#3 MANAN SS ~ YOU BECOME MY STORY Chap21-140 New thread Hyper link-157 - Page 77

Hehehe. Such a dramatic update. I loved how u explained with d example of caterpillar. The way they slept together in 1 seat...awww... Oh my god. His shayari

Simply beautiful
For first time I have no words
God bless

Just completed the last two chapters... they both were great... first they waking up together... nothing could have been better... but then reality is never what we want... and nandini too realized it... and to not risk being hurt again she just walked away... though she didn't want to yet she did... and then in the train... the strange guy was none other than manik... I was damn happy to know this... and then doing little sweet things for her... just great... even cabir and abhi were involved in this... then the train coming scene... it really was terrifying... and manik was more scared than her... but he saved her... great... loved the updates sooo very... and sorry for being soo late to comment... I rarely get time to read stories... anyways uh are a true rock star... uh are doing a wonderful job...

Wooow outstanding, fabulous n awesome update.u penned it beautifully. Oh I love Manik's song choice
Hahahahaha nandu kya name diye manik ko bandar bewakoof be aqal so funny...
Acha plan banaya boys ne.
Very very very nice update
Keep updating

wow!!!!! super duper update ...!!!
manik 's pov... awesome!!!
cabir n abhi are part of the plan... super...
nandu 's reaction is nice...
lets c wat happen next...
thanks for pm...

Ohhh god manan sleep together...
Manik hide nd seek game over...
Nd dat somg manik sang owsm yaaarr...
Last part DDLJ owsm yaar nice update
Update new part soon

awesome update
boy's plan was nice
loved manik's pov
manan sleep together
and last part was really awesome DDLJ part
cont soon

⭐️ this is so far one of my best... I would love to read again and again... Wow... Its really a beautiful update... Realisation is what matters and manik did realised that.. And hence he proved.. 😊 and yap,never did i imagined manik saying those lines..''Chahat hai meri..kusuur nhi hai...dil jasbatti hai majboor nhi hai..
Ishq ka hai naam badda..meine hai kiya kaam badda kar ke magar aadha choddu na...'' 😃 😃 😃 and m loving manik now.. Thanq for pm..

I really liked the story way to much
Quotes were really mind blowing
And Manik k cheesyy songs...hehehehhe...yeeh ladka kab sudhrega...
Awesome awesome...




Thanku for the pm dear...
Update soon
Loads f love and regards

Pm it too me as well... Plzzz o plzzz :'(