woh ja chuka hain he is no more..aur ye 21st century hain gal so get real..dis love n all dis emotions it can't be so deep dat tum sirf uss insaan ki memories main hi jite raho..its all bullshit..

Fab4 were juz listening k wat all things manik is saying..instead of helping her out he is making fun of her emotions..as manik malhotra till now doesn't believe in love bcoz he never felt it..

Nandini (anger raised n shouted): Mr.Manik Malhotra
How dare u talk such things abt my Randheer..u don't have ny rights to make fun of it..kya jante ho tum pyaar ke bare main haan!! Do u knw wat love is?? Tell me.

Manik (mockingly): aur janna chahta bhi nahi hoon main..m glad dat m not madly n deeply in love like u bcoz agar meri gf mujhe iss tarah chod ke chali jati toh dan i would have bcum same like u liikeee "nandini part 2"..sad broken n failure.

Cabir: manik wat r u saying? Do u find it funny? Its not @ all funny dude..
Manik: I know dat its not funny..but look @ her she has taken things so seriously..life is abt fun masti n laughing..ab jo chala gaya so chala gaya ab kya hum puri life bas uhi devdas banke rahe..

Nandini (with high tone n angrily): jus shut up uuu (pointing finger 2wards manik) u know wat manik malhotra love can never b a failure..it always make us win bt u won't understand it bcoz u r heartless..n I really really wish dat 1 day ur heart starts beating 4 sum1 u too feel d love..n d day when u'll abt 2 loose dat sum1 na dan u'll understand wat love is n u'll understand abt my feelings..n now jus get lost ftm here..I don't wanna c ur face..n nandini jus left frm angrily..

Fab5: manik dat was really rude..wats wrong wid u..tune use aur zyada hurt kar diya..v know dat u can't handle such emotions bt iska matlab ye nahi ki yu use kch bhii bolega...

Manik: ohh guys u r getting me wrong..I know I was lil rude bt ye zaroori tha..dat gal Nandini she is not ready 2 accept d reality n truth..she is jus dreaming n dreaming abt dat guy Randheer who is no more..aur jo uske samne uski puri life hain woh use ruin kar rahi hain apna career ruin kar rahi hain only bcoz of hrr so called past..guys maine toh use reality face karwayi hain..dats it

Mukti: I know manik dat u r not completely wrong..bt d way u mocked her it was rude n bitter..
Manik: I know mukti bt it will work n u gonna watch it..

Aliya: waise whr is nandini whr she went agn?

Dey all checked in other rooms n den came down stairs..dey searched whole house but she was nowhere den suddenly manik eyes found her..

Manik: guys der she is..Fab4 was reliefed as dey found her..bt agn her loneliness grabbed her..
Nandini was all alone walking @ d beach..waves cums touches her feet n goed away n (background music plays)..

Khoyi khoyi si hoon main
Kyun yeh dil ka haal hai
Dhundli saari khwaab hai
Ulja har khayaal hai
Saari kaliyan murja gayi
Rang unke yaadon mein beh gaye

(Nandini was thinking dat dis darkness n dis silence of d sea shores r not leaving her..y she wants k dis shores take away her also with dem)

Saare gharaande reet ke
Lehrein aayi, lehron mein beh gayi

(n suddenly manik voice echoed in her ears "kaun Randheer kaisa Randheer!! He is no more" n den she remembers mukti words too "nandini woh chala gaya he won't cum bck, u r Destroying urself"..n she shouts "stop" she open her eyes n find no1 around her she is alone..)

On other side..

Mukti: guys u all leave main aaj yahi hoon nandini ke saath I know her agar ek woh ek baar kuch than leti hain toh wahi karti hain n if she has decided 2 stay here alone so den let her b..
Manik: well mukti in dat case evn I m same..u know rite!! So if she has decided dan evn v have decided not 2 leave her alone..n he smirks.

Cabir: ya dats true..evn v r not going nywhr v'll b here with u 2nite..

Mukti: ok fine guys as u all wish..nways till den u guys find sumthing 2 eat..main nandini ke paas jati hoon..

Manik: arey mukti u stay main jata hoon nandini ke paas n I promise iss baar use kuch ulta sidha nahi bolunga..hmm

Mukti: ok I trust u..mind it not 2 hurt her ny more..

Manik: hmm ok..n den he left

On other side

Nandini was sitting on sand n writing hers n Randheer name 2gether bt d waves cums n der names get vanish n agn n agn she writes..

"don't trouble urself..itni mehnat mat use likhne ki kyunki dat names cant b 2gether n same like u guys were not meant 2 b @gether" a hard voice came n nandini looked back 2 assure whether it is him or sum1 else n yes it was him f manik malhotra..

Manik came near n he also sit der with her 2 accompany her..Nandini jus nodded her head in disbelief n she was about 2 get up n go bt manik hold her wrist..

Manik: don't go..not dis tym..

Nandini looked into his eyes which was full of pleads 2 stop her n by seeing dat pleading in his eyes she stayed der n sat bck..der was complete silence dem 4 few mins..n den manik broke d silence..

Manik: "let it out" jus do it..

Nandini (confusingly): wat?? Wat u mean!!

Manik: I mean jus speak up watever u kept in ur heart..I know I was rude bt it was required so dat u can take out ur pain..

Nandini: manik lets not talk abt it..plss

Manik: wow gr8 d whole day u keep thinking abt it bt when it cums 2 talk n discuss u don't wanna do dat..nways if u want v won't talk dat bt I wanna tell u sumthing..u know nandini jab main Bohot zyada pareshan aur kisi chiz ko leke stressed hota tab main bhi tumhar
Tarah kahi shanti main jake bethna chahta hoon n b4 evn I use 2 go n sit on beaches n sumtimes I go 2 crowded places too so dat I lose myself in dat crowd all my pain n frustration also get vanish sumwhr with dat crowd bt no it doesn't help me..bt 1 thing definitely help me n dats music..

Nandini get restless aftr hearing abt music..as if evrty1 is forcing her 2 get bck dat passion in herself n which she doesn't want..manik noticed her face aftr hearing abt music..

Manik hold nandus hand n nandini get surprise by his act..

Manik (holding her hand): nandini u don't need 2 panic frm music..music will give u peace n happiness..don't run away frm it..aur ye main aise nahi bol raha ye maine khud experience kiya hain..apne darr aur pareshani se fight karo..music ko apni weakness nahi apni strength banao n den u c d old nandini will b bck..

Manik n nandini look in each other eyes n dey have a cute eyelock..n manik break d eyelock n cum bck in his senses n nandini too..

Nandini (in mind): ye mujhe kya ho raha hain? Kyu manik ke saath ek apna sa feel ho raha hain..aisa lag raha hain jaise ye manik nahi balki mera Randheer ho..no no nandini ye tu kya soch rahi hain!! Ye Randheer kaise ho sakta hain..!!

While nandini was thinking all dis n manik was busy looking @ stars..n nandini eye goes on him..
Nandini: ohh so u also like stars!!

Manik: no I jus don't like dem infact I love dem bcoz dey always shine 4 us..n bdw u also means?? U too love dem!!

Nandini cum closer 2 Manik n Put her head on his shoulder..now manik was shocked by dis act of her bt den he felt good n he gave a cute smile..nandini dint realize wat n y she did dis!! it may b bcoz in mean tym she started trusting him n his talks was really making her feel gud..
On other side fab4 was watching dis scenario n was agn shocked seeing manan 2gether..specially d mukti was hell shocked..

Mukti (shockingly): guys kya main bhi wahi dekh rahi hoon jo tum log dekh rahe ho ya phir ye meri imagination hain!!

Aliya: no Mukti its not an imagination its true..omg dey r 2gether so close..can't believe k abhi kuch der pehle toh dey had fight n now!!

Mukti: i know guys dat how is manik..he has dat charm 2 drool ny gal around him..bt m wondering k how nandini can b 1 of dem? I mean yaar inn 2 saalo main nandini ne kabhi kisi ladke ko apne aas paas nahi aane diya..aas paas toh kya apne khayalo main bhi nahi aane diya..toh phir ye kaise..

Cabir: mukti don't u know dat he is manik..he can do nything..n nything can b possible with him..

Mukti: hmm ya rite..

Scene changes..

Nandini: hmm ya n i like star Bcoz Randheer use 2 like dem (manik in mind oh god agn Randheer!!)..u know manik y Randheer use 2 like dem bcoz woh kehta tha jab hamare apne humse door god ke paas chale jate hain toh stars ban jate hain aur hamein blessings dete hain..aur main har roz inn taro mein use dhoondti hoon..

Manik (teasingly): achcha toh tumhe Randheer mila!! Kaha hain woh? N pointing 2wards sky I think woh hain naa woh hain arey nai woh hain..Nandini lift her head up n she frowned as she knows agn manik is making fun of it..

Manik: kya hua tum aise kyu dekh rahi ho? Ohh achcha ab samja u dint found ur Randheer yet..n he starts laughing..oh god come on nandini seriously tum iss generation main aisi superstitious baaton main kaise believe kar sakti ho..ha haha u r soo funny..

Nandini (frowned): u know wat u r impossible u r useless..mujhe tumhare saath apni baatein share karni hi nahi chahiye..huhh n den she walk away frm der..

Manik: nandini!! Nandini!! Arey baat toh puri karke jao..n den he keep smiling on her cute talks n thoughts

Manik pov:

Ohh god dis gal is fully mad yaar..puri pagal kuch bhi sochti hain aur kisi b baat pe vishwas kar leti hain...but jo bhi ho she is vry cute...

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awesome update...

loved it so much...

shocked to see nandu so close to manik...

but she is slowly opening up which is good for her...

can't wait to see what happens next...

keep up the good work and continue soon...

The update was lovely dear...