HUM HAI DEEWANE TERE DEEWANE (CHAP 30 ON PAGE NO.136)

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Posted: 9 years ago
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PROLOGUE:-


A 19 years old girl crying very badly and continuously telling one thing only that I hate you..I just hate you you are a cheater..fraud..lier nothing else...I hate you from bottom of my heart..tum mere manik nhi ho skte

A 30 yrs old man staring at her angrily he stood up and angrily shouted on her why don't you understand that I just love you I wnt to spend my life with you isliye maine yeh sab kiya sirf tumhare sath rehne k liye nadini plz understand yaar I love you. ...nd in fraction of second he throw the vase on the floor and nandini palmed her ear and she was about to when he grabbed her waist and manik said to nadini plz nandini marry me...nadini tried to push him away "I don't love you and..
she was cut off by manik..manik hold her waist so tightly and said that "don't you even dare to say no to me nandini you know me very well"
she jerked his hand and about to go when his one word left her stunned..
when manik said aur rishabh...


should I continue?
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Kuushi thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
#2
Interesting start...what led her to hate him and before that how she fell in love with a much older guy and manik trying to stop her using rishab..interesting prologue looking forward to read more of the story please continue soon :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: sonia1000

Interesting plot..Please continue :)


Wow sounds proper interesting...
Do continue...
Can't wait for the chap xxx
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Posted: 9 years ago
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character sketch

Manik Malhotra: a rich dashing handsome 30 years old man international don and a business tycoon
rude, arrogant,heartless, short tempered...
but loves his family and friends a lot. he loves her mom so much...and he loves her little princess and his doll his lady love nandini.

Nandini Murthy: a 19 yrs old simple calm kind nature girl...she wants to achieve her goals in her life..and her goal is give all luxurious facilities to her younger brother rishabh and her chacha chachi...

Cabir Dhawan: a 28 yrs old man best friend of manik malhotra..loves his wife navya and his son aditya a lot
he loves his friends so much specially manik..he knows everything about manik. .loves nandini a lot like a ln elder brother..

Dhruv Malhotra: a 27 yrs old man simple and kind nature boy respects manik a lot and loves her fiancee alia saxena...best friend of nandini and pampered her like his own little sister. ..

Abhimanyu thakar: a 27 yrs old man very fun loving and loves her wife mukti a lot...business partner of manik malhotra. .

Nyonika Malhotra: mother of dhruv and manik...she loves her family a lot..doesn't like manik s some illegal work..loves nandini a lot like her own daughter
manik is her proud...

other characters will reveal in between story..
hope u like
if you have any question plz tell me
give me suggestion
this is my first try
hope u like It
bye take care
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Posted: 9 years ago
#5
Interesting ...
cntinue soon ... :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
#6
Awesome concpt
Amazing characters
Manik international don superbbb
Lovd it
Update frst prt soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#7
The concept is nice but one question...!!!
How come Nandini so small in age..?? Like everyone is 27-28 but she is 19..how???
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Posted: 9 years ago
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The prologue and character sketch are soo good..
Eagerly waiting forpart 1 ..mm
Upload soon...
Loved it
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Posted: 9 years ago
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great concept...
loved the character sketch...
its gonna be a really epic love story...
can't wait for it to start...
keep up the good work and continue soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#10
Excited for this new cncpt...
Update soon..

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