HUM HAI DEEWANE TERE DEEWANE (CHAP 30 ON PAGE NO.136) - Page 19

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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice...its like predict hi nahi kar sakte what next...both are very unexpected...
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Truely its going awesome
Shit wht did nandini say 😆 ab toh ye gayi 😆 hope manik kuch kar na de thnx for the update dear cont soon
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int...plz cont soon
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CHAP 11 (A)
Manik left the house angrily and went to his farm house and broke everything in his roomand light his cigarette.

IN MALHOTRA MANSION:

Nandini was continuously calling him but he switched off his phone. Nandini cried all nightbut manik didn't pick her phone at once. In morning Nandini woke up with jerkand she called manik but he didn't pick her call. She gets down from her bedand went to bathroom to get ready. After getting ready she went down and calledall his friends.

"cabir bhai pls manIk ko bolo kahan hai wo wapas aa jayein muje baat karni hain pls cabirbhai muje manik ke pass jana hai" Nandini hugged cabir and everyone wasconsoling her and she was just crying. Manik called roy and asked about her.Roy gave all the information about her but manik didn't talk to her. Nandinididn't eat and drink anything and it made her so weak. One day passed like thisbut manik didn't call her for once.

Next morning Nandini again called him but he didn't pick her phone. After getting ready she went down to get information about but she felt dizzy but she went down, she was about to get down before she could register anything she collapse on the floor with thud everyone turned and cabir shout her name.

Manik was asking about Nandini to roy on phone and he also heard shout of cabir. He immediately grabbed his car key and went towards his home. he came to his mansion and went to his room and he saw Nandini was sleeping on the bed and everyone was standing there with worried expression. Doctor was checking her.


Manik came near her and asked doctor "how is she?" doctor
replied him "Mr.Malhotra she is fine now, but wo bahot weak hai pls take careof her and main ku6 medicine likh ke de raha hoon aur wo thik ho jayegi." Withthat doctor left and everyone left his room.

Manik sat near her and and kissed her forehead then kissed her both cheeks and manikcupped her cheeks and said "I am sorry doll main aapko aise 6odke chala gyakbhi nhi chahta tha apko aise dekhna pr aaj meri hi wajah se tumhari ye halathai sorry doll but you hurt me so much" with that he went to his balcony andlight his cigarette.

Nandini slowly opened her eyes and she saw manik was standing in balcony she get down from bed and ran towards him and hugged him from back tightly and said "manik kahan chalein gaye the aap, I know muje aisa nhi bolna chahiye tha manik I am really sorry pls manik forgive me pls" and a lone tear ran down from her cheek. Manik slowly removed her hand from his back and dragged to her bed and made her sit on the bed and order his servant to get breakfast for Nandini. A servant came with fresh breakfast and manik set everything on bed. "muje nahin khana ku6 bhi jab tak aap muje maaf nhi karegein" Nandini said but manik angrily stare at her.
Nandini without saying anything ate her breakfast. After breakfast manik came with medicine again she stopped him and said "no, ab medicine to main bilkul nhi khaungi" manik again showed his angry eyes and Nandini cutely said "aap har bar aise aankhein dikha ke sab baatein manva loge apni?" and gulped down her medicine and she slept because of medicine effect.

Nandini woke up in evening and she saw manik was not in room. She got down and went to her bathroomto get fresh. She was about to go down but she saw that manik is working in hisstudy room. She went near him and placed her hand on his shoulder but heremoved her hand. Nandini look at him with her tearful eyes and went outside.

Nandini came to room and she was thinking"ab kya karron unhe manane ke liye?" and she made aplan and start her preparation. Manik came to his room and what he saw made himso shocked.

CHAP 11(B):

He entered in his room his room was fully decorated with candles and rose patels. He waswatching the room and whwn he turned he saw most beautiful girl in front hiseyes. His wife, his doll, his Nandini. She was wearing a very sexy nighty. Itwas reaching to her thigh only. Manik want to kiss her but he turned his faceaway. Nandini cutely pout her lips and manik sat on his couch and opened hislaptop and he started to work or may be just pretending.



Nandini encircled her hands on his neck but he jerked her hands, Nandini sing a line inher ear very sexily and blow air on his ear and she bit his earlobe and manikget up from the couch. Nandini held his hand and manik gave an angry glare toher.


Raat Akeli Hai, Bujh Gae Diye
Aake Mere Paas, Kaano.N Me.N Mere
Jo Bhi Chaahe Kahiye, Jo Bhi Chaahe Kahiye, Raat ...

She put her both hands on his broad shoulders and she slid down his jacket and threw it
away in some corner. Nandini came in front of him and traced her fingers on his
chest. Manik closed his eyes to control his desires.


Tum Aaj Mere Liye Ruk Jaao, Rut Bhi Hai Furasat Bhi Hai
Tumhein Na Ho Na Sahii, Mujhe Tumase Muhabbat Hai
Mohabbat Ki Ijaazat Hai, To Chup Kyuun Rahiye
Jo Bhi Chaahe Kahiye, Raat ...

Nandini slowly open his buttons of his shirts but manik jerked her hands and he was
about to go out of the room but Nandini came infront of door and locks the
door. And she was walking sexily towards him and put her palm on his chest and
pushed him on couch.

Savaal Banii Hui Dabi Dabi Ulajhan Siinon Mein
Javaab Denaa Thaa, To Duube Ho Pasiino.N Mein
Thaanii Hai Do Hasiinon Mein, To Chup Kyun Rahiye
Jo Bhi Chaahe Kahiye, Raat ...

Nandini was moving her waist in rhythm very sexily and sat on his lap. Nandini kissed on
his neck and on his collarbone. Manik clutched her waist tightly with his one
hand and grabbed her neck and leaned closer to her lips he was about to claim
her lips but "you only want my body" her words again echoed in his miand and he
pushed her on the couch and get up from couch.

"Stop it Nandini..!!Just stop it..!! What you think of yourself haan? Tumne mere pyar ko
kya samaj kr rakha hai? Muje aise seduce karoge aur mein..seriously nandini
aisa sochti ho mere bare mein." Manik yelled on her.

"no manik kbhi nhi main kbhi aap ke bare mein aisa soch hi nhi sakti, main janti hoon aap
meri bahot respect krte hai, agar aap chahte to aap force bhi kr skte the but
aap ne hemesha mere decision ko respect kiya manik I am sorry mein hi har baar
apko hurt krti hoon apne harsh words se, I am ready manik make me yours aur
mein ye sirf apka gusa shant krne ke liye nhi keh rahi manik, I really love
you."and with that she ran towards him and hugged him tightly manik picked her
up twirled her.

Manik put her down and hugged her tightly and kissed on her shoulder Nandini shivered
with his touch. Manik broke the hug and slid down her shrug from her shoulders,
Nandini closed her eyes manik picked her up in his arms and lay down her on the
bed and came on top of her.

Manik cupped her face and kissed her forehead and both eyes and her cheeks and kissed her
neck madly and sucked her neck very hardly after that manik kissed her
collarbone very lovingly. Nandini was just moaning his name continuously and
ruffling her fingers in his hair. Manik was kissing her madly and biting her
neck and shoulder. "manik.." Nandini hissed in pain. And manik sucked her
shoulders. Manik came near her lips and manik claimed her lips and kissed her
lips hard. Manik left her lips when he felt that she was breathless. Manik open
his eyes and saw that nandini's eyes were still closed manik came near her ear
and said "open your eyes doll.." and bite her earlobe. Nandini moaned his name
and open her eyes and manik said "I know you give me all rights but you are my
doll so I can wait jab tak aap puri tarh se ready nhi ho jati tab tak"

"but manik."She was about to say something but manik put his finger on her lips and said
"sshhh..i know you won't stop me but phir bhi main chahta hoon k tum puri tarh
se ready ho jao phir I will make you mine forever..and don't worry nandu tumhe
apna banane ke liye muje tumhe claim krne ki zaroorat nhi aur second thing that
you are mine only mine " he said possessively and hugged her tightly and tears
brimmed in her eyes and she also hugged him back and both slept in each other's
arms peacefully.

SO TELL ME?

HOW'S IT?

I KNOW PLZ MUJPE GUSSA MAT KRNA PLZ..

I WANT TO
TAKE IT SLOWLY..

I HOPE YOU
GUYS UNDERSTAND AND TELL ME ABOUT MY NEW FF TERE NAAM ZINDAGI..

I WILL
UPDATE TONIGHT YOU WILL LIKE IT ALSO.

I ALSO WANT TO START A NEW FF I WILL UPDATE PROLOGUE TONIGHT T

PRECAP: SOME
NAUGHTY MOMENTS AND A VERY SPECIAL FUNNY INCIDENT AND A PARTY WITH MANIK'S
ANGER, JEALOUSY, AND OVER POSSESIVE AND OVER PROTECTIVE NATURE...

Edited by parthmanikniti - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Amazing update
Loved manofy session
I loved ur second ff also vry much
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Posted: 9 years ago
This is interesting.
Nice to see nandini making the move
And Manik handling things the right way.
Hope you continue soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago
THIS WAS REALLY GOOD
LOVE THE WAY HOW NANDAIN WAS MAKING THE MOVES
I WISH IT COULD HAPPEN IN REAL
THAT WOULD HAVE BEEN GREAT
UPDATE SOON
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Posted: 9 years ago
Amazin' update
loved it very much
u are an awesome writer
love ur all the stories
Manik was really hurt but now the monster is shaant!
Loved their romance a lot
the last par was beautiful
Manik respects her a lot!
Eagerly waiting for the next part

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