MANANFF:-UNCONDITIONAL LOVE(CHPT-5 PG9 UPDT)30/10/15 - Page 5

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Posted: 9 years ago
#41
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Just read your ff nice concept
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Posted: 9 years ago
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CHAPTER-4
SOME CHANGES..
Alya-pls mukti bas karo..av i m not in mood to hear anything...
Manik-and ya me too..
Mukti-ok..

NIGHT TIME-
MANIK'S BEDROOM-
This girl amazes me,first of all she broke that vase then again a vase nd then land up to my..nd thinking about dat she was so near to him started smiling nd then realizes what he is doing nd changes the expression nd again started thinking about her...how she plays each bit clearly in same rhythm...
Manik's mind talk..-she is different,she is so talented,matlab itna acha guitar bajana its not so easy nd ek hi baar me tune pakad lena...
Nd thinking about all yhis he slept...


NANDINI'S BEDROOM-

Nd here Nandini is also murmuring about manik-smjhta kya h apne apko..jaise ise hi pure world me guitar perfectly bajana aata h..rakshas kahi ka...mera bas chle to..but usne mujhe leave achanak se kaise de di...kahi mere hath ki wajah se...aaahhj..nandini tu v na us monster ko sirf gussa aata h pyar ya care karna nahi...pyar care ye kaha se aa gya...ohh god nandini aaj kal tu kya kya bakwas karne lagi h...aajkl nh aaj hi se..uff...
Lekin ek bat to maine uski aankho me dekhi thi dat he was sorry usne mere palms dekh kr hi mujhe jaane ko kaha...aahh itna bura v nh h..ho skta h isi tarah react krta ho..ho skta h koi or baat ho..leave kal me btaugi usse...short dresses attraction...just wait and watch...


NEXT DAY-MORNING
MANIK'S CABIN-

Manik was waiting for his manager or we can say miss breaker...nd after some good 15 min she entered with his coffee nd newspaper nd very slowly go to the sofa table nd place it...manik was in washroom dat time nd as soon as she placed th cup nd newspaper manik comes out from washroom...nd asked to her..
Manik-who r u?wht the hell u r doing here...as manik was facing nandini's back..
Nandini turns to his side nd manik was shocked..
Manik-tum miss breaker..
Nandini-yes sir .
Manik-tmhare kapdo ko kya hua..achanak se..nd started checking her frm head to toe..
Nandini-sir wo apko aisa na lage ki me aapko ya pke kissi frnd ko fasana chahti hu short clothes dats why i,myself thought to cover all my body ...as middle class hone se har ladki ek jaisi nh ho jati ..
Manik-wo just a min..mera wo matlab nh tha pls go nd change...nd i m... i m..
(Manik's mind talk-bol manik bol..ek sorry nh bol pa rha h..its just five letter words sorry...)
when he was going through all this talk to himself nandini interrupted her...
Nandini-sorry...
Manik-what?
Nandini-aah ...u want to say sorry...
Manik-aa...haa..nhh nh
Nandini-sir its okay..i know its difficult for u to say sorry to any middle class girl...
Manik was feeling bad as she was again nd agin telling him the word which he used for her...so stop it..
Manik-aa...no miss breaker i mean nandini...i m sorry for my rude behaviour and all the things which i said to u..i don't want to hurt it is just dat...i saw many girls who throws herself on me...by wearing short dresses,coming close or for taking my attention do many dramas...thats why..i thought..
Nandini-sir its ok..i m nt that kind of girl...nd u r nt fully wrong but first kisi ko smjhane ki kosis kare jaanane ki kosis kare nd den ap koi thinking kissi k baare me banaye..nd about ur sorry,i will never tell about it to any1 as i know it is not easy for u to say sorry to a midd..
Manik cut her in between..
Manik-pls don't use dat word...nd i promise i never use dat word for u..
Nandini-ok...and ha koi sorry bolne se bada chota ya ameer garib nh hota...
Manik-u r right..now go nd change to normal clothes..

Nandini goes frm there nd changes into a dress which was showing her
cleavage slightly..

MANIK'S CABIN-
She knocked on cabin door nd i give her permission to come in..nd when she entered i told him to tell me my today's schedule..nd when she was blabbering i slightly tilted my head nd see her..she is looking gorgeous..or i can say..xxxy...
Manik's mind talk-manik wht r u thinking she is ur manager not gf...how can u..but desires...)
manik again started staring her nd she keep on blabbering..Suddenly manik stands up nd goes to her nd ..

Places his fingers on her lips...
Manik-sshhh..
Nandini-s..sir..
Manik-ha..
Nandini-wo.
Manik-wht..?
Nandini-nothing..
Manik-u r different nandini...u r different..ajtk kisi ki himmat nh hui mujhe ye mehsoos karwane ki i m wrong .but u..u done that..
He was slowly slowly decreasing the distance between them when because of wind a paper ball fall nd manik comes out from trance..nd was embarassed..nd nandini without looking him said..-
Nandini-sir i m in my desk,when u need me just give me a call..
Nd went fem there...

As soon as she went frm there..manik sits down on chair nd started thinking what just happen nd started smiling...nd think lets se e what she is doing in her desk..nd started his laptop to see her...nd saw dat the three colleagues of her near het desk ogling at her nd watching her very weirdly nd den manik started seeing only to the camera shiwing her only nd observes her dress frm toe to top nd started feeling bad as every1 is eyeing her cleavage..
So without wasting time he called her...while he was watching her every action In cctb nd knows she is blushing...
Nandini's phone..-kaise batao tujhe tuning started...as it was her ringtone...
Nandini-hello..
Manik-hello..this is me..
Nandini-yes sir..
Manik-i didn't say u my name then..
Nandini- i can feel u...murmured..
Manik-what ...
Nandini-nothing..
Manik-mujhe laga tumne kuch bola...
Nandini-nh sir..
Manik-okay come to my cabin with a coffee as ye thandi ho gyi h..
Nandini-okay sir..
After 5 min nandini comes to manik's cabin...
Nandini-sir ur coffee...
Manik- ya 1 min coming..nd dialled a number..
Here nandini's cell start ringing...kaise btau tujhe..
Manik-nice ringtone..
Nandini-ya i know i just love him..

COUGH COUGH...
Nandini comes to real world again started seeing floor...being embarassed ..
Manik-so kya keh rhi thi tum..
Nandini-nothing..dat i just love this song..
Manik-or
Nandini-or kuch nh..
Manik-sure?
Nandini-ur coffee..
Manik-ya ya
Nd taking it from her,he delibrately spills into her dress so dat dress only get damage not her skin...
Nandini-oh shit..
Manik-i m..i m..
Nandini-iys ok sir..
Manik-is it hurting..
Nandini-no coffee to thandi ho gyi thi..but i hv to change again..
Manik-go nd change it fast...
Nandini goes frm there nd manik smirked knowing he fulfill hos intention..

Nandini changes her dress and come to manik...
Nandini-sir may i come in.m
Manik-ofcourse..come..
Nandini-sir its time for u r practice...ur friends may be waiting for u...now she was wearing a white dress looking like an angel...manik stared her nd then said...ok..
Manik-chalo..nd start to walk...
While going to recording room nandini didn't realise dat there is water on flood nd she was walking fastly...nd she slipped...but at the right moment some1 caught her ...nd u all know who is he...none other than..

Dhruv..

Manik comea there nd found nandini on dhruv's hand get feeling very different...nd pulls nandini frm dhruv's hand...nd held her tightly nd asked..
Manik-u r okay na...chot to nh lagi..nd tum girne kaise wali thi nd saw the water nd started shouting..
Manik-roshan roshan ...
Roahan-yes sir..
Manik-ye pani yaha kya kar rha h ..nandini av gir jati..
Roshan-sorry sir yaha pani ka bucket rkha tha aur kisi k pair se gir gya..i m so sorry sir..
Manik-its ok tmhari galti nh h..but dhyan rkha kro kuch ho jaata to..
Rosham-ok sir nd leaves frm there..
Manik leaves nandini as he saw fab4 where seeing him shockingly...
Manik-chale guys..
Mukti-ha hmara to chlne ka mann h..waise teri timing perfect thi..like .ha...
Alya - mukti not again..
Dhruv-smilingly aisa kuch nhi h..
Cabir seeing manik irritated face said...
Cabir-chlo yar..
nd every1started walking..
Manik-nandini take my hand..
Nandini-no sir its okay..
Manik-i said take it...
Nandini-ok..
Nd they reached to jam room nd after practicing for good 2 hrs ..they all went to their home except manik nd nandini..
They attend some meetings...nd den again...went to cabin..
Manik-nandini ab tum ghar ja skti ho..
Nandini-ok..
Manik-aa..ruko bahut late ho gya i will drop u..
Nandini+nh mere pas car h i will go..
Manik-no its not safe..i will nd yeseave ur car here my driver will follow us..to ur home..
as it is malhotra's house..so...
Nandini-but today i want to go to my mother's home..
Manik-ok chalo will drop u there..
Manik started driving...
Manik-song start kr du if u r getting bored .
Nandini-yes...
Manik-ok

Manik on the radio system...
First song...kaise btau tujhe ..
After listening this nandini remembers her encounter with manik..nd she quickly changes the song..
2nd song raat akeli h bujh gye diye...
Nd she again changes the song...
3rd song..
Bheege hoth tere pyaasa dil mera...
Nd this was it for nandini she turn off the radio...nd started blushing...nd manik was just smiling seeing her condition..

Suddenly their car broke down...
manik-uff ab ise kya hua..
Nandini-sir let go nd check..
Manik-ya ...
Manik started checking nd doesn't find any prblm...
Nandini comes there nd after scrutinising go back to front seat take the water bottle nd poured into battery nd said..
Nandini-sir car garam ho gyi thi just wait for 5 min it will start..while doing all this she rubs her hand on face nd it becomes black near her liops..nd manik was eyeing it..
Manik slowly comes near to her...nd started rubbing it slowly from his thumb while his finger were touching her lips nd she was breathing heavily becoz of proximity...nd finger touching...
Soon there trance was broken by a car horn nd they came to real world..nd immediately sits on car nd drive to the destination...nd nandini tells him the way...
Nd den after comibng to entrance manik found that she lives in orphanage nd get startled..
Nandini-bye sir..
Manik-bye gud nit..
Nandini-gud ni8 nd swt drms..thnx for dropping nd caring about me..
Nd goes from there some steps..nd again turned nd smile...nd went in..
Manik drove back to malhotra mansion thinking about her..


SORRY SORRY SORRY for making u all wait..i was stuck in puja and all nd u all knw durga puja is main festival of kolkata..nd i m kolkataians so was busy in pandal hooping nd al..den dandiya nd parth was here so i can't afford to lose the chance...so sry for the late updte...will make it up for u all soon...

Love u all take care stay blessed...nd nd nd..
Comments big big wala nd likes too for next update..
Edited by karryd - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#46
Amazing update
Manik ko realise huya usne nandini ke saath rudely baat ki thi aur bht bura bhi bola tha charactr ko leke...hahahaha manik jealous wo bhi dhruv se...lovd it...continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#47
Waow mtlb ek hi din mein itna change laa dia nandu ne hey wait a sec kya kaise btau song is mein manik ne sing kia h ???
Update soon...
Pls. Dnt seperate dem...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#48
Awesome
They are falling in love...loving it
Tqvm for the pm dear
Please update soon
Take care and stay blessed
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Posted: 9 years ago
#49
Thank u sooo much for the Update



it was Awesome



plzzz Update next part sooon


and add more Manan scenes...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#50
Awesome update manik has started feeling for her dekhte hai aage kya hora hai.

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