MANANFF:-UNCONDITIONAL LOVE(CHPT-5 PG9 UPDT)30/10/15 - Page 3

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Posted: 9 years ago
#21
I m nw here nd ur story line is nice...
Plllzzz do pm me whn u updt the nxt part
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Posted: 9 years ago
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CHAPTER-2
VASE BROKER/ARROGANT

MANIK'S CABIN

Nandini reached the sofa table and placed the green tea nd newspaper there..As soon as she turned again because of her hand another vase fall on the ground nd scattered in cabin fully...
(the vase on sofa table)
After seeing this manik become more angry nd furious nd started saying something..-
Manik-not again..tm dekh kar nh chal skti...phr se ek vase tod diya...tmhe pta h kitna costly tha ye...u u..poor people can't imagine cost of it...u...u get out of here now..
Nandini-first of all mr.manik malhotra..it was not my fault fully,, ye side me rkha tha nd hath touch kya or gir gya..manik cut her in middle.
Manik-to apna hath sambhal kar rkhna chahiye tha...mera bas chale to...aftr some seconds ab btao kaun pay karega iska price u poor middle class girl...
Nandini-mr.manik malhotra oh sorry arrogant malhotra...tmhare liye paisa hi sb kuch h na jb dekho paisa paisa...don't u stop playing only a record of ur money chalisa...itni bar agr shiv chalisa,durga chalisa etc padhe hote to kuch sense aa jata...
Manik-hey..u..
Nandini-kya u...ya i am poor middle class girl but i can do anything to pay for price for these..smjhe mr.arrogant...
Manik-r u sure poor girl...or i can say vase broker
Nandini-ya i m vry sure...and don't cl me poor girl u arrogant..
Manik-oh that means vase broker is perfect...
Nandini-u...arghh
Manik-don't forget i m ur boss..stop talking to me in this tone..
Nandini-ya mr.arrogant sir.
Manik-ok so u have to do...
Nandini-what...?
Manik-u have to do whatever i say u in coming 30 days including today..
Nandini-what..?
Manik-ya..
Nandini-me ye nh kar skti..
Manik-av tumhi ne kaha whatever i say u will do for paying the price of too..
Nandini-but...
Manik-darr gyi?ohh poor soul..
Nandini-u..nh me kisi se nh darti...
Manik-den good darna sikh jaogi nd he laughs evilly..aur waise v tum to outhouse me hi rh rhi ho malhotra mansion k show ur time starts now...
Ha ha ha..

Nd manik takes his chair nd said to nandini...
Manik-hey u...vase broker...tm waha khade hokar kya kar rhi ho..tmhare khade rhne se ye glass k pieces apne ap to saaf nh ho jayege...clean it..
Nandini-what..?
Manik-clean it..sunai nh diya ya bhul gyi kuch der pahle hui baat...and smirks..
Nandini-gaata to itna acha h but h pura arrogant...devil,monster,rakshas kahi ka..Nandini murmures..nd started doing cleaning work nd as she was doing dat by mistakenly a part of glass cuts her palm nd she hissed in pain but didn't say anything nd completed the work..when she completed her work...she went to manik nd said-
Nandini-sir cleaning work ho gya...
Manik-oh just a minute let me see...nd went there nd pour the green tea on the floor nd said to nandini-
Manik-ye dekho kaha clean hua h...miss vase broker..
Nandini-but sir...
Manik-tch tch tch..clean it nicely...nd again went to sat on his chair...
Again nandini clean the whole floor nd without saying anything manik walk outside the cabin..
Manik smirked seeing this nd thought now u will never talk to me in that tone...

On the other side nandini asked manik's p.a. dat where is her seat nd p.a. told him the way nd it was just infront of manik's cabin...she sighed nd went there...and ask one of his collague the way to medical room nd goes their to do dressing...nd when she enters their...saw a girl nd boy fighting with each other...girl is trying to make him understand something nd boy is not listening her talk...i again went some steps back nd collided with a person...
Nd i was shocked that it is mr.monster nd ge will again taunt me...
Manik takes him to store room nd locked it..nd said..
Manik-what were u doing there?
Nandini-nothing i just...
Manik presses her shoulders tightly nd said..
Manik-what just. Tm mere frnds k baatein sun rhi thi ...u stalker...make this clear to u mere frnds ko tmhari wajah se kuch v prblm hui to i will nt spare u..this is warning...
Nandini-but...
Manik-sshhh...ab jaldi se aao abv tmhe bahut kam krne h nd pushed nandini very badly that see fall on the groung the palm again starts blseding...but manik went frm there without seeing her back again...
Nandini-why aayippa why me...meri to koi galti nh thi...maine to bhul se baat sun li aur meri aisi aadat nh phr v aayiaapaa..but i will fight back me itne se me nh tutugi agr mujhe apne parents k enemy se badla lena h to muje aur strong banana hoga so i will fight back...nd wiped her tears...nd standing uo start moving frm store room...



So guys hows this chapter...comment big bjg nd likes too...i know thoda jyada hi rude h manik but arrogant matlab hi yhi hota h...nd aagey dekho hota h kya...
Those who want pm buddy me..


Love u all
Karry d
Edited by karryd - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#23
Finally read all part in a go
Oh me first to comment

Loved it
It was really awesome
Manik is really very rude but I know there must be reason for that
I really don't know what I said
But overall I just love doing it
Thanks for the pm
Love you
Ekta



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Posted: 9 years ago
#24
Karryd...dear
What to say now
I'm falling for your stories
It holds some unique concept
Just loved her confidence
Here Mr malhotra is akduu and ruthless
But Mr khaan he's gem of a person
Update soonish
Take care stay blessed
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Posted: 9 years ago
#25
The part was totally amazing..
Liking the story very much..
Please update the next one soon..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#26
Bt who is the enemy is dat anythng related 2 manik's? ???
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Posted: 9 years ago
#27
Bt who is the enemy is der anythng related 2 manik???
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Posted: 9 years ago
#28
Awesome
Pls update the next part asap
Tqvm for the pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
#29
Thanks for the pm !
Its a great update!
Manik is really very rude!
I hope nandini changes him soon!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#30
awesome update...
loved it so much...
its so sad to see nandu doing all these things...it reminded me of the spot days...
her hand is bleeding...hope she doesn't faint due to blood loss...if she does make sure manik is there and helps...make sure he also feels guilty for what he said and did...
can't wait to see what happens next...
keep up the good work and continue soon...

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