HUM HAI DEEWANE TERE DEEWANE (CHAP 30 ON PAGE NO.136) - Page 2

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Posted: 9 years ago
#11
Very nice and interesting story.I think it's a dark story. I love to read dark story. specialy Manan story. But dark writers aren't continue their story
So if u do same than I suggest don't post any chapter please. Because we are very much suffer for it's.

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Posted: 9 years ago
#12
Awesome
What happened that nandini hates manik and manik is international Don
And maybe because manik is Don that's why nandini hates him
Interesting concept
Lovedit
Cont soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#13
The big lavish malhotra mension is decorated with full of lights, flowers and garlands. everyone is checking last minute preparations after all its THE MANIK MALHOTRA's wedding and he is a perfectionist
nd no body wants to make manik angry at least not today...

after some time Manik and nandini both are sat in front of the fire and follows the all ritual...after that manik filled nandini's maang with sindoor and tied the mangalsutra in her neck...

NANDINI'S POV:::


I was in front of the fire with manik...its my wedding I should be happy but no i am not happy at all agar yeh sab ku6 Dino pehle hota to main apne aap ko sabse luckiest girl manti but today I am feeling like unluckiest girl in the world...when manik put the sindoor in my maang a lone tear fell down from my cheek and now I am Nandini Manik Malhotra...after take the blessings from our elders...I hugged my chacha chachi and rishabh and i am crying because I have to leave chacha chachi and rishabh...after bidding bye to everyone I was standing in front of mirror and I was thinking how my life took 360 degree
change I was in deep thinking when my chachi came and we both sat on my king sized bed...

chachi "nandini manik ne humara London jane ka intezaam kr diya hai aur nandu manik ab tumhara pati hai aur dekha hai maine uski aankho main how much he loves you.plz nandu forgive him and give him a chance nandu tumhe usse zyada oyar koi nhi karega ki bhi nhi nandu give him all his rights as your husband nandu ab main chalti hoon bye take care...apna aur manik ka dhyan rakhna..."then chachi left...


NANDINI'S POV:::

I was all alone again sitting on manik's bed and first I was observing his oops,...!!sorry our room all walls of the room is covered with my photos in every expressions...!!and large photo of our hanging on our bed and I sit on my bed and closed my eyes...I opened my eyes when I heard the voice of someone footstep and when I opened my eyes...Manik malhotra is standing in front of me. ...


I hope u liked It...
criticism and suggestion welcome...
I know no manan but plz just faith on me u all will loved it when story progress...
next update will full of manan,some flashback and Manik's pov in next update
bye take care

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Posted: 9 years ago
#14
They got married and chachis words meant there are few misunderstandings between them that can be cleared he really loved her but being impulsive guess he did something for nandini to be angry on him well eager to know the reason behind her anger..please continue soon:)
Edited by Kuushi - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#15
Awesome start
Manik aur nandu husband wife...aisa kya huya jo nandu itna hate krti hai...
Manik ke room mein nandu ki pics bhtnpyar krta hai lgta...lovd it...plz long update ye toh chotu sa update tha
Continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#16
Awsm start...
Nice update ..
Plz cntinue soon ..
Next time a long part plz ...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#17
awesome start...
loved it so much...
can't wait to see how manan met and their story till marriage...
can't wait to see what happens next...
keep up the good work and continue soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#18
Nice update
Manan are got married but nandini is not happy
And even chachi said to nandini to forgive manik
Loved the update
And waiting for the next part to read how manan meet
And can't wait to read what will happen next
Plz update the next part soon
Edited by mairaallauddin - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#19
loved it so much...
can't wait to see how manan met and their story till marriage...
Tooo goood
Please update soon. ..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#20
its awesome but its very chota sa part plzz post the next part asap and thoda bada haa i love the concept of the story manik is the don plzzz continue... waiting 4 next part

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