MANANFF:-UNCONDITIONAL LOVE(CHPT-5 PG9 UPDT)30/10/15

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Posted: 9 years ago
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So guys i m going to write a new story...it has many twists nd turns..
So stay tune ...
So i m giving character sketch...if i will get positive comments nd likes then i will start writing chapters...


CHARACTER SKETCH-

MANIK-A rude,arrogant,23 yr old boy,famous lead singer of fab5 nd ceo of malhotra indestries,fashion house etc..he has four friends mukti,alya,dhruv,cabir..these 4 nd manik together makes the most famous band of world fab5..now they hv one more friend name abhimanyu khurana...he has a very small nd sweet family including his mom neyonika malhotra nd his dad raj malhotra..they loves manik very much but hates his behaviour towards every1 except his family nd friends...
He also loves one more thing and that is his song's lyrics writer...who give life to their composition nd music...nd suits to his voice very nicely but he nvr able to meet her.
MUKTI-A tomboy girl,electrical guitarist of fab5,loves abhimanyu khurana nd going to marry soon with him..she was very much stressed becoz of his personal life but abhimanyu changes her life after coming in his life,mukti loves manik as a elder brother nd fab 5 nd abhimanyu is her life,her everything..
ALYA-A cute,sweet,most preetiest or .u can say diva of fab 5,she is a piano player,in a complicated relationship with dhruv,she is not understanding dhruv's p.o.v.she has a brother name harshad saxena...md of saxena textiles..
DHRUV-A sweet but shy boy,loves alya very much but now-a-days in inferiority complexes with manik as ge knows dat alya had huge crush on manik nd he thinks dat alya will leave him as he is not dat much cool nd famous as manik..but loves manik very much like brother..
CABIR-Most funniest,or u can say joker of fab 5,lives the life like there is no tomorrow,drummer of fab 5,mirror of manik's heart,he can feel or understand everything which manik is unable to say...wanted to meet lyrics writer becoz he knows dat manik likes her very much nd wanted to meet her...
ABHIMANYU-A joyful boy love to make every1 smile,takes all the pain of mukti nd gives her the happiness in place of pain,loves mukti very much,only heir of khurana industries...friends of other members if fab5 ,he also loves manik as elder brother..
HARSHAD-Not so evil not so good person,heir of saxena textiles loves his sister,nd thinks manik is playing with her feelings by not saying dat he don't love him..as no1 knows about dhrulya relationshi including fab5
RAJ MALHOTRA-Father of manik,loves him,want him to get marry soon
NEYONIKA MALHOTRA-Mother of manik,loves him,nd hate his behaviour towrds others except his family nd friends

NANDINI-A sweet,bubbly,multitasking nd multi creative 22 yr old girl,loves to do dancing,painting,singing etc...she is soon going to join malhotra industries as manik's manager,she is an orphan nd lives in orphanage but soon going to shift in house given by malhotra industries for their manager,she has some friends like aryamann,navya,rohan,etc..
NAVYA-She is dramaqueen or bestest friend of nandini...loves nandini very much,has a younger brother rishabh,who lives nandini more than navya,
ARYAMANN-childhood friend of nandini,only heir of khanna industries nd the orphanage in which nandini lives where own by his parents...
RISHABH-He is like brother to nandini,loves her very much..

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Posted: 9 years ago
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nyc cs
intersting to read
continue soon
stay blessed
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey...karryd nice character sketch
New stories are always welcome
Oyee dare not to wrap up ( impossible itself says I'm possible)
Good going continue soonish
Take care stay blessed 😛 😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Very intresting story line ...continue soon would to read more about ur story ...tc ...with lots of love and hugs
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Posted: 9 years ago
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awesome start...
loved the character sketch...
i think nandu is the lyrics writer...
can't wait for manan to meet...
keep up the good work and continue soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Pls pls update I just love the character sketch...!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome do pm when u updare
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Posted: 9 years ago
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So i m writing the first chapter of it...
Ye story ka sbse pahla chapter is about new starting..-new starting of nandini's life as manager of famous singer nd ceo of malhotra industries nd fashion house...

CHAPTER 1-ONE STEP TOWARDS NEW LIFE...


NANDINI'S PLACE(ORPHANAGE):-

Nandini is getting ready to attend her first day towards her new job which was more full of responsibilities then earlier jobs nd prestigious too..she wore a black nd white dress complementing it with a heart shape diamond pendant nd a musical note pendant,dangling heart shape earrings,a watch,a sunglasses,a black colour handbag nd a pair of heels...she saw her image in mirror nd after seeing 2-3 times she started to run as she was late..
Nandini'd dress nd accessories



As she was going out of the hall of orphanage,she stopped nd went a room..
IN ROOM-
Nandini-maa -paa,u knw na i m going to join a new nd no.1 company of world ...so give me blessings...
Nandini was joining her hands in front of her parents picture...
Nandini-and maa paa just believe me jin jin logo ne apka vishwas toda aur muje aplogo se dur kar diya me unhe nh chorugi...nd after controlling tears went to another room...
Nandini- mausi,i m going give me blesings...
Nandini's mausi-ha beta jiti raho but first do breakfast phr kahi jaan
Nandini-but mausi...
Mausi-but but kuch nh jao ..
Nandini-ok..nd after having breakfast..she runs to her car which she bought frm her savings frm her old jobs..
Nandini started the car nd after 30 mins she reaches the office...she very well knew about manik' punctuality so she runs nd taking lift reached to 2nd floor nd breathing heavily started walk towards manik's cabin...
But but but
Fortunately or unfortunately she slipped nd balanced herself but by mistaken becoz of her hand the most valuable piece of art a painted vase fall nd broke into pieces...nd after that which happen no one can explain..

The antique vase..



MANIK'S LOOK.
Manik-u who the hell r u?
U don't hv eyes or u r day dreaming..u know how much it cost,are leave it how antique it was...becoz of u it is here broken into pieces...will u pls tell me now who the hell r u?
Nandini-ur new manager...sir..and aa..i i m sorry sir...
Manik-tm logobki aukad nh h ye kharidne ki tmhare sorry se kya ye vase phr se thk ho jayega ya phr ispe jo maine paise lgaye the wo waps mil jayege...
Nandini- i m sorry..i m really sorry sir...iske badle me aap jo kahege me wo karne ko taiyar hu...
Manik stomping his foot went to his cabin nd started pacing here nd there nd nandini went to washroom..as there was no1 came to the office at that time so she thinks to wash her face..as she doesn't want ki ye sb kisiko pta chle...

After some time she came to manik's pa to take her work sheet nd read it carefully...nd checked the time nd sighed nd went towards the kitchen counter of office to make green tea for her new boss...she preapred it nd watched the time ,it was already 9:55 she hv to give him green tea nd news paper at exact 10 am so she started to walk to him cabin...nd after 3 mins she was outside the door...
After relaxing her nerves for 1 min,she knocked nd asked..
Nandini-may i come in sir?
Manik- ya ya come in..
Nandini-sir ur green tea nd newspaper...
Manik - place it their on sofa table me apne business wali chair par kuch khaata pita nh hu..so..go nd place it there...
Nandini started to walk nd manik was walking after her...nd after that which happens noone can register...


So here is the part 1..
Loves it or not...
Me sahi likh rhi hu ya nh..pls give ur comments big big nd likes too...

Who want pm buddy me ...
Love u all...
Love karryd.
Edited by karryd - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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CONTENTS:-
CHARACTER SKETCH-PG1
CHAPTER 1-ONE STEP TOWARDS NEW LIFE-PG2
CHAPTER2-VASE BROKER/ARROGANT-PG4
CHAPTER3-BREAKER VS MONSTER-PG5
CHAPTER4-SOME CHANGES-PG7
Edited by karryd - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice update dear
Very interesting storyline
Pls pm when you update next
Take care and God bless

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