manan : love or lust (part 8 updated - page- 12) 3.06.16

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Rooth348

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Posted: 9 years ago

#41

Lovely update dear...
So u have kept a surprise here...
Interesting yaar...
Continue soon...

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qamarkhan87

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Posted: 9 years ago

#42

Nice...so finally mr.dracula ne sorry bol diya woh bhi bade style se 😉... may be amms ka pen diya manik ne

Stay blessed and update soon

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dhillon90

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Posted: 9 years ago

#43

Awesome update
Cabir aur aliya ko doubt ho rha hai manik ke behaviour pe...wowww manik ne nandu ko pen diya...lovd it
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eppie99

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Posted: 9 years ago

#44

Nice one

hahaahaha this is the 1st ff where aliya has got sum brains

continue soon

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sharon.babu

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Posted: 9 years ago

#45

awesome update...

loved it so much...

wondering why nandu is smiling...

manik always finding ways to grab nandu into the room...

can't wait to see what happens next...

keep up the good work and continue soon...

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nitishine

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Posted: 9 years ago

#46

Part 6..
Manik loosened his grip on her. ..

Manik in very pleasant tone- I am sorry nandini .
Nandini seing her amms pen totally fine and perfect. .just couldn't hold herself and kissed manik on his cheek
And said
Thanks. .manik ..I forgive you...You broke my pen..but you made it fine.
Thanks a lot... this pen...it mean a lot to me...a. lot..
Saying this she looked and manik and was confused seing manik in a shocked condition.. his eyes widened and staring her..his left hand caressing his left cheek..as if feeling something there Only then nandu noticed there position. She saw how close they were standing...how her whole body weight was on him..and how he was grabbing her waist... this made shivers run down her spine.. she blushed looking down.. but the thing which according to her embarrassed her was that she kissed himm..
She was thinking what the hell he must be thinking. .
She said in a low voice- Woo..wooo.. I ..a..amm sorryy...I ggoott...excited. .

Listening this manik got back in his senses ..
Manik- haann whhaat... ohhh..haaann..yyesd..its..ok

He wasn't finding words to speak..he Left her waist and hand and moved a bit far..
BOTH were looking everywhere except each other.
And then nandu said.
But Mr. Dracula don't think I am scared of you... and never ever dare to shout on me..
Manik also got back on his altitude - Oohh hello hold...on.. what did you called me... dracula and what you are. .a fairy or what... and yaa.. you should actually be scared of me..you know na...Dracula. .love to suck the whole blood.. of the body. .and I would love to do that. ... wanaa. Try..
NANDU in shocked - Whhhat. .. are you mad or what??
Manik- yes I am... Nandu- huu ... mr. Dracula .. Saying this nandu. .left the room.
Manik smirking. - Itssofun to tease her. .And the way she pout...I so wanna kiss her. . Wait wht did I say... kisss.. oommgg this girl is making me crazy..
Saying this he went to his practice room.
Fab4 were sitting there tunning there instruments. .
Manik entered. . And mukti was the first one to ask .- Manik tuuune nandu ko sorrybol diya..sis ahe forgave you. .tune phir se kuch bola to nahi. .
Cabir..dhruv and alya was also eager to know. .
Manik- Are mukti..rukk..sanns to lene. .dey.. and yaa I said sorry and Cabir- What koi mujhe pinch karooo yaar . I mean The Manik Malhotra said sorry ... abhi to bahot bol raha tha .I won't say sorry and all...ab kya hua...
Manik- Are yaar..kal sayad kuch jyaada hi ho gaya..tha..so I felt I was wrong isliye..I said sorry..and she is mukti's sis..also..
Cabir- Achha...okk..chal ab practice karte hai.

All agreed and started practicing. .after practicing. .
They all were chatting ..muktu and alys were talking ..dhruv was tunning his guitar..and her..manbir were sitting. .
Suddenly cabir shouted. Cabir- Ye kaise hua?
Manik- kya?
Cabir- ye dark circles ..tu rat ko soya nahi..kya kar raha tha.
Manik in mind- kaise sota..rat bhar nandini ke aason samne aa ja rahe the...wo khubsurat chehra...wo aankhen..wo lips...woo.

Cabir- kahan khoo gaya...
Manik- kahin nahi.wo rat ko need nahi aayi..
Cabir- kyuun kisi ki yaad aaa rahi thi..
Manik- tu pagal hai..tu mujhse pakka pitega..
Cabir- Acha... wo to dekh lenge.
Precap - Nandu singing.. Fab4 shocked. Mukti proud

Guys I don't know whether my story is as per your expectations. ..or not..If yiu don't like it plzz telll...and if you like it..plzzz keep supporting. .and give long feedbacks. .so that I could update next part soon...
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Edited by nitishine - 9 years ago

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qamarkhan87

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Posted: 9 years ago

#47

Wow...amazing update

Nandu kissed him and he is shocked

And raat bhar uska face, eyes yaad karke soya nhn banda 😳

Love their cute fight of dracula and fairy

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dhillon90

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Posted: 9 years ago

#48

Awesome
Amazing update
Nandu ne manik ki cheek pr kiss kiya...manik shockd...aawww nandu ne manik ke raaton ki neend chura li ab toh din ka chain bhi chla jayega hahahahaha...lovd it...continue soon

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ruchi116

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Posted: 9 years ago

#49

Awesome update nandu kissed manik wow cabir n his never ending teasing session I love ur story.
Update soon eager to know how they will fall in love with each other.