MANANFF:-UNCONDITIONAL LOVE(CHPT-5 PG9 UPDT)30/10/15 - Page 6

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Posted: 9 years ago
#51
Finally u update manik realise his mistake
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Posted: 9 years ago
#52
Thanks for the pm!
I loved the update!
M glad that manik wasnt that hard in nandini today!
N in fact he was very nice and caring to her!
I also m loving her attraction n a bit of jealousy towards her
N his protecting nature towards her!
Hoping for more moments!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#53
Hiii karry
Finally you updated
Do u know how much I missed your stories... Impossible toh cliff hanger pe chod kar chala gaye not fair...
This update was actually worthy but haan don't make us wait for so long next time
Wow gradually Manan are coming close... Haha that full dress scene it was just superb...and that short dress... Jealous malhotra on duty haha...then when nandu said i can feel you... Wow its so magical... Oh now manik came to know that Nancy is orphan...hope he don't hurt her much from now
Anyways continue soon
Take care stay blessed
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Posted: 9 years ago
#54

awesome update...

loved it so much...

waiting for manan to become more closer to each other...

can't wait to see what happens next...

keep up the good work and continue soon...

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Posted: 9 years ago
#55
Amazing dark
Loved it
I think dhruv is just saying to make alya jealous
Continue soon
Love you
Ekta
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Posted: 9 years ago
#56
hey its NYC story.. plz update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#57
CHAPTER-5
THE UNKNOWN FEELINGS

NIGHT TIME-MANIK'S BEDROOM...

MANIK'S P.O.V.-

She is different...i didn't knw she is orphanage..but she is so brave...mujhse sorry bulawa liye..kuch to alag h..nd that feeling jb wo teen usko dekh rhe the..i just want to smack there faces..but uske samne ye realise nh krwa skta tha dat i was watching her warna usse pta chl jata ki me usse cctv k through dekh rha tha aur to aur ye v dimaag me aata h ki y was i watching her...? Jiska answer mere pas v nh h..and i made her change her dress by spilling coffee i was known ki coffee thandi ho gyi h so maine jaan bujhkr uspr coffee gira diya...aur jo dhruv k itna pas thi to pta nh mujhe kya hua maine ye nh socha ki fab4 wahi h i just pulled her..aur dhruv ko use touch krte hue dekh kr pta nh kyu but i was nt feeling good..and den hmari proximity nd she said she love him and then the song..nd jb hum car k pas the to wo feeling when i somehow delibrately touch her lips...it sends shiver...nd i just wanted to kiss her..jaise ki wo sirf meri h..pta nh kya ho rha...shayad me attract ho rha hu...shayad inflactuation aur kuch nh..i hv to take care...


NANDINI'S BEDROOM

NANDINI'S P.O.V.-

I feel something weird today...behave of him was different..shayad unhe smjh me aa gya..dat me us type ki nh hu jaisa wo soch rhe the..nd sorry...sorry bolne me itni prblm i never knew...waise jo v ho i was feeling good today...nd unki proximity..wo kareeb aana nd i was feeling like mere gaal itne heaten up ho gye h ki jal jayege..i was blushing...first time in my life...nd den my ringtone...i blurt out that i love him (the singer of ringtone/song)...i m so idiot..nd pta nh kyu mujhe aisa lga ki unhone jaan bujhkr mujhpr coffee girayi...but but he was different..unhone dhruv sir k hath se mujhe aise pull kiya jaise he was jealous by seeing him so near nd fab 4 v wahi tha nd he cared for me...something is wrong with him...nd car k pas hm kitne karib the wo touch in my lips send shiver...i think i m attracted with his this things..i hv to be careful..i can't av mujhe apna badla lena h apne enemies...i can't..
Bye thinking all the this they drifted to sleep...

MORNING TIME

MANIK'S CABIN:-

Manik tujhe usse dur rhna h...don't stare her,see her,care for her..tujhe yaad rkhna hoga...u r her boss...so be in bossy attitude...(manik self talk)...

Nandini ab tu uske cabin me ja rhi tujhe yad rkhna hoga tujhe usse eye contact nh krna h,dur rhna h,phn silent rkhna h,aur aur concentrate krna h sirf work pr...only work..tu yaha kam kene aayi h bus...nd he is ur boss...nd u r his manager...so be in manager attitude nandini..(nandini mind talk)

Nandini knocked on the door.
Nandini-may i come in sir?
Manik-yes nandini come in.
Nandini-sir,ur coffee nd newspaper.
Manik-ya nandini place it,i will take it..(manik didn't see nandini for once)
Nandini-but sir thandi ho jayegi kal ki tarah..nd stops,realising what she said.
Manik is also in that time only thinking about their yesterday's event...but his trance was again broken by phone call...
Manik in little bit angry voice-i said just place it their tmhe smjh nh aata...nd get out..

Nandini was startled nd was in verge of crying becoz of manik's behave...but controlled herself.

Nandini(in sad voice)-sorry,i m really sorry,i m outside.,if u want anything just cl me..

Nandini went out..
But manik is only thinking about her..

Manik's p.o.v.-
Me kuch jyada hi rude ho gya mujhe usse ache se bolna chahiye tha kitna kharab lga hoga usse but me kya karu...nh maine jo kiya sahi kiya me use hurt nh krna chahta hu to mujhe ye krna hoga...kahi mera attraction usse kuch or lag gya to..i m sorry nandini..i m sorry..

Nd start cctv footage on his laptop nd the scene makes his blood boil...dhruv is talking to her nd she is laughing..

Then realising time he come out nd said ..

Manik-Dhruv..
Dhruv-ha manik.
Manik-tu yaha..
Dhruv-ha wo practice.
Manik-ha to tu yaha kya kr rha h recording room me hona chahiye..
Dhruv-ha me wahi ja rha tha but maine dekha nandini was little low so me usse baat krne ruk gya..
Manik-bat?
Dhruv-ha bus kuch secret h hmara...Kyu nandini...nd ya buddy we r frnd now...
Nandini-yes we r...nd bahut jald hi close frnd ban jayege i know...as u r so cute nd pulls dhruv's cheek which only makes manik more angry...so becoz of annoyance..

Manik-agr dhruv teri secret baat ho gyi ho to kya hm chle...
Nd u come follow me..
Nandini-ok sir..
Dhruv is smiling hugely to nandini nd making some signs frm hand nd nandini was laughing or also making some signs...nd here me the manik malhotra wanted pull her smack her lips...this girl is just irritating me...ohh god.

This happens for some days...manik was feeling jealous but nt wanted to accept it...

After 15 days..

Manik-nandini i need ur help..come in my cabin.
Nandini-ok sir.

Nandini comes on cabin.
Nandini-may i come in sir..?
Manik-ya..
Nandini-yes sir,what happen..?
Manik-nandini wo maine fashion designer ko bola tha ki design submit krne morning me 2 hrs me meeting h uski kaha wo design..
Nandini-i don't know sir,wo to aap handle kar rhe the...but me phn krke pta krti hu..
Manik-ok..
Nandini called the designer nd come back.

Nandini-sir wo actually designer bimar h do din se nd wo complete nh kar payi h design..
Manik-oh no to ye baat use mujhe pahle batani chahiye thi..
Nandini-ab kya kare wo sochiye..
Manik-pls tum chup rho..jara mujhe sochne do...
Nandini-sir apko kis tarah ka design chahiye tell me..
Manik-kyu tum banogi?
Nandini-ha..
Manik-what..?kya majak kr rhi ho..mujje apna majak nh udwana h..
Nandini-me sirf madad krna chahti thi..ap bis itna btao ki kis tarah ka design chahiye aur phr apne contacts try krte rahiyega..
Manik-wedding dress in golden nd marron colour with best embroidery nd stones..
Nandini-ok..
Nandini went out.

Manik was trying to do something to come frm dis thing nd nandini was sketching dress nd here manik left for conference room.

Nd then..
After showing 3 designs of other company..it was manik's time..

Dealer-mr.malhotra show ur design..
Manik-sir wo actually..
Dealer-what happen mr.malhotra?
Manik-wo actually design is n..
Nandini-ready sir...i m sorry sir i m little late..
Dealer-its ok..by the way who r u?
Nandini-i m nandini murthy..manik's new manager..
Dealer-manager,then how can..?
Nandini cut him in middle.
Nandini-sir,first can we see the design...then u can ask me this ques.
Dealer.-ok..

Nandini opened the big chart paper nd show the design to dealer nd every1..
Everyone was amazed by the design.
Manik was numb as well as surprised.
Dealer-that is so excellent..hame aisa hi design chahiye tha..thank u for nt wasting time..nd cutting me in middle of ques ans..
So mr.malhotra deal is final..if u want we can sign the papers..nd tonight there is a party come with fab5 nd this young lady...
Manik-yes,for sure..nd thank u for the deal.
Dealer-oh don't thank..itne ache designs dekhne k bad koi pagal hoga jo aur kuch dekhna chahega..
Thank her ur designer as well as manager.
Manik-yes sure.

And every1 went frm there.only nandini and manik was left.

Manik-thank u nd i m...i m sorry.
Nandini-its Ok nd going out when manik said.
Manik-nandini be ready at 7 pm for the party.we will go together.
Nandini-no,thank u sir,me khud aa jaugi..

Nandini went frm there...
And both left frm office for party..

Here nandini get ready on a red gown which was blackless,matching accessories nd heels with very little makeup having tomato red lipstick nd eyeliner...nd manik was ready in her black tuxedo having red lining nd red handkrief.Hairs perfectly gelled up..both starts their journey while driving their cars...

Manik reached first to the entrance with fab 5 nd every1 was only gawking on manik...nd manik was enjoying this...but soon a car stops on entrance nd every eyes were now there...nd here fab 5 also turned back nd see dat nandini was getting out frm the car nd someone come nd held her waist...
Manik was astonished as well as angry..



Guys this is ur update...pls comment nd like it...it is a big update...so no cheating.nd yes if any1 want go give suggestion they can give us...for now i will say tonight or tomorrow morning i will update my 2nd ff dat is i mpossible...
So keep loving it..
Stay blessed take care..
Love u all who comment nd like my story..

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Posted: 9 years ago
#58
Now who is this new entry 😲 or may be its Dhruv 😕
Umm..please update soon.. 😛

Amazing chapter 👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
#59
Awesome update par manan romance nhi tha koi nhi party me to romance hoga hi n pls show some of scene where nandu will investigate about her enemies. Waiting for jealous manik n manan romance.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#60
Woww manik is jealous hope soon he relise his feelimgs

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