manan : love or lust (part 8 updated - page- 12) 3.06.16 - Page 4

Sorru for being late...
Actually I went to my grandmother's house. .
So wasn't able to post..
so here is long ..long..post.

Abhi took nandu to sick room. . Laid her on the bed. .Meanwhile mukti also joined them.
Mukti- Abhi stood on either of the bed.. Doctor came and saw her..
ABHI AND MUKTI TOGETHER - Is she fine?
And see each other.
Doctor- Yaa actually due to shock and nervousness she fainted.
Don't worry she will be fine and woke up soon.. just make sure she didn't take any type of stress..
Both Abhi and mukti nodded their head.
Saying this doctor left from there. .

Abhi and mukti sat there..
After half an hour. Nandu woke with a jerk.
Nandu- Ammms.
Mukti- Nandu relax. .hum college mein hain tu shant ho jaa..kuch nahi hua.
Nandu- muukk..kkkt.iii. wooo ammms..meeereee saammmnne...woo..carrr..mainn.kuch...nahii.
Mukti suddenly hugged her.
Mukti- Choti tu phir. .main hun tere paas..tu shant ho jaaa.
Nandu felt a little relaxed.
Abhi to chill the environment- kya teddy bear aaj to tu panda bangayi hain..bilkul fatty fatty aur sad sad.
Nandu smiled a little.
Mukti to abhi playing along with him- Aur tu kyaa phate hui jutte Jaise jokes pass kar raha hain..
ABHI- Are mukti jab teri jaise hot girl are samne ho to achaa khasa branded shoe bhi phat jaye..
Listening this nandu also burst in laughter both of them accompanied her..

Abhi said nandu tu aaj ghar jake rest kar..main tujhe dtop kar deta huun. main kal tujhe lene aa jaunga.
Mukti - Haan choti tu ghar jaa..main saam ko aati huun tujhse milne..okk

Nandu- ok..

Nandu left with abhi.
Here in canteen.fab4 where sitting Silently with lots of question in there mind.
Mukti entered the canteen and went to them.
Seing her coming all 4 stood up.
Mukti went infront of manik
Manik- mukk ... before he could say anything.
Mukti- Manik I am sorry ..mujhe tujhpe chillana nahi chaiye tha. .oar maain bhi kya karti nandu ko aise dekh kar ..I lost my control. .. I am sorry.

This is the depth of there friendship. .which is unmeasurable. Manik- Are mukti it was my fault I am sorry..tu sorry mat bol
They both hug each other..
Cabir- Waise aaj tu sachi mein lady bheem lag rahi thi..
Mukti - cabirrr..
Alya - Waise mukti how do you know that girl...what was her name...
Mukti - Nandini .. Nandini murthy is her name and she my cousin sister..

Cabir- ohhh to gussa hona tunne usse borrow kiya hain ki ussne tujhe..
Mukti- nahi nahi..hum tumare jaisi..brain borrow nahi karte.
This time cabir was spellbound. .heheh. his joke was cracked on him Alya- Aur wo abhimanyu. .how do he knows nandu? And do you know him? I mean the way you both were talking..and alll..
Mukti firstly didn't found words and then thought for a while and said.
Mukti- Wo he is nandu's childhood friend and I have met him at nandu's home but we rarely talk.
She said without making any eye contact with anyone.

Dhruv- Waise what is the mystery behind that pen?
Cabir- Chal at least tunne ye puch liye warna mujhe lagga alya will again win the tagg for question queen..
Alya- cabir. Cabir- okk.okkk sorryyy.. mukti ab tu bolegi yaa invitation de????????
Mukti little hesitated- Wo guys...
Manik- Mukti relax... we are your friends you can share with us..
Mukti took a deep breath and started. .
Mukti- Wo guys.that pen..wo pen nandini ki amms ki thi.. it was the last gift of her amms...
MANIK- But why was ahe so horrified. ?
Mukti- manik woo actually nandu ki amms died in a car accident infront of her..just in a trial of saving her..she loved her amms a lot.. she was in shock for 3 weeks..They stayed in US.. So just to change her mind they all came to India. . Anything related to her makes her remind that accident. .so when the pen was broken..ahe got shattered again.
Manik really felt guilty and sad. ..he was cursing himself. ..He was really angry on himself.

Manik- Is.. she fine??
Mukti- Yaa now she is fine... but I know she's still sad.. I told her to go home.

Dhruv- Buddy I think you should apologise her.
Alya- But manik ne Aj tak kissi stranger ko sorry nahi bola..

Manik- But she is not a stranger. . He said these words by flowing in his emotion.
Suddenly he realised what be said and. Stop aaat his place
He was very much confused. .his mind state was totally different as to his heart..what he was saying was totally different from his thinking.
He was literally confused about him being himself or not..

So here is the update..
Haww..nanduu apni ammms ke incident se darri hui..thi...
Alya Miss. Question mark..aur humara altime cupid to iss par chup ho gaya .
What do you think the new morning will bring for manan.a start of new friendship or agian new cliff hanger. What do you think will Manik apologise or not..?? What will nandu do??


Thanks a lot guys..such a good response. .love you alll...
hope I am ot making you all sad..

just keep loving me.
Akansha

Amazing
Awesome
Superbb update
Nicely written
Lovd it
Continue soon

awesome update...

loved it so much...

want to see how manik is gonna apologise to nandu...

can't wait to see what happens next...

keep up the good work and continue soon...

Loved it

Plzzz add more Manan scenes...
Hope tumhara story ...story k progress hone k sath interesting hooogaa...as name
Love or Lust

Thanks for your love...
Guys I know my last update was not up to your expectations ..I am really really sorryyy for it..
hope this. .update .will be good enough. .
And yaa after this alll the update will contain more manan scene. I promise. Paka wall promise. .
ANY SCENE YOU WANT TO SEE COMMENT I WILL ADD IF I LIKE ...

Part 5-

Manik was himself dumbstruck what he said...then he whispered to himself I have met this girl only twice and I have started blabbering god knows what's happening with me..

Then cabir asked- She is not a stranger to kya hai?
Manik- Wo..wooo she is mukti's sister naa that's why? And yaa guys yiu are right I think I should apologise her.

Mukti- Okk manik tu kal college mein usse sorry bol dena.. Main ajj usse baat karungi
Cabir- Ajj kyyun nahi.
Mukti - Wo she doesn't like anyone coming to her home... cabir- Aisa kyuun mukti - baas aise hiii Cabir- Okkk
Mukti- Waise cabir tu kuch jyaada hi interested lag raha hai nandini mein.

Cabir - Haan so why won't I..yahan hum sab ab usmein interested hain ..kyuun manik?

Manik- What.?? I mean why the hell will I be interested in her...??

Cabir - Are main teri baat nahi kar raha..tu to exceptional hai..main apni aur dhruv ki baat kar raha tha..I mean you she looks beautiful yaar..and hot tooo and the most important thing she is the first one to stand against fab5 ..Heheh. .She has guts yaar.. Mukti - haan wo to hain aakhir behan kiski hai..?
Cabir- Lady hulk kii.
Mukti-cabirrr..
Cabir - okk.okkk sorryyy

Here in evening mukti met nandu and said sorry to her in place of her and told her about manik and fab3...and their whereabouts etc..etc... And she said that its..okk.and don't worry she is fine now.. But somewhere deep inside she had some doubts that even after such encounters with her Mr. Dracula she somewhere felt that he wasn't as he shows the world.. but shooing away all her thoughts she slept just to welcome a new morning. Before sleeping she told mukti not to tell anyone about her being rich and to tell that she is a middle class girl and mukti agreed to her cause after nandu ' s parents mukti and then abhi were the most closest friends and family.


Next morning
As usual there was a hustle bustle in the college and then Fab5 entered the college with their famous smirk on there faces and directly went to there music room..they alll settled..

Cabir - So manik...tunne kya socha? Manik - About what?
Cabir - Are nandu ke barein mein?
Manik in irritated tone - Uske barein mein kya?
Cabir - Are I am asking how you gonna apologise her? I mean The Manik Malhotra and apology are to poles apart. . So have you practiced it??
Manik- Ha ha ha verryyy fuunny. .aaaja main tujhe pe practice karta huun. Pehle tujhe maarta huun ..phir apology session start karte hain. .okkk he said in an angry tone..

Cabir - Acha baba sorry gussa kyyun hota hain?? Par ye to bata how you apologise her. Manik- Are sorry bol dunga..baat khatam. .

Mukti who was till now enjoying the scenario ...said - Manik bas sorru se kaam nahi chalne walls I mean you hurted her feelings. .

Manik- He thought something and then went saying. .main aur kuch nahi karne wallla.

All nodded their head knowing his altitude.
But cabir said to himself - Par mujhe kyuun lagta hai ki tu pakka kuch karne wala hai..
Alya whi was standing beside cabir said to him - Don't you think he is Behaving little weard..
Cabir- Hmmm. .so someone other that me also have mind..in fab5...cabir whispered ..
Alya- You said something. ..
Cabir- no..noo..nahi..to.

Here nandu entered the college with abhi..as abhi promised yesterday. .

Nandu was fine but was little upset from her first days experience in her new college..

Nandu excused herself and went to the washroom and asked abhi to wait in their practice room.
One pair of eyes were noticing her. . She came out of the washroom and headed towards the practice roon when a pain of hands pulled her inside a vacant room she was about to screem.when she saw a familiar pair of eyes..yes his eyes had till now became familiar to her. .but his touch again send shivers to her body as well his...

Manik whispered - Don't shout.
Nandu said in a angry tone - What kind of behaviour is this..why have you brought me here..Are you mad or what?
Manik Said woo..actually...I wanted to say.say...you... ..you. . He was.not able to speak. .and he was looking here and there. .. Nandini - Say what??? Say fast and if this is your new prank or anything then let me tell you..don't you dare .
Manik Said... -...Wo.I am sorry..
He said it in a go.
Nandini- what??
Manik - I said I am sorry. ...
Nandini in a sarcastic way- ohh so yo are saying sorry..for what for shouting on me yesterday. Or assuming rubbish about. Me.or breaking my amms pen..
Saying this tears appeared in her eyes thinking about her amms.

Saying this ahe started walking.
Manik grabbed her waist and pulled her towards him making her crash into his chest...he wiped her tears slowly and again said I am sorry softly seing into her eyes.. intensely ..saying this he took her right hand hand and kept something on it.
Nandu who was still drowning felt something on her palm..and look toward it and a smile appeared on her..
Manik also smiled unknowingly seing her. .
He had grabbed her waist tightly so he loosened his grip ..


Precap - Cabir- Ye kaise hua?
Manik- kya?
Cabir- ye dark circles ..tu rat ko soya nahi..kya kar raha tha.


So guys what do you think manik ne nandu ko. Diya ki..she smiled. .and what was cabir saying in precap.. wait and watch . Long update hain..sooo long long comments chahiye...
waise abb..manik nandu se ..and nandu manik se attract ho rahi hai.. love iis blooming... don't woryyy wo log hai hi aise. Made for each other...love you alll
enjoy..
take care
Akansha

Nice update

Amazin' update
so manik apologized to nandu
waiting for the next update

Wowww dr nice start...

It wz really awsm dea..keep writing! Waitin fo d nxt update!