MANANFF:-UNCONDITIONAL LOVE(CHPT-5 PG9 UPDT)30/10/15 - Page 4

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Posted: 9 years ago
#31
Amazing update
Manik toh kch jyada hi rude hai...hr tym money money...pr acha hai agar aisa hi krega tabhi toh nandini sara tym uske saath rhegi shayad fir kch feel krne lg jaye...
Nandini ke enemies kon hai...malhotras toh nhi...
Lovd it
Continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#32
Thank u guys for appreaciatiion...
Ur comments gives me energy...
Will upload nxt morning aur afternoon..
Love u all..
Keep this love like this always...nd i can't thank every1 alag alag so...
Again thank u all of u...nd love u..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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CHAPTER-3

BREAKER VS MONSTER...

Nandini goes to his chair nd tied her handkrief all over the palm nd went towards manik's cabin.

MANIK'S CABIN:-

Nandini-may i..may i come in sir?
Manik-ya ya miss vase broker u can...but one minute..not like this...

Nandini-means?
Manik-means turn towards the gate go to kitchen area make a nice coffee nd take it to me as its the time for my coffee...nd jaisi coffee me pita hu waisi hi bna kar lana miss manager...
Nandini-ok...nd went frm there..


After 5 mins nandini comes with coffee...nd going very slowly to place it in sofa table...nd after reaching place it there...

Nandini-sir ur coffee...
Manik-ya coming..
Manik goes nd sit on sofa...

Manik-wow first time tumne kuch nh toda...now go nd check my schedule nd nandini started to walk hurriedly...

But she doesn't know this quickness again made him got in something..


As she started walking hurriedly,her leg turned brcause of carpet thread nd she fall on manik's lap...or i can say near his...

She in the fear closed his eyes tightly nd fisted her hand...but soon she realizes dat she didn't fall so slowly nd carefully,she open her eyes nd find manik staring at her nd she realizes where she is nd in which situtation...nd place...so she fastly covered her waist which was showing his skin as her top was little up ...
Nd immediately stand up...
Manik-wah pahle to tum sirf vase tod rhi thi ab kya meri legs todna ka socha tha..
Nandini-nh woh me..
Manik-ohh just shut up nd ye kaise kapde pahnti ho tum middle class ladkiya...
Nandini-matlab...aap kehna kya chahte h...
Manik-yahi ki tum aise kapde isiliye pahnti ho na taki aamir ghar k ladko ko attract kar sako apne body k through taki khud v is middle cls family status se bahar aa jao...how cheap u all r...

Nandini-mr.malhotra stay in ur limits..hm middle cls shirt kapde pahne to ye aur aap k cls k log pahne to fashion...itna difference kyu...for ur kind oinformation mujhe kisi ko apni aur body se attract krne ki jarurat nh...

As she is going to say anything further the door opens...nd manik's frnds entered and said him dat dis is the time of our practice for new song...

Cabir-manik..tu kha h hm 10 min se tera wait kr rhe h..aj teri puntuality kaha gyi..
Mukti-ha sry hm aise aa gye but hme lga kahi koi prblm to nh..
Alya-ya manik r u ok?
This concern of alya make dhruv angry nd he said..
Dhruv-dikh to thk hi rha...
Alya-tm kya kehna chah rhe ho...
Dhruv-yhi ki buddy sahi...h..
Manik-hold on guys...just wait for 5min i m coming...

They start to walk... nd leaves the cabin...manik also after gathering lyrics started to walk...

Manik-hey.,,u miss breaker kta invitation du tmhe chlo...tmhe pta nh at practice time mera manager mere sath rhta h taki yaad dila paye next kitna bje kya krna h...nd strted to walk..nandini also started to walk frm there...

Manik has a music recording room in his office taki wo wahi par jamming kar paye...

Manik enters with nandini...
Manik-hey guys meet my new manager...miss vase broker,nh nh only miss breaker...
Nandini-what...
Manik-nothing...just say hello to them ..
Nandini-hi everyone...
Nd every1 just chuckle..
But dhruv said...
Dhruv-hey hii...u r very sweet...this makes alya jealous..

Manik-so guys lets start...

Manik nd fab4 were jamming frm 30 mins but dhruv was missing a bit again nd again...nd by mistakenly nandini said something which make manik furious...

Nandini-mr.dhruv not like this u r agin nd again missing a bit...u r not playing right ..
Manik-ohh...miss breaker bhulo mat tm mere buddy se bat kr rhi ho ...hm paanch k alawa kisi me himmat nh ki hme hmari galti dikhaye ya kuch bole..
Nandini-nahi me to bus..
Dhruv-buddy chor na wo sahi to keh rhi h...
Manik-nh buddy...one min...me to bus kya miss breaker..tm kya btana chahti ho tmhe bahut knowledge h yhi na...
Nandini-nh me to bus..
Manik-me to bus kya...chlo ab tumne btayi h galti to pura tume bjakar dikhao..tmhe to bahut smjh me aa rha tha na kaha bit miss ho rhi h...
Nd gives his own guitar to nandini...

Nandini-nh sir ...
Manik-ho gyi oversmartness khatam...tm middle class sbko impress krne ki kitni koshis krte ho taki koi to fas jaye jaal me...a.

Nd that was it for nandini...she takes the guitar nd start tuning it nd after 2 mins...pls take position every1...nd went to main mike...nd atarted playing guitar..and it is the same tune exact not single bit prblm which manik was playing...nd manik is seeing her in amusement...after finushing he gives the guitar to manik nd murmures monster nd manik hears it nd gives a loop side smile..

And when he took his guitar his eyes got widen seeing blood stings and turn to see her hands nd find her palm is bleeding which is tied by a hanky...

MANIK'S P.OV :-
Ohh god...that means jb usne us samay safai krte asamay aahh..kaha tha pain me to mujhe laga ki wo jaan bujhkar ye kar rhi taki me uski taraf dhyan du..but nh wo sach me...ohh god but meei kya galti h maine kayi aisi ladkiyo ko dekha h jo meri taraf ye sb shoew krti h,choti dress pahnti taki me attract hu as i m the youngest millionaire..but sb ek jaise nh hote manik...nh hote..

Manik-miss manager u can go home today there is nothing that u stay here...
Nandini-but apki meeting...
Manik-i will handle me nh chahti ki tm kuch girao ya giro...
Nandini-rakshas...
Manik-kuch kaha tumne..
Nandini-nothing nd goes frm there


As soon as she leave fab4 in together says...
Cabir,dhruv,mukti,alya-she was fabulous...
Dhruv-ya buddy ekdam teri tarah bjati h...guitar v aur..
Mukti-u both r made for each other i must say...
Alya-but guys she is not of our class..she is...
But dhruv cut her in middle...
Dhruv-koi class se nh talent se aagey badhta h agr dekha jaye to phr me v usi k class ka hu...
Cabir-aur me v alya...
Mukti-guys stop it...
Nd dhruv nd alya me bahut der se notice kar rhi hu tum dono ek dusre taunt kr rhe ho..
Dhruv,alya-nh mukti nothing like that...
Mukti-r u sure guys...?
Dhruv- yes ,me to is liye keh raha tha becoz i like her...
Mukti-ohh...ho hmare shy bouy ko manager ji pasand h...baat aagey badhau kya..
Alya in anger-mukti...
Mukti-kya hua alya...
Manik-ya wht happen mukti is just joking..
Mukti-nh manik i m not..


This it for today.
.night me may be ek aur upload mile now just read it nd comment...nd guess aagey kya hone wala h...

Stay bless nd take care love karry...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#34
Amazing update
Manik ne kya class class lgaa rkhi hai...i likd dhruv aur cabir ne uski side li...nandini kabhi kya todti ho kabhi kya ab manik ki legs todne ka irada hai kya hahahahaha...lovd it
Continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#35
Ur story is taking u turn like dhruv likes nandini
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Posted: 9 years ago
#36
Alia dhuruv pls. Dnt b jealous 4rm each other pls.
Manik yr he is so after money
Everything is nt money na made him understand dis...
N ya pls. Nandini k enemies kisko b rkhlo bas malhotra's mein se koi nai hona ya fir manik se related koi nai hona...
N pls. Dnt separate dem...
Update soonest...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#37
Hey karry
Update was Good
Gosh yeh manik why he's behaving like this
Sirf class hi sab kuch nahi hote...insaaniyat naam ka bhi koi cheez hote hai
I na would be happy if you have made nandu to spill hot coffee on him instead of making her Fall... Tab samaj mein aata manik KO... You missed this chance re
Wow our doll know to play guitar as well ...its good future mein kaam aayenge
Chalo kuch toh concern dikhaya last mein by giving her leave
Update next one... Will be waiting
Take care stay blessed
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Posted: 9 years ago
#38
Thanks for the pm
Liked seeing this side of manik..now I understand why he is all rude to her
M loving how story is progressing!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#39
Awesome
Please update the next part soon
Tqvm for the pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
#40
Plzzz
plzzz
plzzz UPDATE with Lots of Manan plzzz UPDATE Eagerlllyyy waiting

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