MANAN FF-YOU BRIGHTEN UP MY LIFE (Part 8 on page 31) - Page 12

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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update loved manans convo only manik can make take her pain away waiting for their love story Jo shuru ho chuki hai.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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I'm ur new reader or say fan of ur amazing ff



I wonder how came I stay way from dis

I'm regretting y I'm not reading it earlier


Shamm on me😡





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Posted: 9 years ago
Thnk uh
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: epshitatabassum

Hi

I'm ur new reader or say fan of ur amazing ff



I wonder how came I stay way from dis

I'm regretting y I'm not reading it earlier


Shamm on me😡





it's superb



emotional




heart touching





awesome



mind blowing



outstanding



beautiful



wonderful



excellent



Plz add me ur buddy list


n update soon

I'm desperately waiting for it

thank you
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Posted: 9 years ago
Sorry for the delay but I was bit busy... Here goes the next prt...

Part 7

#You_Brighten_Up_My_Life

Recap: manan had an argument..nandini went 2 beach 2 have sum alone tym n manan had a gud talks n tym with each other..

Nandini mood was lil better now aftr having sum chit chat with manik..n evn manik was happy as Nandini is not angry with him ny more she is much finr now..

Mukti: nandini tum thik ho? How u feeling now??

Nandini: mukti don't worry yaar now m much better..waise tumhara woh stupid dost manik hain na tell him 2 get serious 4 sumtym..bas use toh har cheez mazak lagti hain..

Manik also reached inside d house in mean tym..

Manik: waise tum mere bare main kuch keh rahi thi? I think tum meri tarif kar rahi thi hain na!! Dat m so gud understanding, charming..I know I know I m..

Nandini (fake angry): ohh really!! Tumhe sach much aisa lagta hain ki maine tumhare bare main yeh kaha hoga..if it so dan u r highly mistaken manik malhotra..waise I know u r quite handsome charming n may b hot bt not 4 me..I don't get impress with such qualities..I don't give damn abt it..so try ur charm n all on others not me..

Fab5: ohh god dey started agn..isse pehle ki inke beech mahabharat shuru ho jaye v have stop dem..

Manik: ohh really miss Moorthy if u r not so impressed with me den wat was dat few mins bck..y u needed my shoulder 2 rest n share ur things with me!! Kuch yaad aaya ya phir!!

Nandini remembered Dat how unknowingly she rested her head on his shoulder n y she did dat she don't have answer of it..it jus dat use manik ke saath ek apni si feeling aayi thi..b without answering nything she juz made sn excuse..

Nandini: woh woh m tired I need rest..so m going 2 sleep bye every1 n gudnite..

Cabir: arey nandini aise kaise v have ordered food so have it n den go..
Nandini: no cabir mujhe bhook nahi hain I don't feel like eating nything..u all have it..bye n she left frm der..n as soon as she reach her room closed d door n stand placing her bck @ d door..


Nandini pov:

wat was dat?? (She think abt how manik hold her hand looking @ stars n how she took his shoulder 2 rest n how manik hold her frm waist when she collided with him n der eyelock)..oh god wats happening 2 me..ye mujhe kaisi feeling aa rahi hain..ye sab kyu hua..y I find sum connection btwn me n him..his eyes it so deep like Randheer..no not agn n how could I think abt him like dis aur woh bhi uss heartless emotionless ladke ke baare main no never Nandini Moorthy never..I think I need rest dan all will b fine..yeah n I luv only Randheer..only him
Pov end..


On other side..

Nandini cums out of d washroom aftr getting fresh..she wipes her face n go 2wards d wardrobe 2 find something 2 wear if der is sumthing..n by mistake instead of opening her wardrobe she opens Randheer wardrobe n as soon as she opens it she find Randheer jacket his denim jeans his perfume watch n few stuff..n agn she is broken into pieces..she takes out d jacket n hug it tightly d way she use 2 hug Randheer n start sobbing remembering abt dat event

Flashback

Randheer n nandini cums on stage..n d audience r so excited 2 c der performance as it was der 1st performance in India..till now dey have seen der performances only on tv or social sites YouTube n all..it will b d 1st d audience will get 2 c " nandheer" live performance n all were cheering 4 dem "nandheer" "nandheer"..

Anchor: so guys u r wait is gonna finish..urs favourite rockstars "nandheer" r here with a bang..m sure dis performance of der will make u ppl more crazy..n u all gonna love it..so here I welcome Randheer n nandini as nandheer 2 burn d stage..

Nandini n Randheer cums on d stage (as I have mentioned b4 dat dey were dancers too so it will b singing n dancing both 2gether) n dey take der positions n music starts playing..(guys imagine d dance of KriYaansh of D3..its sumwat similar..hot n romantic)

Aaa aa...

(Male)

Sajde mein yun hi jhukta hoon
Tum pe hi aa ke rukta hoon
Kya yeh sab ko hota hai

(Female)

Hum ko kya lena hai sab se
Tum se hi sab batein ab se
Ban gaye ho tum meri dua

(Male)

Sajde mein yun hi jhukta hoon
Tum pe hi aa ke rukta hoon
Kya yeh sab ko hota hai
(Female)

Hum ko kya lena hai sab se
Tum se hi sab batein ab se
Ban gaye ho tum meri dua
Khuda Jaane ke mein fida hun
Khuda Jaane mein mit gaya
Khuda jaane yeh kyun huwa hai
Ke ban gaye ho tum mere khuda

(Female)

Tu kahe to tere hi kadam ke
main nishanon pe
Chalun rukun ishaare pe
Tu kahe tho khwabon ka bana ke
Main bahana sa
Mila karu sirhaane pe
Ohhh
Tum se dil ki baatein seekhi
Tum se hi yeh raahe seekhi
Tum pe marr ke mein tho
Jjee gaya
Khuda Jaane ke mein fida hun
Khuda Jaane mein mit gaya
Khuda jaane yeh kyun huwa hai
Ke ban gaye ho tum mere khuda

(Male)

Dil kahe ke aaj tho, chupa lo tum
panahon mein
Ke darr hai tum ko kho doonga
Dil kahe ki sambhal zara khushi ko
Na nazar laga
Ke darr hai mein tho ro dunga
Hooo
Karthi hoon sao vaade tum se
Bandhe dil ke dhaage tum se
Yeh tumhe na jane kya hua
Khuda Jaane ke mein fida hun
Khuda Jaane mein mit gaya
Khuda jaane yeh kyun huwa hai
Ke ban gaye ho tum mere khuda

(Male)

Sajde mein yun hi jhukta hoon
Tum pe hi aa ke rukta hoon
Kya yeh sab ko hota hai

(Female)

Hum ko kya lena hai sab se
Tum se hi sab batein ab se
Ban gaye ho tum meri dua
Khuda Jaane ke mein fida hun
Khuda Jaane mein mit gaya
Khuda jaane yeh kyun huwa hai
Ke ban gaye ho tum mere khuda
Ke ban gaye ho tum mere khuda..

Now der performance is ended n audience is cheering "1ns more 1nd more 1ns more"...

Anchor: wow wat an lovely romantic n outstanding performancen n wat an sizzling chemistry..u guys actly created fire on d stage n also in audience hearts..well I must say u both r gr8 couple.. N aftr hearing dis nandini n Randheer both starts blushing hard n try 2 hide der blushing frm others..

Randheer: gud evening Indians n mumbaians n thank u so much 4 ur love n support..its being a gr8 opportunity to perform 1st tym in India n its a gr8 experience..so dis 4 u guys a small token of love frm me..n he agn starts singing..

Yeh pal hame yad aayenge, woh kal yad aayenge - (2)
Hamne kiya yaha jo bhee kiya, roke kabhee has ke jiya
Khushiya kabhee gam bhee liya, roke kabhee has ke jiya
Yeh pal...
Shukriya yaro shukriya pyar jo itna diya - (2)
Aao milke jhume gaye chhede sargam ko
Nagme barsae milke jhume gaye
Hamne kiya yaha jo bhee kiya, roke kabhee has ke jiya
Khushiya kabhee gam bhee liya, roke kabhee has ke jiya
Mil hee gaya manjil ka nisha, apne sapno ka jahan
Chootna yeh karwa, apne sapno ka jahan
Yeh pal...
Yeh pal hame yad aayenge, woh kal yad aayenge
Yeh pal...(song ends)

Audience is like ooo..wow

Nandini: ok chill guys n now its tym 2 leave n b4 leaving d all v want 2 say is k keep loving us n supporting us..v jus need ur blessings dat "nandheer should never break dey always b 2gether"..goodbye n love u all..muwaah (giving flying kiss)..n dey left..

Flashback ends..


Nandini open her eyes n cums out frm d past n she murmurs..

Nandini (tears in her eyes): look guys ur nandheer has broken..ur all favourite nandheer is not 2gethr..Shayad tum logo ki prayers n blessings humein kam par gayi..n may b dats y v all Lost him 4ever..she agn hugged dat jacket kept it on her chest n took out his photo kiss it n kept it below her pillow n drifted into sleep..


On other side..

Fab5 were having normal talks n masti bt manik was in his own world..he was missing nandini..

Manik: hmm guys I'll b bck

Mukti: manik whr r u going? U want sumthing?

Manik: arey no Mukti nothing it jus m going 2 check nandini if she is fine or not?

Mukti: hmm ok no prob..n manik left frm der leaving every1 in shock..as dey never expected dis much care n concern 4 ny other gal b4..

Aliya: guys wats wrong with manik? Y he is so much worried abt nandini? Dis kinda care n concern 4 her is sumthing weird..don't u think guys?

Dhruv: yes aliya u r rite..infact buddy ke liye gals r juz 4 fun 2 fulfill his desires..he never cared abt der probs or situation..

Mukti: hmm sumthing is fishy..nways its gud 4 him..@least unn stupid bimbos se toh chutkara milega n who cares abt dem..do hell with dem..n all starts laughing..


On other side. .

Manik slowly opens nandini room n peep inside d room whether she is awake or else agn sitting @ d window n crying 4 him..bt 2 his surprise she wasn't awake n crying 4 him..she was sleeping..n manik cums near her bed..
Manik was awestruck aftr gazing her sleeping beauty

Manik (in mind): beautiful..same like an angel..she is such pure n innocent soul..how could god could b so hard on her taking away her happiness..bt I promise I'll bring dat nandini Moorthy bck n dat happiness bck..its Manik Malhotra promise..

Manik was so lost in her beauty n d angelic face of hers as if he was drinking her beauty..n he slowly cum more closer 2 her dat he can feel d warm breath of her..n d aroma of her body was pulling her more close..he came closer 2 her Forhead n pecked her 4head..he was jus abt 2 straight himself afr pecking her Forhead n see sumthing below her pillow..he slightly take dat thing out making sure not 2 disturb here sleep..n as soon as he see dat thing his eyes n face turned into anger and n jealousy..n it was ofcourse Randheer photo which changed his mood he got so damn pissed n angry dat he wanted 2 crush it n throw away bt he stopped himself frm doing dat bcoz its nandini property he don't have ny right..n den suddenly eyes went on dat jacket which was hugging it n taking it in her arms n sleeping..he tried 2 took it out bt d grip was so tight dat he couldn't..he stamp his feet with irritation n throw d photo on her pillow besides nandini head n went away banging d door..

To be continued..


Precap: fab5 watch Randheer performances video on social sites..manik decides dat nandini will b der lead singer n fab4 get shock hearing dis..

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So guys nandini lead singer banegi fab5 ke album ke liye ya nahi..manik will able 2 bring music bck in her life or not?? To know more keep reading n ofcourse pls share ur views...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Superb update. ..
Loved manik n nandini's fight...soo adorable. ...!!
So nandininis feeling smething fr manik...but yaa I think it will tke a long way fr her to move on n manik to make her again that same nandini. ...
Eagerly waiting to see hw he does that...!!
Wow...nandini as fab5's lead singer...!! Eagerly waiting hw this happens. ...!!
Grt work
Keep it up. ...
Bye tc...!!
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Posted: 9 years ago

awesome update...

loved it so much...

glad that manik is changing and slowly becoming concerned for nandu...

like that he is jealous...

glad to know more about nandu's past...

can't wait to see what happens next...

keep up the good work and continue soon...

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Posted: 9 years ago
So manik is getting jealous superb
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update.
I like how manik gets jealous of randhir everytime.
Its because he cant see nandini with anyone else. But has he still not understood y is it so?
I loved ur story.
Please do pm me whenever u update next.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow what a superb update
Manik's care for nandu
Interesting

Continue soon

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