MANAN FF-YOU BRIGHTEN UP MY LIFE (Part 8 on page 31) - Page 13

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Posted: 9 years ago
Nandu ko manik hi heal kr sakta he
awesome update
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Posted: 9 years ago
Aww.. Manik has become so caring and protective for Nandini.😊
I hope Nandini gives another chance to her life nd to music !!

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Posted: 9 years ago
it was awesome update. Thanks for the pm. Continue soon. Tack care.
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Posted: 9 years ago
possessive manik ...he loves her n surely he will bring smile on her face
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update n I'm damn sure nandu hi lead singer banegi. Only manik can heal her n waiting when they both will gall for each other n now pls show manan story randheer is her past n how she will cope up with her new feelings. Waiting for some romance.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update
Excited to see how manik will convince her
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Posted: 9 years ago
Part 8
#You_Brighten_Up_My_Life

Recap: fab5 find sum change in manik behaviour..Nandini n

Randheer Flashback performance..
Manik cums down with full anger n frustrated with dat pic n jacket of Randheer..
Cabir: manik kya hua? Tu itni jaldi kaise aa gaya? Aur ye tere chehre pe 12:00 kyu baje hain..
Manik (hiding his expressions): no nothing actly nandini has already slept so without disturbing her I juz came down..
Mukti: cool dan..achcha hain dat she drifted 2 sleep..I hope she get peaceful sleep in dis house of hers..
Aliya: waise mukti ye ghar nandini ka kaise hain? I mean she is frm U.S n she juz came 1ns here 4 dat seminar den dis house..
Mukti: ohh gud u asked it..well der is a cute story behind dis house..n she narrates
Flashback
Nandini was sleeping in on her large size bed covering duvet on her head so dat d sun rays won't disturb her sleep..
Mukti came remove d duvet n poured 1 full bucket of water on nandini..n nandini jerked frm her bed..
Nandini: mukti!! u stupid idiot dumb fellow wat u did..jagane ke aur bhi toh tarike hote hain..
Mukti: arey u idiot its ur birthday 2day my baby princess..happy birthday muwaah (she pecked on her cheeks n hugged her)
Nandini: wow my jaan mukti u remember my birthday!!
Mukti: ofcourse my baby n don't 4get dat dis tym also m d 1st 1 2 wish u..bdw I need 2 a big wala treat frm u as its 4 d 1st tym v both r 2gether on ur birthday..bdw Randheer ne wish kiya??
Nandini: Randheer!! R u serious? Randheer can never b 1st 1 2 wish me ya bt 4 sure he can b d last 1 for dat..everytym I have 2 give him hints 2 remind my birthday..m sure dis tym too dat duffer idiot must have 4gotten my birthday like always..infact woh toh ab tak apne dreamland main soya hua hoga..
On other sides Randheer was awake n on a call with sum1..
Randheer: dekhye aaj Bohot hi imp day hain mere liye..aur mujhe ye aaj hi chahiye kaise bhi karke..I can't wait ny more..I'll pay u watever d amount is..juz make sure dat it should be mine till 2day nite..goodbye n have a nice day..n he disconnect d call..the moment he disconnect d call he gets nandini call..
Randheer: hey pouty gud morning sweetheart..
Nandini(in mind): bas sirf gud morning!! No wishes!! C I knew it I was rite..m always so sure about him..aaj bhi mera birthday bhool gaya idiot kahi ka..huh
Randheer: ohh hello koi hain? Kahi wrong number toh nahi laga diya na..Nandini r u der?
Nandini (angrily): of course Mr. Randheer Obroi m here n I can hear u chillane ki zaroorat nahi hain..
Randheer: oh hello chilla tum rahi ho aur ye tumhe subah subah ho kya gaya hain..tumne pee li hain kya?
Nandini: juz shut up..aur waise maine ye bolne ke liye phone kiya hain dat 2day is a vry imp day..u remember?
Randheer: oh ya of course I remember aaj hamara seminar hain..v r having performance 2day its a big day 4 us n aftr all isi ke liye toh hum india aaye hain..m I right..
Nandini (in mind): right my foot.. Mann toh kar raha hain abhi jake iska gala daba du..phir iske seminar main iska bhoot gayega..
Randheer: nandini ab kuch bolo bhi..tumhe kya ho gaya hain??
Nandini (still with hope): Randheer kya tumhe sach main nahi pata ki seminar ke alawa aur bhi kuch imp hain aaj..
Randheer (confused): aur bhi kuch matlab!! Aur kya ho sakta hain? No yaar I don't remember nways tum bol do na..
Nandini (angrily): 4get it kuch bhi nahi hain..I don't wanna tell u nything..c u @ evening..bye n she hang d call..n Mukti was laughing like hell..
Mukti: oh god seriously tum dono ko dekh ke lagta hi nahi ki tum dono gf or bf..I mean look @ him how can he 4get ur birthday..omg u guys r so funny..
Nandini: haan haan hasle jab tera bf tera birthday ya anniversary kuch bhi bhoolega na toh tab main bhi aise hi hasungi..
Mukti: haan has lena..par pehle mujhe kisi bakre ko fasane toh de..n she winked
Nandini (laughingly): hahaha Mukti u r never gonna change..I wish ki koi bakra iss bakri ke pyaar main jaldi phas jaye..n agn dey both started laughing fully..
Nandini n Mukti came down stairs n der F*Ly wished her n dey cut d birthday cake..
In evening nandheer met each other n hugged each other wish dem luck..though nandini was still angry with him bt she has 2 hide her anger in front of audience..
It was performance tym dey came 2 stage (note: guys it was dat same performance of "khuda jaane" which I mentioned in last part)..
Der performance get over n dey cum bck stage n went 2 green room 2 Change n Mukti too join nandini der..both mukti n nandini cums out n Randheer too reached der by dat tym.."nandheer" was gathered by media n fans n all bt sumhow dey 3 of escaped frm der n came in parking lounge..
Mukti: arey nandini I have sum work so m going with 1 of my friend n will directly cum home..tum Randheer ke saath chali jao he will drop u..okk
Randheer: oh dats cool..cum nandini I'll drop u..
Mukti came closer 2 Randheer ear n wished him "all d best Mr romeo" n she winked @ him..
Nandini (suspiciously): mukti ye kya ho raha hain? Tum dono ke beech kya baatein ho rahi hain? M sure sumthing is related 2 me only..
Randheer: no no nandini nothing is related 2 u..actly der is 1 guy my newly found friend toh Mukti bas usi ki bare main bol rahi thi..hain na mukti!!
Mukti: ya nandini he is rite..u remember na dat bakra thing..n dey started giggling..nways bye n have fun..n "nandheer" too left frm der..
On half d way nandini realise dat dey r going on wrong route..
Nandini: nandheer ye hum ksha ja rahe hain? Ye rasta toh galat hain..yaha kitna andhera aur sunsaan hain..
Randheer: nandini mujhe pata hain ki hum kaha ja rahe hain so relax n have patience..u trust me na..
Nandini: (nodded her headvin yes) hmmm khud se bhi zyada..
Randheer: ok so no more questions..n finally aftr 30 mins of drive dey reached 2 dat beautiful wood house which was beautifully decorated with colourful lights n orchids flowers..bt b4 dey reach inside Randheer tied a blind fold on Nandini eyes n den a big wooden gate gets open n he enter inside with his car..
Nandini: Randheer ye tum kya kar rahe ho? Ek toh pata nahi hum kaha hain aur se ye blind fold..pls open it na..
Randheer: pouty bas 2mins..he get down frm d car n open d door of Nandini sides too n take her out holding her hand..n now he open her blind fold..
Randheer: so here u go miss Nandini Moorthy..hws it?
Nandini (awestruck): wow Randheer its so damn beautiful..I can't believe dis its like my dream house..n she hugged him tightly..
Randheer: ok ok my pouty thodi excitement bacha ke rakho..still more surprise 2 cum yet..
Nandini: wat?? Aur bhi surprise hain..aww my baby I love u..n den "nandheer" went inside..d moment Randheer opened d door nandini got d biggest surprise of her life..
In d centre of d table her birthday cake was kept n candles were lighting everywhere..n d house is having beautiful Chinese schandele..n d walls was full of der memories..
Nandini: Randheer tumhe mera birthday yaad tha? Mujhe laga ki iss baar bhi tum mera birthday n she was cut off by Randheer..
Randheer: bhool gaya!! Hain na..but dis tym I dint aur bhoolta bhi kaise aftr all its ur 1st birthday after our relationship n as my girlfriend aur main apni gf ka birthday kaise bhool sakta hoon..
Nandini eyes was filled with tears..Randheer kissed her forehead n wished her "happy birthday my pouty my love..god bless u" n nandini hugged him n den dey cut d cake n celebrate her birthday..
Nandini: waise Randheer Whr is my birthday gift?(raising her eyebrows) Hmm hmm??
Randheer: oh so u want a gift too? R u not satisfied with dis surprise dat u need gift too..
Nandini (cutely frowned): Randheer...
Randheer: oh ok ok relax so here is ur gift..he gives her d keys..
Nandini (confusingly): keys!! Par main iss keys kya karungi?
Randheer: arey u dumbo tum ab bhi nahi samjhi!!..ye iss ghar ki keys n dis house is ur gift dis house is all urs now..
Nandini (hell shocked): omg u must b kidding me..m I dreaming or wat?
Randheer: of course u aren't dream its true..n my wish was 2 make ur dream cum true..Nandini tum hamesha se aisa hi ghar chahti thi na..jaha peace ho aur samundar ki lehre ho ek pyaar bhara atmosphere ho aur isse perfect jagah aur gift mujhe laga hi nahi..so here is ur dream house..
Nandini came closer 2 Randheer cupped his face n kissed his lips n den dey both started sucking it..
Randheer took nandini in his arms n take her 2 d bedroom close d door n den dey both get intimate n spended whole night in each arms cuddling each other (note: Nandini is not virgin she already had physical relationship with Randheer)..
Flashback ends..
Mukti: so dis is how dis house belongs to nandini..n dats y 2day she landed here..n I think she will often cum here..
Well every was finding it cute hearing abt "nandheer" love story..bt der was sum1 who was not @ all finding it cute n interesting hearing abt dem..infact now he is more fuming with anger n jealousy..
Manik (angrily): mukti Main woh Nandini ki performance ki videos dekhna chahta hoon..right now..
Mukti: videos!! Par kyu? Aur tu iss tarah se kyu baat kar raha hain?
Manik: Mukti juz show me those videos baad main batatu hi ki woh videos kyu dekhni hain...
Mukti take out her mobile n show all d videos of nandheer..1 was of der 1st performance in U.S..2nd was of der performance in Canada n another was of London n another was of performance in India on d day of her birthday..n It was enough 4 manik..
Manik: ok dats it..guys v got our solution..v got our female lead singer..
Fab4: female lead singer? Matlab? Kaha hain woh?
Mukti: manik kahi tu nandini!!
Manik: yez mukti u guessed it right..d female lead singer 4 our album will b none other dan nandini Moorthy..
Fab4 was shocked by hearing dis..
Dhruv: buddy ye tu kya bol raha hain? Nandini kaise hamari lead ho sakti hain..Arey singing toh dur woh toh guitar tak play kar payegi..
Manik: nandini will sing n she will play guitar too..n I'll make her 2 do dat..n u know guys dat manik malhotra never take a no 4 an answer..n he smirks evilly..
As it was too late n ever As it was too late n every1 drifted into sleep..bt manik was not able 2 sleep..
Manik pov:
Nandini u r really a rockstar..those videos of urs r so rocking..bt jus bcoz of dat stupid Randheer u have ruined ur career n ur tag "rockstar" I want dat rocking nandini bck n I'll get dat @ ny cost..chahe uske liye mujhe iss so called Randheer ka chapter close hi kyu na karna pare..I'll do it bas ab bohot ho gaya Nandheer nandheer bt now no more..now der will b only manik n nandini..
Pov end...
Manik (2 himself): waise jab manik n nandini saath hoge toh den it will b more rocking dan nandheer..n bdw wat will ppl call us 2gether!! Hmmm manik+nandini makes manan!! Oh yea v will b "manan"..n it sounds more cool n rocking dan dat not so rocking nandheer..n manik too drifted in a sleep thinking abt him n nandini with a sweet smile on his face...
Nxt day morning SPACE academy..Fab4 was in jamming room..
Cabir: manik tujhe sach much lagta hain ki nandini hamari female lead ban sakti hain!! Mere matlab hai hamein ek baar usse iss bare main baat karni chahiye ki woh iske liye ready hai ya nahi..
Manik: guys I know woh kya kahegi..woh kabhi iske liye ready nahi hogi..bt v have 2 force her 2 do dat..n tum sab ne uske videos bhi toh dekhe hain na..m sure if she will b d lead of our album den definitely our album is gonna hit..jus think of it 1ns guys..
Mukti n nandini r walking in corridor cuming 2wards jamming room n den navya came n saw nandini..
Navya: hi nandini kaisi ho? Hi mukti!! Right?
Mukti: yes n u dat cabir gal navya..right?
Navya: yes right..par ye cabir gal ka kya matlab hain?
Mukti: oh dats nothing juz leave it..nways u guys carry on mujhe practice ke liye jana hain..n nandini when u get tym u cum 2 jamming room main tumhe wahi milungi..okk
Nandini: ok Mukti tum jao main tumhe baad main milti hoon..bye n Mukti left navni..
Navya: Kal maine tumhe kitna dhoonda bt tum Kahi dikhi hi nahi..tum kal kaha chali gayi thi achanak se..tumhe pata hain hum sab kitna pareshan ho gaye the..
Nandini: woh navya actly kal I was not feeling well so main ghar chali gayi thi..
Navya: oh ok..waise ab kaha chale canteen ya classroom?
Nandini: classroom chalte hain na mujhe notes bhi prepare karne hain..
Navni was going 2 classroom passing through d jamming room..n suddenly dey heared fab5 singing n tuning d music..
Navya: nandini lagta hain ye fab5 ki awaaz hain chalo na pls mujhe sirf ek baar unki tuning dekhni hain..maine unke baare main Bohot suna hain pls chalo na..
Nandini: navya tum jao main tumhara class main wait karti hoon..
Navya: nahi main akeli nahi jaaungi tum bhi mere saath chalogi..n she drags her inside d jamming room..
Fab5 was so busy with der music dat dey dint noticed navni watching dem..Navya was njoying it bt nandini was having hard tym..music was making her restless..
Nandini (shouted with high tone): "stooop" "juz stop it" n she kept her hands on her ears..
Fab5 got scared 4 a moment n dey stopped on d spot turning bck..dis tym dey were not shocked by dis act of Nandini as dey know d reason..
Well others were looking @ nandini bt our lover cabir was busy looking @ navya agn..n (background music plays)
Tujhe jo maine dekha
Tujhe jo maine jana
Jo hosh tha woh toh gaya
Badan ki ye khushboo
Jagane lagi jadoo
Toh hoke bekaboo main toh gaya..(n d music ends when cabir cum bck in his senses).
Nandini calmed herself n said "Sorry" 2 fab 5 4 stopping der practice in btwn n was abt 2 Leave bt a hard voice stopped her..
Manik (with high tone): nandini!! Now u stop..stop rite der don't move frm here..
Nandini got confused n scared dat now wat nxt he is gonna do with her...Manik came closer 2 nandini wiped her tears n hold her hand So softly n bought her in d centre @ his place...
Manik: nandini now hold dis guitar n start singing rite now..
Nandini (shocked): wat?? N..n..no..I..I can't..pls let me go.
Manik (mockingly): no u can't nandini..I won't let u go..u have 2 sing rite now rite here..
To be continued..

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No Precap..wait 4 d nxt part..well so now manik malhotra is in full form..n m sure soon he will close dis nandheer chapter 4ever..n den der will b only manan..till den keep reading n c wat all things manik gonna do..pls share ur views n keep commenting...
Edited by lvsukku12 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome
will she able to play??
update soon na
thanx for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
Amazing update
Nandheer past was nice
Cavya 😆 cabir ki imagination pgl h pura
Excited for next
What will manik Malhotra will do next?
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Posted: 9 years ago
lovely update ...manik will heal her ...she will be lead singer of fab 5
manik cares for her ...she has to give herself second
chance ...loving it
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