#3 Devil's Bride manan ff link of thread 4 on pg 1

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Aashna_chawla

@Aashna_chawla

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Posted: 9 years ago

#201

Originally posted by: Sm0405
Nd this update was also beyond description ... Lyk seriously ... Too gud it was ...
Ur writing was awesome ... N this update was too sensual, hot ,romantic n what not ...
Really hats off to u fr writing this part ... Loved it ... Yaar jab Manik itna pyaar karta tha Nandini se toh aisa kya ho gya k he started hating her ... Sirf ek Dhruv ki entry se he started feeling insecured ????
This is nt gud Manik ... Nd actually u made me cry in the previous update ...
Pta nhi aage aur kya kya hone wala hai ... God ...
Okay I'm waiting fr hte nxt update egarly ... Plz plz plz plz post it sooonnniishh ...

nope only one insecurity cant be the reason of big big diasaster there is something else which u will came to know in future updates just a little wait i will answer all your questions
or glad you like this romantic part i was afraid while posting this ke jyda toh nh ho gya but glad u didnt found it vulgur

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Mouni Rao

@M_R3

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Posted: 9 years ago

#202

OMG What An Update So Hottt & Passionate One Kese Likh Leti Ho Itna Acha ? 😆

You Have Nailed It As Always!! It Wasn't Vulgar It Was Of Pure Love.

& Manik Fighting With His Inner Thoughts That Was So Funny & Cute.

Tumhari Har Update Ek Se Bhar Kr Ek Hoti Hai 👍🏼 Totally Loved This One Too Their Love Making Scene Was Perfect!! Aww Jealous & Possessive Manik Looks Extra Hot :D

Loved Nandu's You'll Be My Last One Line.You Writes Everything Every Type Of Situation So Well😊

Now I Don't Have Words I'm In Love With Your Story With Your Writing.

And Thanks For This Much Long Update!!

Stay Blessed :)

Edited by M_R3 - 9 years ago

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Seharash Siddiqui

@seharash.hasan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#203

Amazing...Awsome...Fantastic...HOT.
Plzz..i wanna read present track...
Thanks for pm..
Update soon...
N plzz pm me..

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riyasharma1112

@riyasharma1112

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Posted: 9 years ago

#204

I just loved this update this was just like the hottest update ever.. *_* ;) :P loved it.. Update soon can't wait for next part...

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iqra286

@iqra286

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Posted: 9 years ago

#205

god man 😃 ds update really blow my mind 😆 cant say on words yr 😉 frstly really loved maniac husband 😆 😛 frstly he made her changed gown n dn try to change sari 😆 😛 god he always stck b/w his mind n heart 😃 really loved jelous manik 😃 was trwat to read bt their intimacy 😳 dt was unbelievably beyond HOt SEXY n SeNSOUS 😳 😃 😛 broke all records man 😳 😆 paisa wasool update 👏 bt plzz diclose now dt y he started hating her wht is d reason dt he misunderstood her?? Update soon 😊

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apy1608

@apy1608

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Posted: 9 years ago

#206

Ufff tooo steamy... :P ..atmosphere is so hawtt ... Hhehheh... Omg I just love little devil ;) ... Damn cute...:*... N whole party thing was great n then to... Tooo great... :)...update sooon!

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rt27

@rt27

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Posted: 9 years ago

#207

Great story...Great Concept...:)

I liked your dark devil story.:)

Nandini is suffering so much but I know when Manik will realize his mistake he will suffer more.:)

Looking forward to next update...finally I hope reason behind there misunderstandings come out soon...

Waiting for next update eagerly:)

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Pravallika69

@Pravallika69

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Posted: 9 years ago

#208

Superb finally suhaag raat.. Hogayi... Hehe loved the way u described evry step... But devil is devil this devil malhotra still hav dbt she is virgin or not... Loved nandu answer you're my last... So beautiful night in thr lives can't wait to read how this turned to a night mare... Update soon dear.. Can't wait

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Aisha Sandarwin

@Aisha_Sandarwin

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Posted: 9 years ago

#209

Huuu... Too hot!! Hehe but nice,,
Lekin why Manik asked her that 'r u virgin', he still have doubt on her?? Very bad
And Nandu bhi kya paheliyan bhuja rahe the keh do nah yes!! Why she told him
That ur my last,, may b becoz of this, he will have doubt on
Her again!! 😕 😕 😕
Ab aagey kya hoga? Waiting eagerly,, plzz continue soon.. Keep writing., it's too good.. Love it!!
Love, Aisha 😊 😊