MANAN DARK SS DARLING DISCONTINUE

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i am starting a new ff,it wil be love story but on top of that the story will have a negative part too,its not exactly a dark ff but somwhere between a love and dark ff,maniks character will not be a dark one,nor nandinis but some other characters will be

PROLOGUE

a couple was standing near a beautifully decorated
area,the boy was kneeling on his one leg and tuk a beautiful infinity ring out,the girl's face turned pale and shocked
boy:nandini verma,ever since i saw u for the first time,since that day i felt this attraction towards u and i always wanted to be with u but i ignored this thinking that it was a mere attraction,but now my feeling hold no patience when i realized that I LOVE U,nandini verma i luv u vey very much and wud happily live my with u even if all the joys of this world are taken away from me,u are enough for my soul to survive i...
girl:manik i cant...u know this,she crying now,i cant drag u into my hell,u dont deserve this,no one does,plz manik dont make this difficult for me
manik got up and kept a finger on her lips,then wiping her tears he said
m:nandini i love u,and love is not just to cherish to the happy moments but to be with ur love in their bad times too,i have accepted every aspect of ur life mine now,be it a gud one or a bad one,i have sworn to protect u till my last breath,i can sell my soul to the devil itself if it results in ur safety,plz nandini,u r not my love,ur my life now,ur hell is my heaven now and my heaven is nothing less than a hell without u,plz...
after hearing maniks such lines,nandini cudnt stop herself and hug manik tight
n:I LOVE U MANIK
m:I LOVE U NANDINI

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it was a dull evening and manik was driving crazy to meet his love,his soon to be wife,his nandini,he reached her house,but a strange silence engulfed him,ignoring the feeling he went inside to meet nandini,but what he saw there tuk his world away in a trifle
there laid nandini,on the floor with blood all around,she had been stabbed in the heart,her face was white and her skin ice cold
manik froze at his place then taking few steps ahead came near her and tuk her in a hug
m:nandini,wake u,wake up my jaan...wake up na,dekho na mai aaya hoon,nandini...nan..nandini..plz baby...plz plz plz plz...plz dont do this to me manik tried wking her up but when no result was achieved all he did was shout and cry bitterly
NANDINI!!!!!!!!!nandini...manik wiped his tears and said
m:i promise u i wont leave him who did this,he will have to pay,I WILL MAKE HIM PAY
just then a msg came in his mobile
unknown no:have sweet hapily lived life with ur beloved nandini,ohh,sorry,main toh bhul gaya,ab toh woh hai hi nai,i warned her,i warned her not to get u into this,but nai she didnt listen to me,toh bass apni galti ki saja bhari usne,agar nandini meri nai ho saki toh kisi ki nai hogi,kaha tha na maine,aaj pura bhi kar liya...
that was it,manik understud who did all this
u will pay for this,i will make u pay for this
HARSHAD
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CHAPTER 1

it was a busy day,like every other one,and there laid a magnificent resturant,with dignitaries and aristocracies visiting it,their aura and their wealthyness all too very visible in their body language,and just to protect the serene beauty from evil eyes,there was a chaul just behind it,just to add another aspect in the list of social justice</font>
the view was contradictary,the peacefull atmosphere of the resturant was disturbed by the voices coming from the dirty,damp,noisy chaul of mumbai, with labourars coming from their tirey day,sitting beside the samll tea stall and a dhaba,filling their noses with the mixture of onion, garlic, dried fish, pepper and spices making a potent combination.throngs of people can be seen at the dhaba. A beggar sits on the steps, arms outstretched, eyes leading for alms.the air had the smell of smoke in it,with the ppl sitting,chatting and having a lovely time,it was 6 in the eve,a man was sitting and sipping his tea,he was lost in his thoughts when the beggar approached him,he gave him 20 cents,and got back to his work
his sharp jawline,chocolate brown eyes,straight nose and a mystical appearance proved he wasnt an ordinary man,but his regualrity to the place posed a question on his character,yet no one dared ask him anything,the fire in his eyes was enough to scare anyone
the sky grew dark soon,the man walked down the wet streets of mumbai,there isn't a silence, here. The wind is gently blowing the sickly smell of rotted garbage from the pitch-black alleys that even the junkies are afraid to go into. There is no silence, and the occasional shadow of a person leaks across the roadway. There's the faint, tinny sounds of a nightclub up at the end of the dimly-lit block, under halloween-orange streetlights, and the hiss of the music fades into a kind of grainy wash that fills the street, seeping into the darkness between the pools of light on the dirty sidewalk,the man reached the bar,he tuk a seat and ordered something,he was observing a gang of ppl who were siting and gambling,and every other minute a member of the grp,wud stress his brows in the despair of losing money</font>
it was around 12 now,the grp member left the bar,the man followed him,the member was walking unaware of the fact that he was being followed,and THUD!!!!!!the member felt a kick on his back,and now he was down on a deary,lonely street,he in anger turned his face,but as soon as he saw the man,all his anger faded away,his eyes were engulfed with fear,and only one word excaped from his mouth
'MANIK!!!!!!!!
yes,that man was manik,he headed towards the member,picked him up with his collar and punched his face thrice
m:haan,manik,nandini ka manik...
manik grabbed his neck and pushed him into the wall,his head hit the wall and now blood was coming from there
member:ahh...manik,chhod de mujhe...plz..ch.chhod de..gal..galti ho gai thi..
manik smirked and said:galti!!!ek galti nandini ne bhi ki thi,yaad hai,lekin usne toh uski saja bhari thi na,toh ab tu bhi bharega...harshad</font>
h:manik chhod de mujhe...mat maar mujhe...main tere paer padta hoon..mani..but manik once again grabbed his neck,then from his left hand,he pulled his hair and his neck arched backwards,it was suffocating harshad,but manik didnt budge...
m:MAAR!!!!kisne kaha main tujhe maarne aya hoon...main toh tujhe tarpane aaya hoon...main tujhe tab tak tarpaonga jab tak tu maut na maange mujhse.parr nai,tujhe maut nai aayegi,jahanum bana doonga main teri zindagi...suna tune jahanum...and then manik started beating him badly,harshad was dripping with blood,all his body was covered with blood,just the way nandini was,when manik got satisfied he dropped him,threw a bundle of money on him and said
m:jaa...karwale apna ilaaj,parr yaad rakhna,main wapas aaonga,jab teri saari haddiyan jud jayengi na,tab aaonga,firse tujhe todne ke liye...with this manik started to walk and then
BANG!!!!someone shot him,he froze on his place and then fell down,it was harshad...
h:tch..tch..tch..tch...manik,tujhe sach mein laga ki tu mujhe hara sakta hai...nai kabhi nai,he kicked manik once and went away...

HOSPITAL SCENE
an operation was going on and one guy was sitting on the chairs,palming his head with his hands,he massaged his head for sometime and then called someone
man:guy...city hospital...abhi...haan,woh manik got shot...hmm...jaldi aao..he was talking when he heard the sharp click of the heals,the voice got more prominent second by second and it seemed as if the girl was in very hurry
man:guys...i..um..i will ttyl..come soon,he disconnected the call and luked at the girl who had her hands crossed against her chest and was luking at him
man:navya..i can explain everything..woh
nav:explain what cabir...kya samjhaoge..ki kaise tumhara so called frnd harr 2 mahino mein hospital mein milta hai,beaten up,kaise harr baar itni serious injuries ke baad woh theek ho jata hai...kaise harr baar uske hospital bed mein milne ke baad news mein ek murder case aata hai,aur kaise harr baar ki tarah uss case mein culprit kaun hai samajh hi nai aata...cabir chal kya raha hai
c:navya listen...i wil tell u everything..but not now..
nav:y cabir..kyu?cabir i am ur fiance.u get that,mujhe yeh janne ka pura haq hai ki tumhari life mein kya chalra hai,aur tumhari life tumhare frnds ke acts ke vajah se directly affect hoti hai...cabir i love u...and thats y m asking u tell me,chal kya raha hai manik ki life mein...
c:ok,i will tell u...but m warning u...its not a fairy tale story...
nav:does any of this luks like a fairy tale story to u?
c:no..but i mean that...it a ..very negative story...u sure u wont get affected
nav:cabir...main ek writter hoon...harr story ke tarah main iss story ko bhi ek STORY ke tarah hi loongi,i wont get affected
c:its not like any other romantic story...its different..


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devilkhushi thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Please don't separate them
Edited by devilkhushi - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awsome awesome awesome.. what a prologue.. loved it to the core..
Desperately waiting for the story to be started..
And please please continue..
Even I am a type of person who can't see separation..
But this time I will definitely read the story..
All the best and update the part soon..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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nyc update
but dont seperate manan
continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#5
U kno what...!!!!it's mind blowing and I read ur another ff too and I just love it !!I hope u don't separate MaNan pls keep nandu...!! And when I was reading it be that time only I was listening to hamari adhuri kahani song... and ur ff made me cry...!! Leave it but pls keep nandu I mean like re birth or same looking girl... cont soon... loved it
Edited by Pradishma143 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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It was sooo good..
Firstly the way u described the chaul wala part..
Then harshad and manik's fight..
And then harshad shooting manik..

The mysterious part is when navya said that har baar ek murder ho jata hai and all.. it was sounding soo damn interesting..
Waiting for story to get unfold..
And please please take this story the way u have imagined.. not the way others ask u.. u can add scenes if someone demands but the storyline should be according to u only.. (just an advise)..
Update the next soon..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome...amazing update
Pr nandini ko kya huya kiss glti ki szaa ki baat ho rhi thi...
Plz nandini ko maarna mat...wo zinda ho...
Lovd it
Continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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CHAPTER 2
c:this story is different navya...very different
nav:m ready...i need to know everything
c:ok...as u wish

(the narrator is cabir)

it was bright sunny day,and a man was sleeping on his king size bed,it was a huge room,the black curtains of the room were not allowing the sun rays to enter,just above his bed there was a huge picture of 5 ppl with the man sleeping,in the middle,the rest of the walls of the room were either occupied by such many other photographs or had pictures of differents instuments,famous bands and musical notes,on a black couch there was a guitar lying
there was knock on the door,but when there wa no answer from the other side the servent as instucted went inside the room,draw the curtains disturbing the man's deep sleep and kept the juice besides his table
man:umm...kaka...parde daalo na..neend arri hai
kaka:manik baba,uthiye,8 baj rahe hain,aapko yaad haina,aaj bade sahab ke office mein aapka pehla din hai,aur aapko office pahuchna hai 9 baje tak,harr halat mein
on hearing the servants words,manik realized he that he was now doomed
he woke up with a jerk
m:SHIT!!!!!!!!main yeh kaise bhul gaya..kaka!!!pehle nai sakte thhey
kaka:haha..baba main toh pichhle ek ghante se utha raha tha,parr aa uth hi nai rahe thhey
m:oh..sorry...shit!!office and manik ran into the washroom to get ready
manik got into his suit and was running down the stairs wearing his coat
m:kaka juice!!
kusum:arre manik,kya karre ho,kis baat ki jaldi hai?
m:dadi,m getting late,aaj office mein pehla din hai,oh god,dad!!!y,kya zaroorat thi iss sab ki?
ku:ohh...tabhi main sochoon mera rockstar itni jaldi kaise uth gaya
m:not funny dadi,ok bye and he gave her a kiss on her cheeks
ku:bye my jaan,araam se jana
m:yeah yeah,bye
m:ramesh kaka,jaldi late horra hai,kisi bhi halat mein i need to office in 15 mins,fast
ROAD
m:what the...!!!!yeh traffic bhi aaj hi lagna tha,come on dammit!!!m getting late...finally!!!yeh traffic hatt raha hai
as manik was passing the road his eyes fell on a petite girl,who was doing the job of the traffic police,whereas the actually policeman was standing besides her and was staring at her for clearing the traffic within 5 mins which he wasnt able to clear in 30 mins,mniks eyes met with her for a second and he felt some kind of strange sensation before that girl shifted her gaze on the traffic...ignoring the sensation manik got back to the reality
m:kaka!!fast fast...bass 5 min bache hain...dad toh aaj mujhe maar hi daalenge
kaka:bass pahuch gaye baba
m:ahh!!still 2 min left,luv u kaka and manik ran into the building,he entered the lift and before it opened he set his hai and coat,did the needfull and in attitude entered the office
as soon as manik entered the office every girl started ogling at him,and manik enjoyed this the most,true,he knew he was handsome,but whenevr he got such reaction from every girl,he enjoyed it to the most
manik entered his dad'd cabin
yash:oh...my lovely son manik!!!he luked at his watch,on time huh!!impressive
m:dad,u toh know me,mujhse koi impress na ho yeh kaise ho sakta hai
y:haan,bhai haan,zaroor,achha so lets go i will intro u to everyone
THEY LEFT
y:hello everyone!!!aaj main aap sab ko apne bete manik malhotra se milwana chahta hoon jo aaj se yeh office join karenge
as soon as the girls heard that manik malhotra was the son of the owner of the company,they lost all their senses,and manik,as usual enjoyed this to the core
y:ok manik,come meet...and with this yash made manik meet everyone,after a long meting session manik was taken to his cabin
he sat on his chair,switched on the ac,and was enjoying the cool atmosphere when his phone rang
m:hello
c:kyu be mere manik malhotra,kaisa jarra hai office mein aapka pehla day
m:chup kar cabir,thak gaya yaar
c:wow!!itni jaldi,abhi toh 11 hi horre hain,aisa bhi kya kaam kar liya tune
m:kuchh nai yar,saare collegues se mila
c:waah!!aur itne mein thak gaya??manik,tera kya hoga yaar?
m:tere pe subhe subhe koi kaam nai hai kya,yeh radio wale tujhe kaam nai dete ya tujhe bahar nikal diya
c:for ur kind info,main radio ka owner,haan tha woh ek zamana jab main ek rj tha,but now m the owner,toh mujhe koi bahar nai nikal sakta
m:cabir,stop irritating me,m already very tired,bye
and manik without even listening further disconnected the call
he had closed his eyes when a knock on the door disturbed him
girl:may i come in sir,manik was facing the wall instead of the door,without luking at who was it he called her in and turned around only to get shocked,she was the same girl whom he saw clearing the traffic,manik was lost in his thoughts and the girl understud it
n:ahem!!!hi sir,m nandini verma,ur secretary
and that was it to blow maniks senses away...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wooowwiieee.. amazing part..
Thanks for another dose of your lovely stories..
Manik aaj bhi late.. hahaha..
But I liked how u showed manik.. polite.. the way he was talking to his servants was very nice..
Nandini is manik's secretary!! What!! Interesting..
Will be waiting for more
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Posted: 9 years ago
#10
Amazing...
But plz dont kill Nandini

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