MaNan FF//The Ex's At War//Link for Thread 2 on pg 150 - Page 78

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow didu...thank u thank u thank u soo much for long update... I toh wish ki it never stops...
Superb update didu... Full on paisa vasool concept... Sacchi mein no one can sit quietly when it comes or someone raise question on their self respect... Nandu did the justice... Rewa deserve what nandu did... I toh wished ki it would've be fun if nandu lit rewas's hair too...haha trash mein kuch ghande cheez hona chaayiye teh didu like ghar mein hote hai na vaise... Office mein kya honge sirf kuch papers aur coffee cups that's it... Ghar mein toh tamaatar.. Etc sab hote... Anyways bilaa uncle was just superb with his evil twin mukku... Nabbya... Didu aap sabke naam ka dajjiya udaa k tela rakhe hai kya.. Manan ke moments was magical... I caught Lil glimpse of impulsive soulmates... Wow manini's tooth break while eating chocolate...dad toh super worked up ho gaye... Wow didu I just love manini and her talks that ooouuu its superb... Kya embarrass kiye baby ne mamma paapa KO aaj mazaaa aa gaye... That lift scene I think its bilaa uncle and kaddu's plan... Fake cockroach its awesome... Then manik's dialogue to the little one ki baby close your eyes mamma want to heal your daddy... Its so cutee didu. Finally most awaited moment... First liplock of this story...continue soonish na pls pretty plss
I'll be waiting... Take care... Lovee you... Muaahh
Edited by Snehasn53 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome !!! Ha ha ha I still can't stop laughing ... That cockroach wala part was so funny I loved it plz update another part can't wait to read it...
Edited by abhilashaS - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Kaisa tha??? Super dyuper awesome tha...
Omg kya haal kiya rewa ka... hahahaha...
Maza aa gya...
Manini is so cute yaar...
Feeling like pulling her cheeks right away..
Cont soon..

LOVE,
AAROHI...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Kissi ka nahi pata.. But i am up awake..
Hehe.. It was cute.. Manini.. Our little cupid..
God i so desperately want them to be together..
I feel bad.. Manini ko kaisa lagta hoga..
Parents alag alag rehte hain..
But koi nahi.. Everything will be alright..
Will wait till then..
Update soon..
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Posted: 9 years ago
Diii...
Manik looked utterly confused but before he could manage to ask me anything, I took the glass of water kept in front of him and poured the whole thing on Rewa's head.
(That was a shock... Like I thought it would be manik on her target... Now the fun begin... Tawa rewa fry par padha thnda thnda panii)


No one had a clue as to what was happening but Cabir was the only one who found it amusing.
(As usual Cabir's! I expect him to make video)

Mukti looked at us like a finale of a badminton series was going on and she was awaiting a nail biting finish. Cabir had started laughing like a lunatic probably he had seen girls fighting for the first time.
(Best evil twins)

Rewa fast...get out of here before Nandini decides to dance on your dead body", Cabir literally pursed his laughter while trying to drive them out.
(Dance on ur dead body... Srsly...roflinggg)

Yaar I loved the evil twins... Like srsly nandini burnt aliyas curslsss!!!! Damn!

Sometimes you really behave more immature than my daughter", he snapped at me holding his forehead and wincing in pain.
( that sounds cute accuse nhi?)

How on earth is our daughter so comfortable with cockroaches when we are hell scared of it", Manik remarked annoyingly trying to hide behind me
(Matlab di app scenes kahan we dhoondh kar late ho...I can imagine the scene with her parents jumping like frogs)

Hawww healing process is getting heated up!!!

Update soonish di!
Its one of best ROM com fic I read till date...
And pm me diii and I am gussa u don't notify me about the update?

Stay happy stay blessed
Mishshergill
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Posted: 9 years ago
simply fantastic..Nandu's anger is justified..love how manini plays the cupid partnered with Cabir..awesome...writing..best was the trash dump on Rewa...Trash on top of Trash...:)
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Posted: 9 years ago
Oh wow
This is probably the best update ever
Oh my god I can't imagine I am commenting after reading it more than 3 times
Each n very section is just perfect
Ur writing story dialogue situations in it
Very thing is perfect
I just can't stop my self from praising u
Keep up the good work n never ever stop writing such amazing updates
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Posted: 9 years ago
Sumana di...
Uh nailed it...
Awesome update...
I thought ki phir se kiss miss...
Show wale kam the jo apne bhii aisa kar diya...
But at last uh did it...
Thnkew so mch...
okay...
babyeee..
tata...
cya...
take care...
stay blessed...

LOADS OF LOVE,
Your's Garu
Edited by _Samthanian_ - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Manini is such a darling!!
Rewa deserved that paper weight xD
But it brought MaNan closer so no worries!
Loved the update :D
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hahahaha yaar muhaaa u r awesome...


This father daughter had vowed to embarrass me publicly


Kya line finally kiss mujhe laga nhi hoga i was mad at u but end mai balle ballee kya update tha yaar sooo happpyyy

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