MANAN FF-YOU BRIGHTEN UP MY LIFE (Part 8 on page 31) - Page 9

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Posted: 9 years ago
#81
Awesome
lamba wala update
mindbkowing
the flashback was amazing nandheer's relation is just so pure nd awesome
where will be she? Wese to wo koi place janti bhi nahi india me
dekhte he kya hota he
thanx forpm
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Posted: 9 years ago
#82
Its really amazing
Loved it
Thanks for the pm
Seriously wanna know ki nandu kaha gai
Continues soon

Love you
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Posted: 9 years ago
#83
Awesome update loved it an finally fab5 KO sab sach pata chalega nandu k bare mein. Manik will heal nandu after all its all about manan.
Update soon waiting to know nandu kaha hai.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#84

awesome update...

loved it so much...

flashback gave an insight into nandu's past...but want to know more...

can't wait to see what happens next...

keep up the good work and continue soon...

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Posted: 9 years ago
#85
Nice... N it was mah pleasure dear...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#86
Awesome update
Oh so navya is also there
Gud looking forward to cavya
Cabir is damn funny
Oh shit Nandini...
Eagerly waiting for next update
Plz try to make it quick
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Banner is so beautiful dear I totally loved it
The pictures r awesome
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Posted: 9 years ago
#88
Cool banner.
Thanks for pm.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hi guys here is d nxt part of my ff... N the one's who didn't saw the banner... Have a look on page 1...

Part 5

Recap: navni 1st meeting..Cavya 1st meeting..Nandini left out college don't know whr she is fab5 searching her..

Scene changes to nandini..

Nandini is standing holding her n Randheer photo frame @ d window of beautiful wood house situated on beach area..she was watching d silent voice of waves cuming n going as if its cuming n taking away all his sorrows n pain with it..n (background music plays..its a continuation of "teri yaad mein pagal pal pal rota hai")

Abb jane ham yeh pyar kya hai, darde jigar Mushkil badha hai, sunta nahee kehna koyee bhee Dil pe khabar, jith mai ada hai Samjahon kasie usse jane jaa Haare haare haare, ham toh dil se haare - (2)

(Nandini was looking @ d beach n remembering his n Randheer "beach walk n splitting water @ each other, holding each other hands n running on d sea shores, Randheer lifting nandu frm her waist n stomach n both get fell in d water" those playing n giggling sound was echoing in her ears n hers eyed is swollen due to tears)

On other side in d car..

Manik: mukti now speak up k whr r v going? N nandini!! Whr is she n wats d mystery of Nandini..!!

Mukti: Manik hum wood house jaa rahe hain n its far frm d city..m sure nandini could b der only n 1ns v reach der main tum logo ko sab bata dungi..I promise bas ek baar nandini mil jaye..

Aliya: bt Mukti how u can b so sure dat nandini woh wood house main hi milegi!! I mean she can b sumwhr else also na..

Mukti: no aliya she can't b nywhr else..m damn sure she will b der only I know her..
Scene changes..

Now nandini cum @ d centre of d house n turn her eyes everywhr..on each wall n corner she finds only hers n Randheer photo frame hanging..in drawing room a giant photo frame of "nandheer" is hanging in which nandini is sitting in front n Randheer frm back surrounded her neck frm his hand n kept his chin on her head n nandini is holding Randheer hand frm front n smiling..dey r looking so perfect with each other as made 4 each other..Nandini goes near dat huge frame (background music plays)

Har aaina thota lage hai, sach bhee hame jhutha lage hai Jaane kaha ham aa gaye haui, sara jaha rutha lage hai Kya darde diya kya kahee Haare haare haare, ham toh dil se haare - (2) (Nandini remember d moment when "nandheer" had shot dis pic it was a mesmerising moment n den she walk 2wards d stairs n while climbing d stairs she touch each n every frame of hers n Randheer n remember n moments dey shot dis pics n it must b around 3 frames hanging on wall of stairs as dis whole house is full of "nandheer" memories..n now she reach 2 der room "nandheer" room I must say..d moment she enters d room d fragrance n aroma of der love was still der as if it witnessing der love n nandini still remember d fragrance of her love Randheer..

On the top of der bed der is another huge frame of "nandheer" in which nandini is having ice cream in her n Randheer Is trying 2 put dat ice cream on her nose like a ice cream fight v must say..

Flashback


New York @nite 12:00p.m

Nandini was lying on her bad n trying 2 sleep bt she couldn't bcoz she wants 2 eat sumthing bt wat!! Evn she doesn't know n den she gets a call frm Randheer..

Randheer: hey pouty

Nandini: hey Randheer wassup..

Randheer: m cool waise tum jag rahi ho? Mujhe toh laga so gayi hogi toh thoda pareshan karu tumhe..bt no use..

Nandini (suddenly yelled): ice cream!!

Randheer: wat!! Tum nind main ho kya? Koi sapna dekh liya kya?

Nandini: arey sapna nahi yaar sach main ice cream chahiye mujhe..or else I can't sleep..haan
Randheer: pouty tum pagal ho gayi ho kya ab itni raat ko 12:00 baje tumhe Ice cream khani hain..kaha milegi tumhe ice cream? Aur uncle aunty!! dey won't evn allow u to go out @ dis tym 2 eat jus ice cream..so its better u sleep n have ur ice cream 2mrrw..

Nandini: nahi mujhe abhi matlab abhi chahiye (she is so stubborn like child n her antics can make ny1 melt)..

Randheer: bt pouty abhi kaise!! Ok I promise kal pakka I'll get ice cream 4 u n dat also a big n yummy cone 4 u..ok now gudnite n sleep

Nandini: fine rakhna tumhari ice cream tumhare paas I don't want it..m not talking 2 u..huhh bye n she hang d phone angrily..

Randheer was trying hard bt nt able 2 sleep as his pouty wish 4 sumthing n he couldn't get it dats nxt 2 impossible..

Nandini was still angry with her Randheer n blabbering..kal milne do use m not Gonna talk 2 him..he can't get me a simple ice cream 4 me as if I demanded sumthing high frm him..ek ice cream hi toh thi..oh god ab kya karu kaha se lau ice cream n den her phone starts ringing n it was Randheer..

Nandini (2 herself): now y d hell he is calling me when I don't wanna talk 2 him..main phone uthaungi hi nahi..n she don't answer d call 3 tyms..bt in 4th tym she answered as she knows dat he will keep calling unless she answers it..

Nandini: no hello nothing..bolo kya hua? Ab kya baat karni hain..!!
Randheer: open d door rite now..

Nandini (shocked): wat!! Y should I open d door @ dis tym..r u mad? No no I can't. .
Randheer (rolling his eyes like oh god): arey stupid m standing out of ur house now open d door fast..

Nandini: ohh ok wait m cuming..n she hang d call n starts blabbering oh god ye ladka pura pagal hain ye bhi koi tym hain aane ka..m sure sry bolne aaya hoga..n with dis she opens d door..

Nandini: tum pagal ho tum iss waqt yaha kya kar rahe ho?

Randheer don't listen 2 her n directly cums inside n den he goes upstairs in her room..

Nandini: aiyoo ye kabhi kuch nahi sunta..abhi bhi meri baat sune bina hi chala gaya..n den she too move 2wards her room..

Nandini: Randheer now will u answer me dat wat u r doing here?

Randheer takes out a box which he was hiding @ bck..n nandini yelled with happiness..
Nandini: ice cream!! Yummy. .mujhe pata tha I knew k u can nvr resist my wish..awwn I love u my baby n she kissed him n he too hugs her..

Randheer: u know na k I can nvr disobey u or resist ur ny demand whether its small or big n dats y u juz wanna trouble me..nways ab khao or else it will get melt..

Nandini: awww so sweet of u my baby n dats y I love u so much..

Randheer: n I love u 3 much my pouty..n now can v have ur ice cream..

Nandini : yes..n dey sit on her bed n nandini starts having ice cream n Randheer starts licking ice cream frm her lips n nandini naughtily puts ice cream on his nose n Randheer hold her hand tries 2 put dat same ice cream in her nose n like dis dey r having ice cream fight n dey took der selfies having ice cream on der nose n nandini is putting her tongue out @ side of her lips n like dis dat moment is captured..

Flashback ends


N nandini came out of her thoughts n she went sat @ d corner of her room whole shattered n depressed..

Now fab5 also reached @ dat wood house..

Dhruv: mukti r u sure ye wahi jagah hain..I mean idhar kitna sannata hain aur samundar ke alawa kuch nahi hain...

Mukti: yes dhruv m damn sure ye wahi jagah hain..aur woh dekh nandini's car..I knew dat she must b here nowhere else she could b..

Fab5 immediately run 2wards d car n find it empty n dey saw d house door was lil open dey move 2wards d house n Mukti opens d door slowly 2 find nandini bt d drawing room was empty..

N now Fab4 enter inside n dey get d biggest shock of der life..on every corner dey found frames of "nandheer" sum were with playing guitar n performing n sum were nandheer hugging n Cuddling each other..

Manik was speechless he doesn't know how 2 react..as if his heart is hurting frm inside aftr seeing nandu with sum guy n dat also in dis avatar which he never thought abt..too many questions was running in his head n he doesn't have answer of ny1 of it..

Mukti (screaming): nandini!! Nandini! Nandini! N dey finally reached in her room..Mukti was hell shocked seeing nandini in dat same condition which she saw her 2yrs ago on Randheer death..as if no life in her like a dead body..n now it was agn a another shocking moment 4 fab4 2 find nandini in dis condition..

Mukti: nandini my baby r u ok? Aur ye tum ne apna kya haal bana rakha hain..sambhalo apne aap ko..u r destroying urself pls don't do dat..he won't cum he is no more..Randheer ab kabhi nahi aayega..

Oh agn its a new shock 4 fab4 dey should call it "shock day" bcoz 1 after another shock dey r getting aur jawab kisi ka bhi nahi..n now new question arise k who dis Randheer agn?? All dis questions were making dem mad like hell..

Nandini: mukti pls leave me alone..pls let me leave alone with my Randheer n his memories..jus go pls..

Mukti: no I won't..I can't jus leave u alone here..n u know it vry well..Nandini its too much now..u r too much depressed n like dis u r killing urself dammit..y don't u understand..kisi ke chale jane se life nahi rukti..

Fab4 was jus hearing der conversation n it was going like a bouncer ftm der head as dey r unaware of d truth..n finally manik screamed..

Manik ( loudly): mukti!! Wats all going on pls tell us dammit..wats d mystery who is dis guy Randheer? N wats his n nandini connection?? Pls jus answer it..

Aliya: yes mukti pls tell us sumthing? Wats all dis..humein sach janna hain..

Mukti got frustrated with all of dem bcoz on 1 side nandini is ruining her life n on other side fab4 need der answers..she don't know k whom 2 handle 1st nandini or fab4!!

Mukti wipes her tears n angrily cum 2wards aliya n manik n hold der hands n take dem downstairs in d drawing area whr all d pics of nandheer is hanging..

Mukti (high tone): guys u all wanna know na k who is real nandini n wats her mystery so look @ dis postures..she is my Nandini my Rockstar nandini jo ab kahi kho gayi..n slowly her tone get low n she starts sobbing..

Cabir: dis guy who is he with guitar n holding her??

Mukti: yahi toh woh hain jiske wajah se nandini ki ye halat..he is Randheer Obroi d only love n life of Nandini Moorthy n also a famous rockstar n a guitarists..ppl call dem "nandheer" dey were famous with dis name nandheer..well now it was a another shock 4 dem specialy 4 manik..

Manik heart skipped a bit aftr hearing abt Randheer..he couldn't have hold on himself n a lone tear came in his eyes aftr knowing dat nandini already belong 2 sum1 else bt he managed 2 hide it frm fab4..

Dhruv: mukti toh ab ye kaha hain? Whr he is n y he can't cum bck?

Mukti: guys he is no more..he passed away jus 2yrs ago..

Fab4 (unison): Wat!! Now agn shock..

Mukti: yes Dat 1 incident changed d whole life of Nandini..my Rockstar Nandini Moorthy ab sirf ek nandini hain d day she lost him she lost her mudic too bcoz he was d real music of his life he taught her music bt now dat music turned into a pain 4 her..now toh she dont rvn touch guitar she jus run away (manik remember dat scene d way nandini ran away frm music library with teary eyes n she excused herself n went frm jamming room also)
Manik: ohh now I know k y she jus ran away frm d music library n frm jamming room too..bcoz of music shit man how sum1 can hate music..infact through music v can take away all our pain n anger..n it works really..

Mukti: yes i know bt nandini doesn't kyunki music use Randheer ki yaad dilata hain n agn she gets breakdown.. dats y I was worried abt her..she never like dis b4..she loves music n with d help of music she brings smile on evry1 faces she was full of life..she spreads love wherever she goes n she can never c ny1 in pain..bt now look @ her she is in soo much pain..aur main uski behen hoke bhi kuch nahi kar pa rahi hoon..m feeling so helpless I hate myself 4 dis..Mukti was cursing herself badly..

Fab4: relax Mukti..u r not 1 2 b blamed..v know dat u r trying ur best 2 keep her happy..bt may b she only doesn't want 2..

Mukti: I know dat bt may b she don't have ny reason 2 b happy n m not able 2 give her a reason..use lagta hain ki Randheer hi uski sabse badi khushi thi aur ab jsb wahi nahi hain toh khushi kaisi.. ab hum use kaise samjhaye ki life is not so simple v have 2 kee1p moving in life.. ife kisi ke liye nahi rukti..bt she don't understand..usne apne aap ko Randheer ki yaadon ke saath baand rakha hain..

Aftr hearing abt nandini fab5 bcame too emotional n evn der eyes got wet with d tears..

To be continued..

I don't know whether u all will like it or not n if not good den pls let me know..n I know k msnan scenes bilkul bhi nahi hain ismein bt it will b in nxt part bcoz maan ke liye manik ko nandini ka past janna zaroori tha aur aage bhi bohot kuch janna baki hain..dats highlighted more on "nandheer" Flashback more so dat u guys also don't get confused n u must know wats d relation of nandheer n y nandini is like dis..m sry if its boring pls pls do comment n let me know k how u find d nandheer relationship?
N for PM's buddy me...
Edited by lvsukku12 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#90

Originally posted by: DikshaAnand

Oh so dat was her past randheer
Nandini hates music
Manik toh pgl ho gya Nandini ke peeche 😛

thnx

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