#3 Devil's Bride manan ff link of thread 4 on pg 1 - Page 22

wow!!!

😉Such a wonderful update donot worry we will not report😳😉

Originally posted by: myruh

Res

Unress...!!

Oh god it was damn hot...!! Like seriously ..

U nailed it ...

The update was full of romance so samajh nahi aaraha ki kya likhu so i would like to say ki..

It was fabulous

Exciting

Interesting

Superb

Mindblowing

Super hot

Keep the gud work

Continue soonish

Stay blessed

Loada of love

Myrah

Am tho dreaming in manan la la land only aur kya bolu..ufff trust me it was damnnn hot you penned it amazingly 👏👏👏 continue soon...

Originally posted by: anglechotti

This was the most hot or the hottest update till the date dear...

U just nailed it this update and the both manik and nandinis povs u written those veryyy veryyy amazingly u know I m like watching this not reading...

U r such an amazing writer dear and believe me its nt at all vulgar this is the most passionate and firey update...

Nw toh I m so excited to know what will be there reaction in morning..

Please please please continue soon Can't wait further for next update Please continue asap...

Love you a lottt for this amazing update dear...

Keep smiling and rocking as always...

well the next part is the last update of their happiness i will try my best to give you romantic and lovey dovey types update no drama in next update it will be again a different update of devil's bride
and i m so glad u like this update i was so afraid like did explain it too much but thank god it doesnt sounds like po*n

Originally posted by: abhutani0311

This was HAWT! Seriously...mujhe toh padh ke he kuch ho raha tha how you managed to write i dont know :P continue soon and thanks for the PM!

hehe mene likha hai toh i wasnt feeling anything but kash me devil's ki reader hoti tab muje experience mill jata but alas i m happy to a writer of this story
ya but i was afraid like did i explain it too much

Originally posted by: HTA111

Sexy sultry seductive beautiful update

Manik was losing himself looking at Nandu all hot and sexy all he want to hold her and kiss her like every second and jealous manik was too awesome what a punch as no one can touch his Nandu and after all the realization he kissed her madly deeply insanely and the wild intense and passionate love making moments

He was not that drunk that he dint realise what he was doing so how can he blame her for taking advantage of his condition and call her names poor soul only bearing coz she loves him and their baby

Continue soon and thanks for pm

nope he never said he wasnt in his senses he just said why she didnt stop him if she dont wants to be with him that's all seems like you really like there love making scene chlo mehnat safal hui meri pheww feeling happy now

Originally posted by: sri_valli

such an intense,steamy,hot,romantic update dear...but trust me it doesn't sound any vulgar through out the update...manik really make nandini feel that she is the most beautiful girl on earth...this was the first love making episode I ever read which contains so much of passion but without vulgarity...hats off to U gal...and the humourous writer in U is back...i liked the convo between manik and lil devil...loved jelousy manik...waiting for next morning in ur next update...

na it wasnt that much funny but i wanted to make it hot and sexy and i m successful in this glad tht u like it and u didn't found it vulgar i; was so afraid like did i explain it too much and me or likh skti thi but i thought itna bhot hai

Originally posted by: Pari_mananholic

Wow awesome...

Thr was a mixture of love...passion...madness...want...

Desires...everything...

But dear it was not vulgur...

It was soo wow...

Manik talks during make was wow...

No one can beat jealous manik...

Luved it...

Pls pm me if possible...

Update soon...

sure you can send me buddy req i will surely pm you in next update and thanks glad you like it

Originally posted by: angel_110

Wow..!! super hottt romantic..wonderful update...u just nailed it girl.. 😊
probably the best make out update i have ever read..it was nt at all vulgar... it is so beautifully written...
matlab kaise.. like how u always write this much brilliantly...
u are an all rounder in writing..whether it may be humour, romantic..or dark intense scene...
first of all..the conversation of manik n his lil devil was awesome...how much spell bound he was after lukng at his gorgeous wife..
den jealous drunk manik was a treat to read.. omg he literally dragged her out of the party...he is very possessive of her...
make out was super hott...the sweet little things he was saying to her were jus too gud... 😳
wt i love the most is the way u describe their each n every emotion n feelings... 😊
aur kya bolu...jitna bhi bolu it wud be less...loved the update very much...


take care..!
keep smiling..!
stay blessed..! n thanks for the pm😊

thanks for the complement glad u liked my writting skills and what to say jitna bhi bolu it would be less for my devil's i really dont know how i wrote this a big achievement for me i really love this story and my readers too such a beautiful experience it is for me