manan FF linked by destiny part 17 B/pg 139 (23 FEB)

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prathyushaeluri

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Posted: 9 years ago

#761

Originally posted by: Darcypaul
lovely update .
eagerly waiting for their confession .
thanks for pm. 😊

thanks a lot

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prathyushaeluri

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Posted: 9 years ago

#762

Originally posted by: jamunamanik
Awsmmm

Awsmmm

Awsmmm

Lovely manan part

About dress manik shocked

Sooo sweeet part

Thanks for the pm

Coun sooon

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prathyushaeluri

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Posted: 9 years ago

#763

Originally posted by: Manishadevnani
Ye toh cheating h yr mere practicals chal rhe h n upar se bhai ki wedding ab mein padungi update...
Pls. Post it here only...

i will post here only

and haa enjoy bhai wedding

all d best for practicals

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prathyushaeluri

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Posted: 9 years ago

#764

Originally posted by: pdiyar193
Sorry for the late reply!
Am travelling atm so not getting signal!
Thanks for the PM!
Beautifully written!!
Awww Manan were so adorable!
Manik so cute choosing a dress for her!!!
Loved it!
Can't wait for the next part!!!!:)
Continue soon!

thanks a lot

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prathyushaeluri

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Posted: 9 years ago

#765

CHAPTER 17 A: THE CONFESSION

As decided by manik nandini was all ready for her first and most important date in her life. She was looking so beautiful in her red long frok and manik is definitely gonna have a tough time to resist her in this dress. She was looking herself in the mirror.

At the same time navya entered her room. Navya was awestruck seeing nandini who was more than beautiful.

Na: nandu u r so beautiful aaj toh manik gaya

Nandini was blushing imagining what will be his reaction on seeing her.

Na: and aise hi blush kiya na he will eat u like this only

Nandini was not less than a tomato now

N: navya not u plz atleast thum toh mujhe tease karna bandh karo

Na: ach theek hey lekin u r so lucky that u got manik he is so good for u

Nandini hugs navya and she too responded to it. They broke the hug when they heard the car sound of manik. Nandini immediately started to get tensed which was noticed by navya. She just kept her hand on nandini shoulder and blinked her eyes while made nandini a bit relaxed.

Nandini went down and was mesmerized by seeing manik.

Manik saw nandini and was lost in her beauty and he was brought again to this world by the voice of viren.

Viren: manik beta I am happy that u agreed for the marriage

M: uncle y will I not agree its nandu there...and uncle if u don't mind can I take nandu out with me??

Viren: we will mind definitely

Manik heart skipped a bit and nandini was shocked

Viren: we will definitely feel if u calls me uncle now u can call me dad as nandini does

Manik feels happy and hugs him and viren pulls shilpa and nandini for a good family hug. After some time they broke the hug and MaNan waved all bye and left from there to start the best part of their life.

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prathyushaeluri

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Posted: 9 years ago

#766

MaNan reached a cliff top and manik made nandu close her eyes and took her to the edge and opened her eyes. Nandini opened her eyes and immediately got frightened to see her on the edge on the cliff and she turned back and rushed to manik and hugged him tightly. Manik was shocked but responded later. Manik broke the hug after sometime and cupped her cheeks and spoke lovingly

M: wht happened??

N: mujhe heights sey bohot daar lagtha hey

M: acha then how will u see my surprise for u??

Nandini eyes twinkled on listening the word surprise from him.

N: surprise wht is it??

M: for that u have to close ur eyes

He again closed her eyes and took her to same spot and spoke in her ears

M: don't feel afraid I wont let u fall

Nandini smiled and manik clicked his fingers and he opened the eyes of nandini. Nandini opened her eyes and was awestruck to see the view in front of her eyes.

Nandini then turned towards manik and found him on his knees. He forwarded his hand and spoke

M: I know nandini I am very late but I want to say that I cant live without u and I want to see every phase of my life with you and even i know we are LINKED BY DESTINY that's why our parents too selected us for each other and when u said that I was only one person in your life even I want to say u one thing but waited for this time I want to say that no girl except u came this much close to me and not even mukti u are very special to me and even I want to say that I want to see ur face before I sleep and the first thing I want to see in the morning is ur face. Will u help me to make my wish into reality and will u be in every step of my life and I want to say u that I LOVE U and last but not least will u marry me???

Nandini was feeling on cloud 9 listening to his confession she ran up to him and kneeled in front of him and hugged him tightly. Nandini broke the hug and cupped his face and spoke looking into his eyes with loves in her eyes.

N: u know what manik even I have the same wish that u have even I want to see ur face before I sleep and after I wake up and even I cant live without u and u r the light in my life and finally I will marry u because I LOVE U

Manik cupped her cheeks with one hand and moved closer to her face and pulled her towards him with another hand which was resting on the most comfortable place for him i.e. her waist. He came dangerously close to her and nandini closed her eyes in anticipation and manik saw her face and not able to control anymore he placed his lips on her. When his lips touched her a shiver ran down her spine and she kept hands on his shoulder and pressed them. There was no urgency in the kiss as their romance started now and there was a lot more to come in their lives. After some time manik broke the kiss and cupped her face

M: I love u more than anything

Nandini didn't answer but again kissed him but this time both were wild and kissing each other madly like it was their last kiss. Manik tasted her upper lip while nandini was focused on his lower lip and now the position changed and manik bitted her lower lip and nandini opened her mouth and he found way to enter her mouth and tasting each and every corner of her mouth. While kissing he made her lay on the ground and he hovered on her and was kissing her madly. He broke the kiss when he found nandini out of breath but he was not in a mood to leave her so his focus shifted from her lips to her neck and he kept on kissing her and nandini was just moaning his name in pleasure and this was doing much but increasing his desires. After giving enough attention to her neck he looked towards her face which was shining in a different way today and smile is not leaving her lips.

N: I love u too manik

They both stood up and the sight in front of manik made him shock. He was not in a state to utter a word and he just looked towards nandini.

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prathyushaeluri

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Posted: 9 years ago

#767

N: u gave me a surprise and this is my surprise to u did u like it??

M: like kya I loved it its superb and I love u too

He opened his arms and nandini ran and hopped in his arms. Manik tightened the hug and there was no space for air to enter in between them and both were perfect in each other arms.

After some time manan were lying on the bed sheet which was spread on the ground by manik and was starring the sky and manik remembered nandini emotions regarding stars

M: nandu u hate stars na

N: haa aise kyu pucha

M: jab thum stars ko dekhtha hu na remember this beautiful night and not the worst night okkk

N: acha u want me to recreate the memory on ur name

M: not only that I want each and everything regarding u on my name

N: acha then u too have to fight with ur darkness fear

M: when u r with me I am npot afraid of anything

Nandini was so touched with these words she just hovered on him and kissed him on his cheeks and manik was shocked because of her sudden outburst of love.

M: wht is this nandu??

N: wht I cant kiss u

M: off course u can but itni sudden

N: agar thum itni pyar se bole gi toh esa hi hoga

M: acha

Now he came on top of her and moved close to her ear

M: then r not afraid of the consequences

N: nahi mey honewali Mrs. Manik Malhotra hu mey kisise nahi darthi

Manik smiled wider listening to this and pulled her more closer

M: acha Mrs.Manik Malhotra abb kisi sey nahi darthi na but u have to make habbit of getting afraid of ur beloved husband

N: kyu??

M: because when u will talk like this na I am not going to spare u from next time and it will end in the way which is more hotter

Nandini blushed and now her cheeks were in competition with tomato in means of color. Manik being manik started to tease her

M: nandu I thunk u should not wear this dress again

N: kyu manik I am not nice

M: nahi u were beautiful but its that ki if I again see u in red color dress I will not be able to control myself

Nandini was blushing even more now

M: and ur blushed cheeks they were not helping at all I feel like heating them now itself

Manik bend down a little and bitted her cheeks one by one and nandini was holding his shoulders for support and manik pulled apart and lay down beside her and kept watching the sky. Nandini kept her head on his shoulder and her hand around his waist and manik grabbed her strongly in his arms. Both were silent but sometimes words are not enough to express our feelings and same is the case with nandini and manik. The silence between them is speaking much more than their words does. Finally manik broke the silence

M: nandu chalo lets go its becoming late

N: nahi manik mujhe nahi jaana hey

M: nandu lets go u r hungry see its 9:00 plz lets go

N: nahi manik I am not hungry

M: nandu for me lets go and I promise there are many more nights waiting for us which we will have on our name only and only US

Nandini agreed and they both left from there.

so here is the most awaited confession

i hope it is upto the mark

and if it dint reach ur expectations

i am really sorry

and last time i literally did salsa

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