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Posted: 9 years ago

CHAP 9(A)

Nandini and Manik were sleeping peacefully in other's arms. Nandini was first one to wake up due to sun rays. Nandini untangled herself very carefully and went to bathroom to get ready Nandini was thinking about yesterday and she was blushing like hell after take shower. She came out from bathroom and wearing a saree and brushing her hair when she felt someone's intense gaze.

Manik was watching her without blinking even his eyes and get down from the bed and walked towards her. She was watching him through the mirror and Manik hugged her from back and nuzzling his face in her wet hair.

"Good morning Manik" Nandini wished him. "hmmm..." Manik said and again nuzzling his face in her hair. Now Nandini was breathing heavily because manik was placing a wet kisses on her shoulder, neck and collarbone.

"Man..manik please no..not now..! koi..aa..jayega.." Nandini was stammering badly because of his sweet torture. Manik left her and turned her and again hugged her from back and said "Doll, agar roz tum mere samne aise subah subah ready ho k aaogi to phir muje mere decision k bare main phir se ek bar sochna padega"

Nandini confusingly said to manik "konsa decision manik?"

"itni jaldi bhul gy aap doll" manik asked Nandini. And Nandini nodded her head in yes and manik continued "kal raat jab aapne time manga tha to humne aapse haan bola tha, pr aapko dekhne ke baad lag raha hai k muje phir se iss bare mein sochna padega" Manik explained and her cheeks turned into red tomatoes. After some cute talk and blushing session manik went to bathroom to get ready and Nandini choose white shirt and black jeans for him.

"Nandini, mera blazer kahan hai? Yahan pr to nahin hai." Manik shouted from room because Nandini was in the kitchen making juice for him. "haan, aa rahi hoon manik ek minute..! with that she put glass of juice in the tray and walked towards the room.

"manik why are you shouting like this?aapka blazer maine nahin nikala kyunki aaj aap sirf yhi pehenge okay I want my old manik so today no blazer" Nandini said to him and buttoning his shirt.

"okay..your wish is my command princess" Manik bowed down in front of her and she laughed out loud. Manik was sipping his juice and busy in his work.

"Manik se pu6u k nhi? Kahin gussa ho gaye to? But unhone bola tha ki woh meri har wish puri karenge phir of course woh na nhi bolenge" Nandini was talking to herself when Nandini saw manik's phone was ringing.

"Hello, ha Raj bolo kyun phone kiya?Anything Serious?" Manik asked his pa in his bossy tone. But his pa's answer made him so angry and he roared on his pa like a lion.

"what the hell? Tumse ek baat nhi sambhlti. You are good for nothing. Ab muje hi sab manage krna padega. Maine clearly bola tha ki ab ke baad main koi meeting ghar pr nhi karunga" manik asked him very angrily.

"par sir aaj ke pehle bhi aapne meetings ki hai ghar pr phir kya problem hai sir?" his PA asked his boss in very calm tone.

"its none of your business, don't cross your limits aaj ke baad is shah industries ke sath hum koi bhi deal nhi karenge" manik declared his decision

"I am sorry sir, but sir shah industries ke sath deal na krne ka decision sir aapko phir se ek bar sochna chahiye us par sir" his PA tried to explain him

"okay I will think about this thik hay waise bhi ab woh ghar aa hi raha hai main dekh lunga muje kya karna hai, aur doosri baat this is the last time k mere ghar pe meeting hai next time aisi mistake honi nhi chahiye." Manik said to his PA in his bossy tone and he cut the phone.

Manik turned and he saw Nandini was staring at him. so he went towards her and asked "what? Aise kya dekh rhi hai doll aap? Kuch hua? Koi baat hai? You wanna ask me something"

"no, nothing serious but agar aapka PA bol raha tha meeting ghar pe rakhne liye to isme problem kya thi? Matlab aapne bina kuch soche deal cancel krdi sirf is wajah se?" Nandini asked him and his answer left her stunned.

"because pehle Nandini aap nhi thi meri life mein, ab meri doll hai meri life mein aur mere ghar mein bhi main nhi chahta k koi bhi stranger mere ghar mein aye aur meri doll ko koi dekhe mera bas chale to main kisi ki bhi nazar tumpe na padne doon." He clutched her waist tightly and digs his nails in her milky waist. He continued his talks "Aap ko dekhne ka haq, aapko 6une ka haq , aap ke karib rehna ka haq, sirf hamara haina doll? sirf mera na aap sirf meri hain na?" manik asked her in very intense and serious tone.

Nandini was staring at her and sometime he was nuzzling his face in her neck and again pulled her with a jerk and she banged into his chest "bolo Nandini you are only mine haina. I am waiting for your answer. Ye sare haq mere haina sirf mere tell me" manik asked again.

"yes, manik ye sare rights sirf aur sirf tumhare hai" Nandini replied him and he hugged her so tightly. Nandini also hugged him back but she was in deep thinking about manik. She was about to say something but someone knocked the door.

"sir,aapse milne mr.shah aaye hai, to kya karun main?" a servant asked manik. "unhe tum hall main bithao main aata hoon" manik replied him and wear his blazer and went down for his meeting.

CHAP 9(B)

Manik was busy in his meeting and discussing some issues with mr.shah. mr.shah came with his son. He was also discussing his business strategy with manik.

IN THE ROOM:

Nandini was reading a magazine. Then dhruv and aliya both came to her room. Dhruv directly lay down on their bed and aliya was sitting with Nandini.

"Nandini pls kuch khila do bahot hi zyada bhukh lagi hai, aur pls haan aaj sirf tumhare hath ka hi khana chahiye manik bhai ne bahot hi zyada tareef ki hai tumhari so please cook ka khana nhi tumhara khana." Dhruv was pleading her.

"okay itni request krne ki koi zaroorat nhi hai, main abhi tum dono ke liye kuch banake lati hoon tum dono bethi yahan pe" Nandini said to them and left the room. And directly went to the kitchen.

Manik was discussing his issues when he saw that mr.shah's son looking at somewhere else when manik saw in that direction. Manik's blood was boiling. He wants to kill him but he stay quite because Nandini was present in the kitchen.

When Nandini was coming down from stairs mr.shah's son was looking at her. Nandini directly went to the kitchen she tied her hair in messy bun because of that her back was visible because of her backless blouse. And shah's son was looking at her back without blinking his eyes. Manik saw this he didn't say anything. He just excused himself from meeting and went towards the kitchen. He came near Nandini and just open her hair and came back in his meeting.

"manik achanak aaye aur aise chle bhi gye" she was talking to herself.

Manik canceled his all deal with mr.shah. mr.shah tried very hard to convince him but he reject all his proposal. And with that mr.shah and his son left his home.

Manik was working in his study and he was smoking. He called cabir and roy in his study. "haan manik bol kya kaam tha itna emergency mein kyun bulaya?" cabir asked him and his reply left cabir and roy stunned.

"Roy, aaj jo mr.shah aur uska son kya naam hai uska? Ya rohan shah uska accident karvana hai, but ek baat dhyan rahe woh marna nhi chahiye." Manik said to roy in his evil smirk and calm tone.

"Manik kya keh raha hai tu? Tuje pata bhi hai? Tu rohan shah ko marne ki baat kr raha hai are you mad?" cabir said in a very high pitch.

"relax cabir..!Calm down...!!!why are you getting so hyper? Maine abhi abhi bola na k woh marna nhi chahiye pr aise zinda rehna chahiye k ki woh koi kaam krne k layak hi na rahe." Manik again said ina very calm tone and again he was smoking.

"pr manik problem kya hui,koi business problem hui?"cabir tried to make him understand.

"no business problem bro, agar business problem hoti to main kuch na krta but its about Nandini how dare he? Woh meri Nandini ko dekh raha tha meri Nandini ko uski himmat to dekh cabir mere ghar mein beth kr meri Nandini ko dekh raha tha, aur main chahta to wohi maar deta usse but no Nandini wohi thi main uske samne koi scene create nhi karna chahta tha aur ab galti ki hai to punishment bhi to deni padegi na, how bloody dare he?" with that he threw a vase on the floor and continued "aisi halat krna uski roy k aaj ke baad kisi aur ki taraf aankh uthakar dekh ne ki himmat bhi na krke now go aur kam hote hi muje call kro" and with that roy left.

"manik abhi bhi waqt hai stop this nonsense yaar nandini ko pata chalega to? Kitni mushkil se usne tumhe chance diya hai aur.." he was about to say something but manik cut him off.

"cabir kon batayega usse tum ya roy? Haan ?She is only mine agar usse pata bhi chal jayega to bhi I don't care because now usse puri life sirf mere sath hi rhna hai ok sirf mere? So just close this topic right now." manik and cabir both left the room.

All was sitting in the hall and chit chatting with each other but manik was staring at her only without even blinking his eyes and manik went to his bed room and Nandini saw this but she ignore it and continue her talks with her friends and after sometime everyone left and Nandini went to her room.

Manik was standing in his balcony and he was in deep thought. Nandini saw him she was facing his back. She went near him and placed her hand on his shoulder. Manik turned towards her and he tucked her hair behind her ears and cupped her face "kuch kehna hai?" manik asked her lovingly.

"manik kya hua? aap pareshaan ho? Aap kitchen mein bhi aaye aur aise hi chale gaye bataye na kya hua manik aur maine dekha ki aaj aap mere samne smoking kr rhe the manik aapne aise kbhi nhi kiya kya hua hai manik?" Nandini asked him.

"kuch nhi Nandini bas sirf business ki kuch tension hai nothing else aur smoking ke liye sorry I will try k main aage se na karun okay." Manik kissed her forhead and lay down on his bed.

Nandini sat beside him and riffling his hair "manik coffee le aau you will feel better" and manik nodded his head.

After sipping his coffee manik was sleeping and his head was in nandini's lap and she was ruffling his hair and she hesitantly asked manik "manik main college join kr loon kal se?" and manik opened his eyes he got up from her lap and he said" of course Nandini iss baat ke liye tumhe meri permission ki koi zaroorat nhi hai but haan..." he was about to continue his talk but nandini cut him off "yhi k roy mere sath aayega aur main careful rahoon bcoz now I am nandini manik Malhotra aur kuch?"manik laughed on her sentence and he said "nahin aur kuch nahin" with that he made her lay down on the bed and came on top of her and entwined their fingers and captured her lips and he was kissing her very slowly and lovingly and Nandini digged her nails in his knuckles manik left her when he felt Nandini out of the breath.

Nandini turned and manik was facing her back and again the scenario of meeting came in front his eyes he removed her hair from back and kissing her back madly and passionately. Nandini knew that something is bothering him. he was kissing her back sometime biting her back and sometime sucking her back hardly. Nandini hissed in pain and fisted her palms in bed sheet. And her moan just instigate manik more he fully came on top of her and entwined their fingers and again he started to kissing her back and biting her back.

"manik plz its hurting.." finally Nandini stop him when she was not able to control him and manik realized the situation he saw her back its now all red because of his torture he immediately get up from her "I am really sorry doll, I am such a monster such a beast doll really sorry I don't know kya ho gaya tha muje ruko mein ointment lekar aata hoon." Manik was about to go but Nandini stop him by holding his hand "no manik iski koi zaroorat nhi hai and don't feel guilty about this okay..ab niche cahle muje bahot hi zyada bhukh lagi hai." Nandini said in her sugary voice.

"I am really sorry princess sach mein aap thik hai na main yhi dinner mangva loon yahan pe." He asked in very caring tone and Nandini cupped his face and said "Manik mein bhi thik hoon look I am perfect fine ab chale" Nandini dragged him with her for a dinner.

After dinner Manik was working on his laptop and Nandini was preparing her bag for her college and she was engrossed in her work she didn't even realize that her phone was ringing. Manik saw this and picked up her phone but voice of the owner made him so angry but he stay calm.

"nandu kahan hai tu kab se join kr rhi hai college?" aryamaan asked her in very happy tone.

"manik, manik Malhotra bol rahan hoon Nandini nhi, wait main deta hoon usse.." he was about to give her phone but aryamaan stop him.

"Congratulation mr.malhotra for your wedding, you are very lucky seriously jo nandu apki life partner hai she is very innocent girl and nandu..." he was about to continue his talk but manik cut him off "first its Nandini not nandu got it and second thing she was your friend but now she is my wife so just stay in your limits and stay away from her and thank you so much" with that he gave phone to nandu.

"ye aryamaan haan mein kal se join karoongi college" and Nandini was talking with him. she was talking with aryamaan and she was laughing on his jokes and someone was boiling in anger and with that manik again lighten up his cigarette and again start his smoking. Nandini was watching him and she cut her call and sat beside him and manik threw the cigarette away. Nandini and manik were sleeping and entangled their fingers.

"nandu, ek baat manogi aap meri? Manik asked her and Nandini nodded her head in yes. And he continues " plz stay away from aryamaan baby I don't like him seriously usse baat mat kiya kro aap, muje bilkul pasand nhi hai woh pls doll" with that manik tightly hugged her and he slept like that and Nandini was just thinking about manik's behavior and after some time Nandini also drifted into sleep.

SO KAISA LAGA YE UPDATE?
TELL ME..

DO COMMENT GUYS PLS..

IN NEXT UPDATE SOME COLLEGE TIME AND OFCOURSE MANAN ROMANCE AND AS USUAL JEALOUSY, ANGER AND MONSTER MOMENT..

I WILL GIVE YOU CHARACTER SKETCH OF TERE NAAM ZINDAGI.

LOVE YOU ALL

THANK YOU FOR YOUR SUPPORT.

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Posted: 9 years ago
Superb update
Manik kitna possessive hai nandu ke liye kisi ko bhi use dekhne nhi deta...agr dekh liya toh wo jaan se jayegaa...manik ka anger uski jealousy uski possessiveness nandu ko leke bhadd rhi hai...kahin iss behaviour ki wjah se nandu koi aisa waisa decision na lele...pr i think nandu ko manik ko smjna chahiye uske behaviur ko bhi jisse koi problm na ho fir...lovd it...continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Ufff manik nd his possessiveness cute bhi lagta hai r scary bhi
Yr ye nandu ko kab pata chalega about maniks dongiri matlab ki he is still on illegal
I hope voh nandu ko hurt na kare in his jelousy
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Posted: 9 years ago
Update was superb 👏
But yaar manik bahut zyada possessive ho raha hai
Calm it a a little if u can ...!
Stay blessed
Will be waiting for the update
hpzaya thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
Gosh manik is sach mein deewana
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Posted: 9 years ago
Beautifully written!
Engaging story!
Intrigued to see what happens qhen Nandini joins college
😃
Continue soon..
Take care😃
srija-n thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
superb !!!
possesive manik ...
caring manik...
monster manik
luved it.
plz update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wooowww
woooww
wooowww



wooowww.


Suuuperrrbbb...

I luved it veryyy muchhh...

Plzzz addd more n more Manan scenes


update next part sooon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Yr manik bahot jyada pissesive hubby hai bt i luv dis manik...bt hope ki nandu uski possesivebess samje...awsm update...
keep smiling..
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hey main mar jaawa
kya update tha
mazzaaa aagya
yaar...
waaaooo
waiting for the next
jaldi se update karo na
wait nhi ho raha hai...
manik ka junoon dekh k...

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