#3 MANAN SS ~ YOU BECOME MY STORY Chap21-140 New thread Hyper link-157 - Page 78

it was awesome...nd manik ka cheesy songs...update soon

Awesome
Ddlj moments
In all i loved it

Plz continue soon ...
Waiting for ur update...
Plz pm me also...
Luv ur writing!!!!! 👏

Wow loved it, especially the last part, haaye like DDLJ or may be like Chennai Express cause ganna bhi toh usi ka gaa raha tha.

thank you for the pm

awesome...
superb...
fab update
👏
awww,,,nandini n manik slept together😉
she was really in shock..
though manik felt hurt when she left but he didn't left her because hope always wins😉
nandini started hitting him🤣i was damm sure that she will do this once she wakes up...
he knows her vry well...he knows that it will take time for her to trust him again...cocoon lines suits her best👍🏼
this line of manik-"Because may be your life is not mine..but my life is yours!!" made me fall for him once again
manik and his songs...👏
Abhi I didn't knew this train belongs to your father in law🤣nice ans to mukti...but 'm shocked how come nandu's lady bodyguards
left manik so easily without any further investigation...
here again our beloved MM started with his cheesy songs...tera rasta mai chodu na...😆 btw i loved that song
n last DDLJ part was soo cute...
thanks for the pm n such a lonnggg update🤗⭐️

Superb update! just love your quotes
Anyway continue soon! :))

Pls Pls post the story na pls

plz do pm me ..wanna read the chapter !

Omg awesome update... I just love the caterpillar part!!! So cool it was... How do u come up with such quotes... Even I'm a fan of aavni di :D