Okay ... Firstly toh thank u soo much fr the pm ... Nd sry fr nt commenting on the last update ... Actually kuch confusion ho gya tha ... Toh Sry again ...
Now coming to the update ... I really loved this Manik's pov ... It was very much needed ... U know I was very shocked when u mentioned tht she was lost in her thoughts n was about to slip down the train after listening the horn n all ... Bt bt bt hamare Manik k hote hue Nandu ko kuch ho sakta hai kya ... Thank God he followed her n saved her in ryt tym ...
Tht moment matlb I seriously can understand what they both must b feeling ... Nd the way she reacted when she saw him ... It was clear tht she was scared ... Scared to Hell thinking she would have loosed him ... The thing he was talking abt was fear ... Bt tht fear was of solely loosing him in her lyf ... More than loosing her lyf ... She was hugging him tight n was assuring herself tht she was safe ... Safe in his arms nd is with him ... He was there with her ... In his lyf ... She didn't loosed him ...
He took her to the seat still holding her tight n its then she was nt ready to leave him so he was also there fr her ... He went to her seat with her so tht his lyf ... His love b alright ...
He held her in his protective n love filled arms close to him to clam her down n make her sleep ... Nd now he was feeling her behavior strange ... As he expected her to shout on him ... Beat him bt she was there sleeping peacefully over him ... Nd then he was lost in his thoughts having her over him ...
I really loved ur tht caterpillar example ... Seriously the way u described it was amazing ... I really loved it ...
Nd then comes the flashback to clear all our doubts bt what actually happened ... So the boys knew it all frm the beginning n they r now on his side ... He he he he ... He was watching her all the tym ... Being jst beside her ... I must say well planned ...
I really loved these lines very much ... Seriously kaise likh leti ho yaar aap ??? Kaise ????
Life is just one-chance..one-chance..to be you..to see you..to love someone..to breath..it's just one-chance..and you just can't let it go!!
So I was here to make my love my life...
Make her mine..as I was hers...
Make her waves mine..and my star's hers...
Make her shine mine..and my smile hers..
Make her breath mine..and my beats hers...
Make her My Story..because She is My story.
Beautifully written ... Must say ...
Nd then she woke up ... Saw him n everything registered in her mind ... Nd thts when ninja Nandini Murthy came out n she started punching n beating him fr playing with her ... N Manik accepted it all ... Another line I loved was what Manik said her
Because may be your life is not mine..but my life is yours!!
Yes ... His life was hers ... He has given it to her fully ... She was the only owner of him his lyf ... His heart ... His love ... Everything ... She was his story ... N now he will make her recognize it too ...
He loves her annoyed pouts more ... How cute ... Accepting her fully ...
N then in the morning ... He finally decided to end the hide n seek game nd to face what he is here fr ...
Tht song ... Ohh God it mached the situation amazingly ... "Tera Rasta Me Chodu Na ..." Another one of my most loved scene ...
So another addition to this train scene ... First DDLJ then Jab We Met thn YJHD then CE n now You Became My Story ... He he he he he ...
I soo sooo sooo loved this update ... I hope u'll give Nandini's pov on this whole happening ...
Waiting fr the nxt update ... Seriously I loved everything ... Everything single thing in this update ...
Plz plz plz plz plz update the nxt part sooonnniishh ... Can't wait fr it actually ...
Edited by Sm0405 - 9 years ago
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