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Waghalekar

@Waghalekar

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Posted: 9 years ago

#781

It was awesome dude manik ka plan bhi mast tha

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ArSha_ManNan

@ArSha_ManNan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#782

Aww nandu kept hugging him n slept...
She wasnt even ready to leave him
I loved those lines abt trust
Aryamaan is a superb friend...
He helped manik so much
Nandu beating Manik ...hehehhehe
Manik's filmy song...oh god
Finally nandu ko vapas train par pull kar liya manik ne
Thnkz 4 the pm

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dhillon90

@dhillon90

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Posted: 9 years ago

#783

Awesome
Amazing
Superb update
U penned it beautifully
Toh abhi n cabir ne manik ki hlp ki all tym...
Manik aur uske songs hahahaha
Wowww Ab manik ne thaan liya hai wo nandu ko apna bnayega...
Manik kitna drta hai nandu ke bodyguards se...
Last scene was awesome...
Lovd it
Thnks for pm me
Continue soon

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Crazy8000

@Crazy8000

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Posted: 9 years ago

#784

Suprb update
The DDLJ part was awsm
Thnkx for pm

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vyshnavivaiga

@vyshnavivaiga

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Posted: 9 years ago

#785

Awsm update.
aryaman s rly a vry gud frnd.
nandu cuddling manik nd sleeping s so cute.
thanx fo de pm dr.
cont soon.

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Garima

@Luving_Gari

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#786

Nice...
Manik made Nandu enter train in DDLJ style...

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parthsamthaanvv

@parthsamthaanvv

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#787

I always comment but you have never pmed me ..

Sorry from now onwards i want comment at all ..

Sorry if I'm being rude but now it's too much

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apy1608

@apy1608

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Posted: 9 years ago

#788

Awww <3 ... Yrr seriously ... yeh ff pdkr bss ek bt aati haii... Aww... Shoo cutee :* :* ... N all the lines n philosophy ... I mean seriously so beautiful yr... N Avni dii... I hope u don't mind me calling you di...:D ... Whosoever you are yr... Hats off! ...Love your lines n kavya yours too... So perfectly you penned it! ;) ... Hope nandu jldi realise krle... Huh...<3 ...n manik's POV... So awessome..! ...love this philosophical manik...;)
Update soon!
N thx fr pm! :D

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riyasharma1112

@riyasharma1112

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Posted: 9 years ago

#789

This update was so amazing Soo cutee.. And that last scene heehe DDLJ wala just amazing .. Loved it .. And thank for the pm.. :) :)

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love_manan

@love_manan

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#790

Omg...omg...it was the best update till date...i mean how u always managed to write such a good and such a good thoughts...i mean u i just loved the thoughts...each and every thoughts were just jhakkas...

And finally manik bhar aa gaya...i love the way she beat him and the way she nuzzeled her nose in his chest...

I love the whole update immensly...and that song...filmy one...and she slept completely over him...goosebumps...

Love u dear...jakkas update. .ab tak ka best update tha ye...ek bar padhne se kam nai chalne vala mera...2-3 bar to padhna padega...

Thanks for the pm

...update soon...lets see nandu kaise manti hai

Lots of love

Manan