#3 Devil's Bride manan ff link of thread 4 on pg 1 - Page 19

It was amazing I loved it but was it the flash back ?

Hey pataaka
This was nerve twitching update seriously
I loved how manik calculated other's expression for his beloved wifey when they see her in that shimmery golden gown... Wow it's just cute Mr jealous malhotra... Liar liar definitely pants on fire... Than he made her angry by singing raat akeli hai buj gaye diye song ha that song was just perfect for that moment... Again she changed her attire into beautiful yet sexy red Saree which is definitely turn on for every male species the color only holds so much attraction than how could they miss such sight of that saree draped around milky white curves with such a adorable and pretty face...
Now only manik is controlling his intentions and wild desires but to add more fuel to his intentions the host announced separate couple dance... Like seriously how on the earth can someone accept such a breathtaking view is dancing with Mr anonymous...
This outcome is most expected from Mr Devil malhotra... Break the glasses hurting his own and pouncing on her like a ferocious tiger... But little did we know his very own tigress is no less than him...perfect for each other in every single way possibly and impossibly...
Aashu what's this yaar... Make out was such a freaking... Smoking... And shivering hawwttt
Damn I'm no more present in my senses totally lost maybe partial amnesia... I don't remember anything haae raam i can't describe what i felt reading that its way beyond letter's... I'm sorry but I don't know what to say... May be you were expecting atleast something to come as appreciation towards your hard work but pataaka I'm not that great person to spill it once again sorry... I can just say k this was heavenly reunion of two bodies skin to skin... Heart to heart and soul to soul...
Keep continuing the great work pataaka salute to you my little bundle of surprise and shock giver... I really wanna kiss the hell out of your hands...HEY AQSA PLSS DO THE FAVOUR FROM MYSIDE...GIVE A VERY TIGHT HUGGIE AND KISSII... I SO WANNA DO THIS BUT I'M NOT THAT LUCKY... 😭 😭
Pataaka continue soon and ha plss write that new story... I'll be waiting for it and haan lots of lovee and prayers for you and aqsa too both
Take care stay blessed

It was beautiful

Originally posted by: tanishasac

It was amazing I loved it but was it the flash back ?

Yes dear it was the flashback

Hi dear nice and hot update next part soon pls

Wow what a hot update
With full of manan passion
for each other
U r a awsm n brilliant writer


Update next soon

speeechlesss update...


ufff...superb dear
u nailed it...it was howwwttt...

just loved it
mind blowing work dear

good job dear

keep writing
keep smiling

lots of love<3

Nt at al vulger dear its pure love wich dey both have for dem...
Plzzz update new part soon m excited to knw wat it is...

Congratulations on the new thread :)