#3 Devil's Bride manan ff link of thread 4 on pg 1 - Page 20

Wow awesome update...yaar its superb..First of all their fight over the dresses & Manik's devil mind talk its so nice...& then jealous Manik who carried Nandini on his shoulder omg...& then their talk cum fight over jealous Manik its so sweet..Then Manik's way to shut Nandu's mouth...& then makeout omg.its so bliss..its not at all vulgur for a moment..it's so passionate...You said it right that you don't make their makeout emotional but its so hot...& in last Manik asks Nandini about her virginity & their last first wala talk..its so nice...U panned this update so beautiful..its awesome..Waiting for next part & excited also..what will be their reaction wanted to know...Please update soon don't take so much time..please 😊

No,it ws nice...no vulgarity...beautifully potrayed the scenes & emotions...!!!waitng fr nxt...post it soon...

Nd this update was also beyond description ... Lyk seriously ... Too gud it was ...

amazing update

Superb update. ..awesome...

Amazing updateee...finallyyy...they did it👍🏼anyways thanks for pm...waiting for next😊

Aashna sorry again fro late reply...

Amazing update
Though I have been a silent reader today I couldn't stop my self
From commenting
Ur doing a great work and keep it up
!!!! Love this ff and hope to see darker shades to it as I am a die hard fan of dark love stories!!!!
Waiting update soon

Dear...first sorry for late. ..

Originally posted by: bhagupur

Dear...first sorry for late. ..

Awesome awesome and amazing update.

How much I can praise you. .it will be less. .😛😛.

What a writer you are. ..

I thought I read the romance and passion too the full.

But what I read today is beyond amazons. ..

Awesome and very beautifully described moments of love.

You are the best. ..👏👏👏.😛😛.

I felt amazed throughout reading. ..

How you put the passionate souls first meet in words. .fabulous. .and

Beautiful way. There was only soulful love nothing else.❤️.

You penned romance awesomely.

Thanks for sharing this passionate love in very beautiful way.

You are a best writer...who can wrote anything. ..with full passion.

It was great experience for reading this passionate moments of love

. But when he asked if she is vir.😲.that line give me sense. ..he is indeed a

Devil...

Thanks for sharing this awesome update.

Always waiting for more.

Thanks for pm.

Stay blessed dear.

Love. .

Jyoti.

ha ji devil he is coz he cant trust anyone not even nandini such a confuse or insecure soul he is he always want assurance from her and she always gave him but i promise one day i will change him completely and devil's is based on his confusion or insecurities
and thank you for the comment glad u like that i was afraid yar ke jyda toh nh ho gya or zone really doesnt matter for me i write what i feel and glad u like my writting skills