MaNan FF//The Ex's At War//Link for Thread 2 on pg 150 - Page 80

This wasn't that long!

it is very beautifully written thanks for the update

Nandini was bang on...the way she charged on Rewa...too good...pls make manik take strong action against Rewa...i want the same manik dor Nandini...his love his respect for her... 😊

Heyy...the starting was hillarious...i loved fighter nandu...n manik..he is one in zillion...using any opportunity to its best level is in his nerves only...i loved it so much... U r mindblowing... Waiting fr next... Plzz..cont. soon... Byee...tc...

so hi nehi sakti...
wanted to read more and more .
just luved it ...
the fight wid rewa ... so much of fun 😉

perweight se pit dia pati ko ...!! haww !!! 😲
their kiss ... superb ...

manini's drama ... she is too cute ...
her talks ... ole ole 😛

cockroach scene ... ha ha ... awsm awsm ...
and again kissi .. 😉 akhe band krlo ...!!

u r amazing ... too good ...

fabulous update ...

thankx for d pm ...
eagerly waiting
update soon plz plz ... 😳

bye . tk cr . stay blessed .

Update was long enough to fullfill my hunger for manan till the earliest next update!!

oh god how much i love u


updte cnt be decribd


awesum wld fall shrt as a complimnt



litrally u r 1 of d bst writers i ve cum thru


u shld try pursueing it as a career option


love it


hum toh aapke fan bangaye gi !!!!

I jst lvd d updt...
Cm on yar...don't undrestimate urslf...
D updt ws nt dat lng..
N u kno wht...I would hv lvd it evnr if it would hv been evn longr...it ws such a fun updt dat I didn't realise whn I finished rdng it ...

Cmng to d updt...
Nandini ne to rewa ka band hi bja dia...lvd dis avtar of our lws calm nandu...
Manan monents were fab...

N manini..o goddd... c is such a cutiepie...lv hr a lt...
I think cabir n manini togethr plnd d lift wala trick...
Such a naughty duo..
I kno manini wl bring hr parents togethr nyhw...waitng fr it to hpn...

Continue soon dr...
N lws gv us such lamba uodts plz..I jst lv them...

u r great...dear..update is awesome

Such an awesome update!!!
Of course Nzndu ka gussa was just superb!!
hahaha Icould see her nearly killing Rewa...and nobody could stop her until Manik.

Ahhh the kiss... the first Manan's kiss in Th Ex
It was so hot and beautiful...
Of course, I cannot ignore my Cabiraaa.. his dialogues nailed it as always'''
Manini also was cute and ahem ahem... following Cabira and planning to bring Manan back together.

Lift scene... the Malhotra's together...
Then the 2nd kiss!!!!

Please please update next asap... eager for next

Keep it up