manan : love or lust (part 8 updated - page- 12) 3.06.16

Hii guys.. I am Akansha I am not new here but writing story for the first time hope you all support me it won't be long.. but still not too short also.. okk

Mom: Nandu wake up dear. You are late. Today is your first day for your college. You want to be late on the first day?
Nandu: Mom bas 2 minutes more plz...

Mom: OK you sleep then mujhe mat bolna when I will not give you your pocket.
Nandu: What's this mom?? Ok go I will freshen up and will join you at breakfast table ok?
Saying this she open her eyes and the first thing she did is . She arranged her bed and went to take shower.

Next scene.
Manik: what the hell?? GO away or you will be in hell in seconds?
Cabir :Manik chod usse.
Dhruv: buddy leave him

In college

Nanduuu... someone screamed
Nandu kept her hands on her ears due to the scream and was about to turn when she felt someone totally crushing her bones between his arms.

Now bolo shall I continue or not.. acha let me tell it will not only be romantic but funny tooo.. its would be different from story plot .. And specially in my story there is no separation I mean little senti senti batein to hoti hai ..jhagda bhi hota hai..par ending kabhi sad nahi hoti. .or separation is something I can't afford



Characters -page 2
part 1- page 2


Part 2- page 3

part3- page4


Part 4- page 6 [
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]Part 6- page 9
part 7 - page 10

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Important characters introduction (others will be introduced in between the story) Characters
Nandini murthy - She lives with her mom and dad. They are one of the richest family in the country but she doesn't like to disclose it so she stays like a simple girl in Mumbai with her mom. She is very beautiful, bubbly , love helping others, and very talented too which is only known by some of her close people's including her parents. She had completed her studies from Us and came to India to join S.P.A.C.E as per her amms wish.

Manik Malhotra - He is totally like a greek god for which every girl dreamt of but on other side he is too arrogant, short tempered, live for his friends. He was in relation with alya but broke up and due to that he didn't believe in love. He is the only son of The Malhotra's. He lives with his mom and his dad stays in US but often come to met them. He hates his mom . Actually step mom.

Cabir Dhavan: Manik's bestie . He understand his friends before even he speaks. They are like soul brothers. Cabir is very jolly type he love to crack jokes that too very embarrassing type.but one other side he has the softest which is only known to manik .

Dhruv : He is maniks buddy as he says and he too thinks him as same . Dhruv loves Alya but never expressed cause he wasn't sure about it.

Alya: She is Manik's childhood friend. After her and Manik's breakup they decided to be aas friends and move on in their lives . She likes Dhruv but never got to any conclusions.Mukti: The most perfect character. She is in relation to Abhimanyu. And this is only known to nandini as she is mukti's cousin sis. She loves her friends a lot but never discloses her personal life infront of them

Abhimanyu Thakkar: He is also a rich boy . He too loves mukti but for him nandu is the dearest as he loves her as his little sister.

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Part 2
On the other side nandu entered the college and was just wondering here and there . She knew that his friend cum brother Abhi studies here , she hadn't told him about her admission over here she wanted to surprise him but she was unaware of the fact that her sis mukti also studies here and their gonna be interesting.
Manik was totally angry due to that boy's incident but the real reason for his anger was his morning talk with nyonika which was the hellest thing he thinks. So he directly went to his personal room which wasn't known by even fab4 . It was a room beside store room which was actually his father's room where he used to do office works. He went inside took a guitar placed beside the table and started playing it harshly taking out all his anger on it. His index finger got aa cut but he was like just not in a state to notice it. Meanwhile Nandu was just passing by the room when she heard the voice. She did not know why but she was attracted towards the music and when she went near the door fortunately the door was open she saw a tall, well - built figure sitting in a dark room playing guitar as he was sitting beside window so only his hands were visible which attracted nandu's attention to the cut in his hand the blood flowing she felt like she was in pain but ignoring all her dumbo thought she went near him and placed her hand on his hard shoulders . Both of them felt like current running through there bodies but before she could utter anything manik suddenly pulled her due to which she directly fell on his lap having her eyes tightly closed and face having scared expression.
Manik - What the hee...
He was about to shout when suddenly he was spellbound she her face which was glowing because of the sun rays falling on her face. Manik's mouth was still . No expression . He was shocked . For few seconds he thought he was seing some angel from heaven and her warmth was giving him the feeling of heaven . His mouth was in 'o' conditions when she open one of her eyes so see the situation then seing herself on his self she suddenly stood with a jerk. She didn't knew why when she came out of his lap she felt something sadbut what she didn't know. She turned her face to other side. Till now manik came back to his sense and by crushing all his thoughts and coming back to his angry tone told her is a ice cold tone
Manik- Hello! Miss XYZ can you plz tell what the hell are you doing here?
She turned listening his voice.
And seing him she was also spellbound as early told he is no less than a greek god, but she composed herself and said in the lower tone which contain a little nervousness
Nandu- Wo..woo... aapki apki...index ...fingerrre..pe ek cut hai..
Manik saw his index finger and then got to know about the cut . But being a a monster he said.
Manik- So what??? Listen don't tell me you came here to help me..and alll.. I know it all because you just wanted to touch me...
As according to him no one cares for him except his friends because being the only heir of malhotra and being so stupendous hot ..every girl was mad for him .
Nandu- What? Like really.? I mean you have so cheap thinking ? What do you think of yourself? A superstar or what that I will find ways to touch you.
She bursted out without noticing that he left.
When she turned she saw he had already left and she became more angry and she also stormed out of the room
While she walking to the cafe she heard someone screaming her name .
Abhi- Nanduuu
Nandini stoped at her place but before she could understand anything she found herself totally crushed between two arms . She almost got pain her arms.
Then she noticed it was abhi and she also gave him a FRIENDLY hug.
Nandu- Abhi chod mujhe.
Abhi- haan ..kaisi hai meri teddy bear nandu!
Nandu- Haww! Abhi! Yahan to mujhe teddy mat bulao
Abhi- Main kya karuun meri sis to hai hi teddy jaisi cute.
Saying this he pulled her cheeks.
Nandu- Abhi... huuh
Abhi - Acha ye bata tu yahan kaisi?
Nandu- Wo maine ye college join kiya hai.
Abhi- Wow, par tune mujhe pehle kyuun nahi bataya . AUR uncle aunty kaisi hain? Nandu- haan ..haan sab thik.hain.. aur main tujhe surprise dena chahti thi issliye nahi bataaya.. aur tu bata mukti kaisi hain aur wo kahan hain?

Abhi was about to tell about mukti and fab5.

Suddenly his phone rang and it was mukti so he excused a smiling nandu seing mukti's name on the phone.

Nandu went towards the canteen.

Precap- Manik nandu faceoff. Nandu fainted . Mukti shouting of manik Ab socho socho aise kya hua ki nandu behosh ho gayi..aur mukti manik pe kyyn chilla rahi thi.. Guys I have given yiu along update so plzz give loong lng feedback plzz.. if any mistakes plzz telll and assumptions are very much welcome 😛

Nice start. I'm loving this...