#3 Devil's Bride manan ff link of thread 4 on pg 1 - Page 20

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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow awesome update...yaar its superb..First of all their fight over the dresses & Manik's devil mind talk its so nice...& then jealous Manik who carried Nandini on his shoulder omg...& then their talk cum fight over jealous Manik its so sweet..Then Manik's way to shut Nandu's mouth...& then makeout omg.its so bliss..its not at all vulgur for a moment..it's so passionate...You said it right that you don't make their makeout emotional but its so hot...& in last Manik asks Nandini about her virginity & their last first wala talk..its so nice...U panned this update so beautiful..its awesome..Waiting for next part & excited also..what will be their reaction wanted to know...Please update soon don't take so much time..please 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
No,it ws nice...no vulgarity...beautifully potrayed the scenes & emotions...!!!waitng fr nxt...post it soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nd this update was also beyond description ... Lyk seriously ... Too gud it was ...
Ur writing was awesome ... N this update was too sensual, hot ,romantic n what not ...
Really hats off to u fr writing this part ... Loved it ... Yaar jab Manik itna pyaar karta tha Nandini se toh aisa kya ho gya k he started hating her ... Sirf ek Dhruv ki entry se he started feeling insecured ????
This is nt gud Manik ... Nd actually u made me cry in the previous update ...
Pta nhi aage aur kya kya hone wala hai ... God ...
Okay I'm waiting fr hte nxt update egarly ... Plz plz plz plz post it sooonnniishh ...
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Posted: 9 years ago
amazing update
i loved the jealous manik
and the way he shut her mouth
and after that i'm speechless
no words to describe😳
waiting for more such parts
update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Superb update. ..awesome...
N the romance...that was super duperrr amazing. ..
Keep it up dear...too good...
Tc stay blessed
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Posted: 9 years ago
Amazing updateee...finallyyy...they did it👍🏼anyways thanks for pm...waiting for next😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
Aashna sorry again fro late reply...
m really sorry yar...
but your update chapter 30 was a shock as new things were being opened...
and emotional too..
loved all the characters...
manik is reaction upto mark.. as it hasn't yet revealed but i think some misunderstanding...
alya's concerned reaction for nandini justified...
nandini reaction was too awesome...
in all a wonderful chapter...
emotional too...
aliya nandini scene was nice...
aliya was concerned for nandini and was happy that everything is going good between nandini and manik...
but nandini was escaping eye to eye contact with alya..
as the truth is different what is shown to the rest of the world...
manik could accompany nandini to hospital..
so alya accompanied her...
but whatever happened in hospital was shocking...
shocking is an understatement...
the world came down for all three... nandini alya and manik...
though all had different reason to get shock and hurt...
doctor after check up said that nandini needs to abort the child and she is very weak...
and cannnot carry the child...
and if she even then does so...
her life is in danger...
it was like a bomb...
nandini was numb hearing this and was not able to utter even a word...
even after alya consoling her she was not reacting...
finally finally after hearing manik name nandini gave in..
and she started crying in arms of alya...
otherside alya was consoling her...
and nandini let out everything in front of alya...
that their relation is not the same...
she cant abort the child at any cost...
because manik only wants his child nothing else...
and alya was not agreeing to her...
there comes a thud...
storm...
their convo heard by none other than manik malhotra...
that too half truth...
and it is said na that half truth is more harmful than a lie...
so this only happened...
he just heard abt abortion...
but the truth was not reveal to him abt nandini life being in danger...
he screamed on her that she cant abort the child and dragged her...
and the next thing came as a shock...
he actually her that why didnt she stopped him on that day...
nandini felt so humiliated...
and when she answered she didnt want to his question again hit her badly...
that dhruv wasnt enough...
he was again and again saying that she cant abort his child..
he loves his child very much..
and when nandini confronted him that dont hurt that much that he wont be able to repair...
he bluntly said he does not want even to get it repaired...
she was by now fully hurt with his words and with his grip too...
and then she was all the time thinking about her dreams...
where she hasnt asked for any prince but a simple loving guy...
but she got manik malhotra...
she was thinking how she was being forced for this marriage...
true said that the couple was diff in front of world..
and completely opposite in room...
manik is right as his perspective as he hurt beoz of some misunderstanding...
and he didnt even heard the full convo.
he dont know why they were talking abt abortion...
and nandini on other hand was hurt...
she herslef didnt want to abort and she was not ready to tell the truth to manik...
amazing work...👏

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Posted: 9 years ago
Amazing update
Though I have been a silent reader today I couldn't stop my self
From commenting
Ur doing a great work and keep it up
!!!! Love this ff and hope to see darker shades to it as I am a die hard fan of dark love stories!!!!
Waiting update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Dear...first sorry for late. ..
Awesome awesome and amazing update.
How much I can praise you. .it will be less. .😛😛.
What a writer you are. ..
I thought I read the romance and passion too the full.
But what I read today is beyond amazons. ..
Awesome and very beautifully described moments of love.
You are the best. ..👏👏👏.😛😛.
I felt amazed throughout reading. ..
How you put the passionate souls first meet in words. .fabulous. .and
Beautiful way. There was only soulful love nothing else. ❤️.
You penned romance awesomely.
Thanks for sharing this passionate love in very beautiful way.
You are a best writer...who can wrote anything. ..with full passion.
It was great experience for reading this passionate moments of love
. But when he asked if she is vir.😲.that line give me sense. ..he is indeed a
Devil...

Thanks for sharing this awesome update.
Always waiting for more.

Thanks for pm.

Stay blessed dear.









Love. .
Jyoti.





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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: bhagupur

Dear...first sorry for late. ..

Awesome awesome and amazing update.
How much I can praise you. .it will be less. .😛😛.
What a writer you are. ..
I thought I read the romance and passion too the full.
But what I read today is beyond amazons. ..
Awesome and very beautifully described moments of love.
You are the best. ..👏👏👏.😛😛.
I felt amazed throughout reading. ..
How you put the passionate souls first meet in words. .fabulous. .and
Beautiful way. There was only soulful love nothing else.❤️.
You penned romance awesomely.
Thanks for sharing this passionate love in very beautiful way.
You are a best writer...who can wrote anything. ..with full passion.
It was great experience for reading this passionate moments of love
. But when he asked if she is vir.😲.that line give me sense. ..he is indeed a
Devil...

Thanks for sharing this awesome update.
Always waiting for more.

Thanks for pm.

Stay blessed dear.



Love. .
Jyoti.






ha ji devil he is coz he cant trust anyone not even nandini such a confuse or insecure soul he is he always want assurance from her and she always gave him but i promise one day i will change him completely and devil's is based on his confusion or insecurities
and thank you for the comment glad u like that i was afraid yar ke jyda toh nh ho gya or zone really doesnt matter for me i write what i feel and glad u like my writting skills

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